I'm so worried that he's going to start using.  And if Bella's not there for him... I hope everything works out.  :(

I love the way you write Edward's point of view.  I can't really put my finger on why, exactly, but I think it's really powerful. 

Thank you for writing and sharing this amazing story!  I can't wait to read more!

Oh God, that was hard to read, but I figured it was coming. Id rather have him do this then fall off the wagon. So sad.

oh .... :(

But saying that this is a brilliant chapter! So real and powerful! I hope they sort things out soon !

Umm.  Yeah.  Usually it takes a lot for me to cry when reading something, but you were successful  :(

Maaaate, the number '18' is basically my favourite number in the world, but chapter 18 made me mucho sad :(

Edward WTF are you doing!?!?!?!?!? I seriously wish I could reach across the computer screen and slap you silly! How could you push away the girl you love more than life itself, knowing that you want her to be with you because you're scared of how you'll live without her?

Poor Bella...she's put alot on the line to be with Edward, not the least of which a now strained relationship wtih her father. :( I get why Edward's doing the things that he's doing, but it still sucks for them both to read it.

 

Oh. My. God. I feel so bad for both of them.

your writing is incredible...if you ever decide to write an original fic please let us know!

the break-up reminds me of the one in Good Will Hunting...and, personally, when I was dumped by a guy I loved:( 

it was years and years ago, but this chapter brought it all back

Oh no, no, no, no...We all knew this was coming.  Edward just breaks my heart, but damn girl can you write!  I can really feel what Edward is feeling and I understand where he is coming from.  If you have ever known addictive personalities, this is it.  You are just spot on and the writing is just amazing.

 

This is heartbreaking, but he will probably have to relapse or go to therapy to really become a "whole" person again, or who knows if he ever was?  He has A LOT of work to do on himself.  And poor Bella, she just got caught in the cross fire.  But she is young and needs to pursue her dreams too.  This is painful, but seems like it is much needed at this point.  And I am a true believer that love does conquer all and if they truly love each other they will make it through.

 

Well i just rambled on didn't I? ha ha!!!  This story is just beyond perfection for me.  Your writing style is one of THE BEST out there.

I had a pain in my chest this whole chapter and that ending was just tragic.  I am so sad, but I felt something ominous coming with a while now.  God, poor Edward - he's really messing things up and he knows it, but can't seem to stop himself.  Please let him stay on the straight and narrow though, I couldn't bear to see him fall off the wagon - I think it would break my heart!  And Bella, this will crush her, but make her unbearably angry as well.  *sigh sadly*

OH MAN!  *shakes fist*  Damn you, Edward.  Is it horrible that I want to slap them both for not really talking to one another?

You wrote a gutwrenching chapter.  It was done brilliantly.  Continued success!

Oh Ms TB

I am crying for them both.  Poor Insecureward. He makes me so sad and now he's throwing Bella away because he can't deal with his feelings for her.  How's Bella going to cope. I hope she goes psycho on his arse, but I don''t think she will.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Annette

Damn It!  I knew this was gonna happen!! Oh, so sad - I dropped a couple of tears.  He pushed her away . . . ugh!!! Let the angst begin! 

Shit, I'm so worried about Edward now - his sleepless night with her, the push away, missing the meeting - he is going down - oh, this is gonna be so hard . . . ugh!

On the flip side was so excited to see on ADF that you had updated so quickly - damn girl you made my day -

Love you story -

thank you for sharing!!

Aly