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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

hmmm....i think i might be speechless. lol that was a very WOW first chapter!

Reviewer: Snuze (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 18

omg! what a place to leave it! I'm on tenterhooks... hope it is not too traumatic, but i have a feeling it might be. 

Reviewer: StupidLeeches (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 18

omg Edward! I don't know if I want to hug him or beat the living daylights out of him. I "get it" but then again, I don't. I feel so bad for him, that he can't allow himself to be happy, to 'heal'.

And poor Bella. She's caught in the crossfire of his struggles. 

It's like you could see the train wreck coming from a mile away but you don't stop the car, you just keep heading toward it. 

And uh oh, Jasper is gonna freak when he finds out.

Sigh. Poor Ed. I want to fix him.

Reviewer: Snuze (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 8

I am really enjoying this story, i have never read anything like this before. fascinating characterisation and very well done too. So convincing. I am also glad to learn that there are other people out there who can't share their food! I thought i was the only freak who is so funny about sharing.  

Reviewer: summerlake (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 18

Knew this was coming, still breaks my heart.he is still a mess, can't even tell her how he feels truly. Great story, rec from AG!

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 18

Oh no, what a horribly painful cliffy.  I really hope you can post again soon. I'm thinking Charlie is gonna kill Edward after all.

Please post again soon;(

Thanks so much for writing;~)

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 16

tied up??!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 15

oh my, things are so tenuous with his emotional well being.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 14

That's some steamy stuff there. Me like;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is a great read, I really feel for them and their anxiety with to have or not to have, kinda like to be or not to be [together], and very symbolic but in a realistic way the difficulties that E&B faced in twilight

Reviewer: Sewpark (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 18

Breaks my heart. Edward needs to get her back!

Reviewer: eliza41 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 18

This story is so well written. I started and couldn't stop. Have circles under my eyes to prove it. This last chapter was difficult - sure it was also difficult to write. Please don't leave us hanging like this for too long. You are causing me to lose more sleep. Lol. Great story - really enjoying it.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ya know, I think if he finds out about Seth & her relations with him, it might put him out of sobriety. I just think that is something that would break him & not much else.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 9

Okay, that was kind of disturbing her relations w/Seth. I guess I've always been a little to serious for the casual f**k.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

Awe, that was like a cute meet or is it meet cute? The'd already met but ... some how this was like a first. Sweet<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

They need each other [B&E] but I don't think Edward is in anyway ready for a relationship, after his sharing, it just shows how fragile he is right now.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

He's awake. So he wasn't stalking,  yet...;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 3

ummh, who's stalking who?

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

Another great chapter, thanks for writing, I'm enjoying reading it.:)) The cannon's are different, I'm liking this Seth.

Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, messed up & aware of it, that's ...I don't know, rough. Nice he had the sense to get himself help. And the randomness of all his sexual escapades, I'm thinking there's an army of little Eddies' out there. Yuk

Reviewer: Jillv2 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

Trying to wait patiently for the next chapter. But, what a cliff hanger!! I love the book. Amazing writing!!!

Reviewer: nathansmomma (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 7

I couldn't keep the smile off my face either!! lol they're so cute!!!...and awkward.

Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

OMG im in tears!!!!!!!!!! poor poor Bella...but I know where Edward is coming from. he is so scared...ugh i cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Jenny Jerkface (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 18

This story is incredibly well written and thought out. In short - excellent.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: soffia (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

oh boy not that I am surprised

like a car acccident waiting to happen you see it about to happen  you  cringe and watch anyway

al-anon?

bella is naive edward is broken

 

so sad

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