OMG OMG OMG....this is sooo great!  Can't wait until the next update...UGH!

Edward, you horrible douchebag!

I'm so mad at Edward right now, I can´t even talk!

 

omg this is freaking heartbreaking

Amazing....

Damn.

Damn, I thought the last chapter was heartbreaking.

Pretty dark, but I love it so far... Thanks for the chapter 1 :))

I have just finished your story, and I cannot believe how much I love it. Everything in it is perfect... the writing is sublime, so sparse, so accurate, so essential and yet so powerful.

Edward... what a wreck of a human being. He is so seriously broken, and it hurts how hard he's trying to put himself together, how much he despises himself, how guilty and inferior he feels. I cannot decide whether he truly loves Bella, or he just needs her, like another drug... his neediness is heartbreaking, like when he asks her to tell him she loves him. It totally makes sense what he does in chapter 18, even if it really makes no sense. I am seriously scared for him now  it seems inevitable that he's going to fall off the bandwagon, and i don't want him to, I care too much [angst]

I love it that you dont feel the need to constantly remind us how gorgeous he is- we know it, we get it, we glimpse it from how confident he is in his body.

And Bella... she's amazing. I mean, she's really innocent, in a way that few authors have managed to convey. She's an intelligent (both intellectually and emotionally) woman, very self aware, very mature, who is beautifully, realistically pure. She shines. Her hurt, her fear, are my own now.

 

Where do they go from here? I hope we have another chapter soon, I am dying to know. 

 

thanks for this amazing story.

Just...............................wow!

Best WT chapter so far. It actually took me so long to review because I don’t know what to say other than “zomg”. You’re one of those authors that seem to have a very clear idea of what they’re going. I like your writing so much it doesn’t bother me the slightest that this is in the present tense, and I never thought I’d like that you know?

 

I’m a BIG sucker for Edward’s “I can’t do better and I can’t see how she could do worse” angst. It’s very canon of course, but Edward’s concern about meeting her family also kinda reminded me of Wide Awake’s chapter 41, which I also adored. It was a good idea to have the break-up in EPOV, because we could see why he did it, how messed up everything was, but of course that didn’t stop us from feeling Bella’s pain. Poor girl, not being able to understand what happened.

 

On the one hand I can’t wait to see how it’ll go from here (this chapter has proven that this is not a predictable story) and ZOMG I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT PLEASE STOP HAVING A LIFE AND GIVE IT TO US OMG. However, I’m honestly dreading it. I feel so sorry for poor Bella. Like, of course we had expected there would be a fall out (e.g. when she said she was imagining him meeting the new friends she’d make we knew things wouldn’t be so easy), but I’m afraid the next chapter is going to be so sad… I wonder if Seth will be her rebound, and if Edward’s gonna find out hmmm.

 

THANK YOU SO MUCH for this deliciously angsty chapter that made my stomach hurt (wtf’s wrong with me)

 

very intriguing...still can't figure out where things are going. i like that.