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Reviewer: agusap (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh my God, this chapter killed me. I can't even...
There're very few stories that affect me so much that make my stomach lurch and make me feel sick when the characters go through a break up; This is one of them.
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
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Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
thats really sucks !
Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was heartbreaking to read. I'm still crying over here. Thank you, for such an amazing chapter.
Reviewer: slpchic (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
uh oh Edward fell off the wagon. not good my friend.
Reviewer: MissCherrie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
*sigh* Not gonna lie, you broke my heart with this chapter Talula! Not only have they not talked even once and stayed apart for over 8 months, but he's using again! I mean I knew he would relapse (though I hoped he wouldn't), I just didn't think it would be for this long. Now he has to start all over again! And to top it all off I have to put up with Jake...ugh! Please oh please don't have them get together, I think I'll cry if they do, and of course Charlie is encouraging it! Ugh, sorry I'm just not a Jake fan! At all!
Of course your writing was just as beautiful, and thought provoking, and heart wrenching as always! I'm such a wuss when it comes to angst, lol! Thank you for the update and I don't know whether or not I'm anxious to read the next chapter...I'm kinda scared!
PS- I recc'd you to The Fictionators, 'What Fic Pwns You' and they chose my entry and posted it on their blog last week! Hopefully more people will get to read your lovely story... :)
Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 19
uh oh :/
I honestly wasn't expecting an edward relapse...maybe he's drinking an odoul's? lol wishfull thinking perhaps but..ugh. bummer.
AWESOME CHAPTER :)
Reviewer: GarbageHeapRose (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 19
Absolutely brilliant. Each and every chapter. I look forward to every one. :)
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
Amazing chapter.....the pain is so palpable, the disappointment so real.
Reviewer: FunmbiE (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 18
DEVASTATION!
1. "Like I've done some nasty shit to people, and maybe that made everything out of whack, and now I'm just waiting for it to come back around to me. Like retribution or penance or something." --poor thing...thats gotta be scary...waiting for karma
2. He's so scared to lose Bella...he's going to push her away first :-(
3. "I shouldn't have done this." I know it's me speaking, but I feel like someone sitting beside myself. I feel like an observer, not an actor. "I have to, I have to focus on my own life right now. I can't be worried about a relationship."--*GASP* Edward?! How do we come to this?
*SIGH*
Reviewer: Chicklette (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 19
beautifully described, as always. especially love the moment when she sees him drink. Just perfect. thank you.
Reviewer: soffia (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh crap unfortunately I know this story well...so hard to love an addict...flying blind without wings it makes me want to cry
Reviewer: ybee (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh Edward. Ohhh Edward. I'm so disappointed, haha. Yet, I can't help but be so fascinated in WHY he's acting like this. I hope the next chapter is an EPOV because I really want to know what's going on inside this guy's head and WHY he's drinking again. It seems like too delicate of a situation to be non-alcoholic beer. I just can't help but hate Edward a little and a lot in this chapter, haha. Can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 19
Reading this now is sooo bittersweet...I love this, but ugh....right now it's heartbreaking. I was prepared for the angst of Edward leaving...but the cold indifference to Bella, esp after she poured her heart out in such a beautiful gut wrenching way...a sneer? Oh my...I wasn't prepared for that. You really are an amazing writer, even if what is going on right now makes me want to cry in the corner of a dark room...
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 19
OMG no! I am bawling like a baby now. My heart is breaking. How could he?! All that hard work and heartbreak for nothing?! I can't wait to see how you fix this ( at least I hope you are<cry>)
Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm so confused why Edward sneered, why he didn't reply to her letter. but WOW, seriously amazing chapter. You also moved the story forward perfectly, I'm glad it's gone forward 8 months, very appropriate. Such an angsty chapter, will Bella confront Edward in the next one?
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 19
I actually cried for poor Bella. Wow. So many, many questions. What has Edward been up to?????
Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
Like your style, thank you for the chapter! ^_^
Reviewer: melstermomof3 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 19
As always, beautifully written, but yanking my heart out!!
Reviewer: hissmiles (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 19
It really broke my heart.
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 19
I guess I do not understand. And I guess if understanding would mean that I would comprehend how "everything" could become "nothing" in the blink of an eye and how you could love someone and be so happy and just throw it all away, then I do not really want to understand. "It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all" does not work here. I think it hurts more to find your heart and then have it ripped from you than never to have found your heart at all. He was not taken from her; he took himself from her. And she did not lose him; he threw her away. Very sad.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
*sob* Nooooooo!!!! *sob* This is so sad. Edward trying to forget?? *sob* Bella isn't going to end up with Jake is she??? Sad.
Reviewer: macton1 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 19
AHH! WHAT?! I need an explanation very very soon please?! I mean, realistically, I expected him to relapse at some point, but I can't stand waiting to hear his point of view on all of this.
Okay, now that I'm done whining, I must tell you that I love this story and I think it is very well written!
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
um. wow. dark. realistic as always, but/and very bleak.
Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just finished the first chapter, and must say that I am VERY impressed so far.
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