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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 8

Hmmmm... Sad

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 19


Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 19

dying right now. Why is Edward determined to drive her away & become exactly what he doesn't want to be. Makes me incredibly sad.

Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Getting along.))))

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 19

Rats. I was really hoping you wouldn't go there. Relapse sucks but I guess it's part of the story . Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: PeepToe (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 19

oh that is such a cruel way to end a chapter!!!!! Your writing of Bella's heartache is so vivid and puts us all right there with her. We've all lost someone in one way or another and it is exactly like that--the torture of letting go of what you want and recovering from broken dreams. My stomach bottomed out when she saw him drinking at the bar!!  You wrote that scene so vividly that it was like being there--like a Hitchcock movie or something. Really a great story and my only complaint is that it is so sad and unresolved until the next chapter! Please update soon? In agony here....

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

heart is breaking for both of them

Reviewer: Dazzling_Midnight_Sun (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

This chapter breaks my heart. I've lived through that gut wrenching heartbreak and I could feel it all over again with Bella. I'm really hurt for her, for the letter, for Edward. This is a beautiful story and I really am hoping for an HEA but I know you'll do whatever works best for your story. Not all stories end with an HEA in life and this story is very life like. So I'll trust you to do what works best for your story and your characters.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 4



Reviewer: cecpet (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 19

Heartbreaking and insightful. The pain of seing someone you love relapse and to try and understand that you can do nothing to change another persons behaviour. I do hope he wants to change and that Bella stays away if he doesn´t. The saddest outcome of this story would be them toghether and him still using....

Reviewer: DivaKiki (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

I am such a lurker. I have been on this site and obsessed w/FF for about 6 months and I never comment. I know, I'm a bad girl. Anyway, this story has thrust me out of lurkdom because... damn this sh*t owns me! You are an amazing writer and a true talent. A small part of my past relates to this relationship with all its angst and it is very realistic and heart wrenching. Again, this is so wonderfully written I cannot even give you enough praise!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 19

wow, this story is continually just amazing me!!!!! Seriously you have this ability to portray pain and heartache so well.

Reviewer: twizzmom (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 19

Jesus. I am wrecked. It is a testament to how good your writing is that I too emotional and speechless to writ much of a review.

Reviewer: smackers18 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 19

ahhh I knew a set back was coming.... what a dumbass... cant wait for the next chapter!!! Hopfully he gets his head out of his ass soon!

Reviewer: One_Cent (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 19

My heart is breaking for Bella  - and for Edward - Addiction is an ugly thing...

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 19

6 or 7 chapters to go, does that mean that I can hope that this will turn around soon?  I guess it was only one chapter ago when Edward couldn't help himself and self destructed.  Why did Edward have to go away in New Moon? now it is almost a prerequisite in all the fan fiction that Edward take it upon himself to leave.  I will have to hang in there and hope for a HEA.  I may not like the direction at the moment, but have to admit that you are quite good a weaving a tale.

Reviewer: Denny52 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wow, shades of "New Moon".  You're a wonderful writer.  Love this story and it's reality.  You definitely know a lot about addiction.  So real.  I ache for Edward.  So lost.  Looks like the illness is running the show right now.  The real Edward, the Edward we love in this story, is so helpless in the throughs of his relapse.  He's in there somewhere watching it all happen, hating himself.  So, so sad.  I wonder how he's going to get it together again.  No money for rehab and most definitely not doing AA.  I'm thinking jail or the hospital.  Who knows .....  I do know that he can get on top of it again and I have faith that you will get him there.  Can't let that ffing disease win again!!!  Poor Bella. Her love will help her understand.

Thanks for giving us this great story.  Waiting with everyone else to see Edward's hell again.  Awful!

Reviewer: PinkyPolish (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

That was an amazing chapter. After the canon heartfail from the last chapter, this chapter takes me completely by surprise. Is it suicide-by-addiction?  I loved/hated it. Well done. I can just see the sarcastic sneer, covering Edward's bigger heartbreak. I cannot wait to read epov. Please, for the love of all that is holy, don't wait too long for the next chappy. My poor heart can't take it.


Reviewer: thisisntme (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

Your writing style is very powerful and I think you are handling writing about an addict in a very realistic way. The entire time I was reading the passage where she saw Edward in the bar, my heart was pounding.

That being said, my heart feels like it was ripped out of my chest and stomped on after this chapter. Very realistic, but still so so heartbreaking.

Great job!

Reviewer: luella23 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 19

WOW, really WOW. Your writing is heartbreaking real and you have approached this chapter like an absolute pro. This is one of very few stories that can really move the reader. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 19

seriously your writing is amazing.....I'm sitting here reading this chapter and my heart was going crazy like it wanted to pop out of my much hurt, anger, and love.

So Jake makes his appearance.......well let see what happens

PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

:( This is so sad :(

Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ughhh.  that is all i can say.  Nothing against your writing, it is beautiful, as always.  The angst is just too much for me right now.  I just want to find Edward and beat him repeatedly over the head with the f-ing bottle.  Blah.


Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

Oh noes!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 18

Another  very good chapter! Quite unexpected too. I love this story and can't wait for an update.

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