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Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 13
Responsible...
Reviewer: twihard4evr (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
I am absolutely fucking heartbroken for Edward rightnow! My heart literally dropped at the thought of him being so devastated that he began using again. Thank you for the update, I seriously crave this story!
Reviewer: livin42day (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
you make my heart stop, like, 50 times per page. awesome.
Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
Philosophy.... Hmmmmm, like it, thank you for the chapter!
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 19
Dear Ms. Blue,
What books do you currently have out and where may I buy them? I am absolutely stunned at the writing ability you possess. I wanted to cry all the way through this chapter but I was kept from succumbing to it by fear that tear filled eyes would make it hard to read on. I am in awe.
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter!
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Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh god. I just want to hold Bella myself. I have been involved with alcoholics on both platonic and romantic levels. My dad was one, and my grandfather and I think in some ways I gravitate towards alcoholics because it's what's familiar. I know that feeling Bella experienced seeing Edward and watching his face as he looked at her and drank from that bottle. They throw it in your face, daring you, challenging you to still love them even as they show you how little they deserve it. Punishing you for the way you feel about them. It's like they hate you for loving them, even while they are deeply afraid you will stop.
Anyway, it's horrible. You've captured it beautifully.
Reviewer: donna2790 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
Whoa. That was a tough one.
Not much to say other than that my love for this story continues to grow and I will be so sad when it is over.
Reviewer: fundip (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Uhhg, I seriously did not want to read this chapter because i just new there was going to be more heart fail! But i perservered, I made it through but Im hoping that soon things will be all hunkydory and rainbows and shit cause I hate when my heart hurts =(
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 19
That was sad.
Reviewer: Switzerland73 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
Finally! Thanks for the chapter :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh, I don't know what to say! Edward has fallen hard, and Bella sees him having a "good" time and rejecting her. How can she continue to hold him in her heart? Why has he just let go? I'm heartbroken!
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
loving it!
Reviewer: twink423 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh no.... i knew this was coming - Edward falling off the wagon and drinking again - I just didn't know it would hit me so hard. Well, not so hard, but just sad enough.
I really connected with Bella in the beginning of the chapter when she was trying to figure out why he would do this when he loves her and how could she trust him and love him and believe that everything would always be ok between them, when it obviously isn't. I have found myself saying all of these things in my own life the past 6 months as my marriage is now over and I felt and said all these things every day and just totally felt Bella this chapter. Thank you for writing something so real and heartbreaking and confusing at the same time and I totally got every word.
Do we get Epov next? To see what he has done this whole time and what has brought him to this time and place and to drink again? And why does he seem angry toward Bella? He made her leave and she still wanted him, but he never sought out her friendship or help this whole time... wonder what that is about?
Reviewer: mllebojangles (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
sweet mother of all that is holy, you are a fantastic writer. this is such a captivating story. i think you write crying particularly well. the description of the physicality of bella's crying is so true to life that it makes that part of the story all the more devastating. some people might not enjoy this, but hey ... i'm a whore for angst. i can't wait for more and am dreading the end for purely selfish reasons.
Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
This chapter killed me dead. I can't believe how long it has been. Seeing Edward in the bar drinking a beer was bad but near as heart wrenching at the sneer he gave her as he took another drink. Bella is already hurt enough and he just compounded that hurt.
I knew relapse was kind of inevitable but it still hurts to read all the same.
Jake is a really enjoyable character and I really don't mind that he is for Bella when she needs a friend because she truly needed one at that moment.
Reviewer: emily612 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
The last chapter devastated me. I was so sad. But this chapter? This chapter was different. This chapter made me mad. I am not liking this Edward right now. The sneer . . . i can totally picture it, and it makes me angry. How dare he do this to Bella and to them.
As always, I'm loving the story. Only 6-7 chapters left? Oh now! I don't want it to end!!
Thanks for sharing your great writing with us.
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh god..... why did he fucking SNEER at her? She didn't deserve that. I think that might bother me more than the beer...
Reviewer: LuvTwlght (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 19
AAAAAAhhhhhhhhhh! No....please no! Update soon - this has to be fixed!
Reviewer: esmemahina (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 19
That's heartbreaking. On so many levels. For bella, but especially for Edward. I know it's a hard road to sobriety and I hope he picks himself up again and stops hating himself.
Reviewer: DanceWithMe (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
This chapter is really excellently written :)
I think the way you wrote her grief after the breakup was really realistic and understandable, not overdramatic and ridiculous. Also, I love all of the secondary characters in this story. Seth and Jake and Mike all seem like such amazing guys. While Edward seems like such a douchebag at the end. I'm dying to know what the hell is going on with him.
Thank you for writing and sharing this awesome story! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: VirtuousBee (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
WOW! It's getting very interesting. I like it ..I like it alot! =D
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Reviewer: shadesofgray (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 19
fuck
Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
This chapter is so sad.
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
oh nooooooo. i feel sick now. this makes my heart hurt so much.
please update soon. make it all better now.
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