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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: mommy2kh (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh no! I was so hoping Edward wasn't using again.  Such a painful chapter but I'm so glad he came to Jasper for help!

Reviewer: FutureVampChic (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 2

It's kinda boring and there is a bit to much fluff. I dont even know which charecter's point of veiw your making the story from.

Reviewer: lissy82 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 20

This chapter has me anxious.

Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow!  I can't believe that anyone who doesn't have personal experience with all of this can write about it the way you do!  I'm overwhelmed.  It made me sick in the stomach.  Normally that's not a compliment, but in this case, it's testimony to how powerful your writing is.

Reviewer: VampiresHaveLaws (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 20

This chapter was so, so good. One of the best I've read from this fandom during the past year. Amazing.

Reviewer: marylizo (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oof.  Addiction is a nasty, NASTY monster.  Clearly he has no focus except where his next high is coming from. Great writing.  I'd love to see the storm clear but know that it's not entirely realistic. 

Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 20

This chap. made me so anxious!  I'm glad he sought out J.

Reviewer: songster51 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 20

OMG.  This was probably one of the hardest chapters I've ever read.  But this does happen.  I felt awful for Bella last chapter and really bad for Edward here.  I've seen my mother and stepfather both like this and worse.  Thank God, both of them got better and recovered.  I used to think about it.  Why such intelligent gifted people would let something control them this way.  There must be a self destructive gene that these people have that overwhelms good sense and intentions.  I'm so glad he reached out to Jasper.  Here's to hoping that this is the bottom and we go up from here.

Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 20

my heart hurts...my stomach aches...and my nerves are frayed...that is some serious rockbottom shit.  i have seen so many go down that path and it for some it didn't end to well.  for all that is holy i hope he finds his salvation and even if he and Bella don't end up together it is not beause of death. your story is gritty, real, and all consuming.

Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh my.

Reviewer: juniperjulip (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

oh, i'm still so sad. is this going to be a sad story? is a happy ending even possible?

 

my uncle lived like that for nearly 30 years. he now lives in government housing and is officially mentally handicapped due to the years of drug use.

Reviewer: StarLightSuccubus (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 20

WOW, wow. Edward's chapters when he is drunk are always my favorites in terms of good writing. You really step up to your game. I loved this chapter. Not much that he's doing it again, obviously, but just the fact of how it is written. 

I am glad that he wants help. It is very interesting to see what will happen now, as I don't have any idea what people do in these cases. I am very much looking forward to the next. You are so talented and you have an amazing story going on here. 

I look up to you, you are my favorite writer in this fandom. I really admire you and wish I could write as beautiful as you do. 

Thanks for sharing, I know it means more to you that it does to us, or others who also share their stories. I appreciate this one a little bit more, too. 

XOXO, 

 

Karla 

Reviewer: Alliez (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 20

The only thing I can say is that it's so incredibly sad. So sad. And I am also sad it's only 7 chapters more. What a great story. Truly. Realistically I can't see them getting back together in 7 chapters, honestly, I can't see them getting back together at all. But I want them to.

Reviewer: MN_TeamEd (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 20

Heartbreaking stuff. And so beautifully written.

I really hope Edward sorts himself out properly this time.

Thank you for writing such a great story - I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

PS I love AA Jasper. Such a great man.

Reviewer: snarkerella (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 20

I wish there was a way that I could explain what this story is to me... It's hard to read because to me, Edward is my brother... so when I read all the parts with Bella, it kind of grosses me out, if that makes sense?  Because it's like reading about my brother having sex... To clarify, my brother has been a drug addict/alcoholic for about 10 years and reading this is seriously like climbing inside of his mind.  Needless to say, I cried my eyes out the entire time, and had to hold my heart in my chest because I thought it might fall out of me...

Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: twilightmom78 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 20

Amazing as always. I'm so glad he's taking the first step to get clean. Poor Bella. Her heart being broken. Poor Edward, losing his shit.

Thank you for sharing your story.

Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

So it's bad..... but at least he went to Jasper for help. Hopefully the 2nd time is the charm.....

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

Total heartfail. Yikes, almighty...knew it, expected it, but...the reality was just too hard to bear. Poor Edward. He didn't just fall off the wagon, he flew down the rabbit hole. I think I'll go to my dark room and cry now. :(

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 20

wow that was so good..

Reviewer: JulieGirl18 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 20

So good... my heart hurts for him.

Reviewer: woodycakes (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 20

wow. looks like edward's hit rock bottom. i'm just glad that he's come to ask for help. i dont know how long he'll last in detox/rehab but at least he asked for it and wanted to break the cycle.

i loved the bit where we see him see bella. it hurt just as much in bella pov just because this time he's so strung up, he can't even think straight but with her, he sees her and recognizes her.

i can't wait to see what you've got in store for them. i hope they get their HEAs, preferrably with each other haha. great chapter as always

Reviewer: PrincessDeb (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh this is so heartbreaking! I think poor Edward really has a long road ahead of him. I wish he hadn't been having sex but I guess it's all tied together for him. Thanks for sharing this story.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 20

This was so hard to read, which means you did wonderfully, as usual. Thank you for the update :)

Reviewer: florp (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 20

This chapter made me feel so... I don't know... crushed? Like I could see him spiraling down, living every day in a haze of alcohol and drugs....

It's so sad...

I'm so scared for the end of this story... He seems so helpless.

:'(

Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow I felt physically sick when reading this chapter.  To know that he fell back into the deep, dark place he was before and it seems even worse this time.  He has no control over anything.

I was glad he found his way back to Jasper and that Jasper was there for him. 

Heartbreaking story.

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