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Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 14
HOT HOT HOT!! Loved it!!! Brilliant...you captured the moment the feelings so bloody well Before n after! Bravo!! I also like how she didnt come straight away - makes a change in ff!
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 12
Fab chapter!! Am glad Bella isnt a virgin - my mistake with her not sleepoing with Seth. HOT chapter.... Lord knows how she managed such self control, lol Runnign on
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 12
Lovely chapter. Love how they're taking it slow - even tho' I think both want it full on. Bella's so careing of Edwards feelings, trying not to rush him plus guessing she's a little afraid too being a virgin.
Brilliantly written tho ~ could feel the electricity in the the air... the tension... the tenderness.... the heat *fans self* Brill... running on
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
I wondered if he'd go to Forks. OMG!! what a chapter!! God that kissing session was fantastic, so real I could visualize it so much. Ahhh I got to go sleep, its 2am, but cant wait to read more tomorrow!! LOVE IT!! ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 10
Lovely chapter!! So kind of Edward so drive her ~ thought he might offer. Cant wait to see, in the future, what Charlie thinks when he finds out who she's friends with. Running on... ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 9
Loved all the banter. They're getting more comfortable with one another ~ its nice. Lovely infact. She really likes Edward, gotta be hard thinking they can only be friends. I was a little shocked tbh that she went back to Seth ~ but then understandable... a girl has needs rt. Am thinking she was thinking about Edward tho when she took Seth in her mouth. Its good that Edward is comfortable enough to talk to her about stuff, drugs etc. Running on...
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awww... Such an endng to a lovely night. Poor Bella gonna be so confused me thinks. Loving it! Running on...
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awww - fab chapter. Loved it! Both so shy.... felt like I was watching on tv. You captured everything so well! Looking fwd to their date on Saturday - wonder what film they'll watch.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Edward, such a mundane life at the mo. He'd be ok playing piano in a blues bar - only problem is it'd be a bar ~ could he resist the alcohol. Could he have one drink.... or like he says 1 drink leads to more... leads to drugs... But then again, was he more a druggie than a alcoholic. Could he have a drink without becoming addicted again, to both? I dont know.. Am interested to see what he's going to do in the future tho. Guess he could maybe study ~ evening classes. Am intrigued... Am hooked on him. ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 5
Fab chapter. Secrets coming out... I like it!! Poor Jasper ~ guessing thats why Alice never moved away.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Edward, he's in a hard place, but he's hangin on. Brilliant insight into his world right now.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
Aahhhhh.... am dying to hear Edward talk.. lol Running on. Love your style of writing. Loving the characters.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 2
Loving it!! Seth sounds yummy!
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2013 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fabulous ~ so enticing!! Really looking forward to reading this & have been for a while - just had RL kicking my ass, but now making time to read. ;-D
Reviewer: captaincurly (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2013 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 27
Loved the story, thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 3
LOTS OF INFORMATION ABOUT THE GROUP AROUND bELLA. tHE MYSTERIOUS SHOPPER CONTINUES TO KEE P TO HIMSELF.
Reviewer: malleigh (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2013 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 2
With the brutishness of Chapter 1, I am surprised at the more usual aspects of chapter 2. I am eager to see how all this melds.
Reviewer: Maphie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 27
Fantastic! Thanks for sharing this story. I like your writing so much I'm pulling up your recs.
Reviewer: Maphie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 5
I've started reading this story based on a recommendation by another author. Talk about slow burn but I really really enjoy it. The characters are complicated and the dialogue is far from flat. I'm glad I stopped by.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 27
omg brilliant loved it ty you for sharing!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 26
sniffle their being so smart but gah I just want hea!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 25
sniffle 2 chaps left how in the sniffle...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 24
omg omg omg kiss and make up not that thats how its suppose to work but gee I want them happy so bad...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 22
wow 4 almost 5 years....sniffle and Poor Jasper... why did he fall off??
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