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Reviewer: slpchic (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow..time has gone by! I'm slightly surprised that Jasper relapsed, but staying clean isn't an easy thing to do.  Can't wait to see how the meet up goes.  Update soon!

Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, so much time has past, and Bella's pain is still so raw. Kate's right: something needs to happen, even if it's awful.

This story kills so many of us because it hits so close to home. My brother died at 51 because we couldn't pull him out of his drug addiction in time.  Another of your readers is struggling with a 25 year old brother who is using lots of bad substances and is being sent to prision for the third time.  It's weird, but we've bonded over our shared reactions to your story (thank you Twitter) even though I'm 25 years older than she. You've heped us see the hopelessness we already feel; we're all keeping out fingers crossed that eventually you'll let us see that maybe there's still a glimmer of hope.

Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 22

this is what i put on the thread.... ok so I'm prob the only person that doesn't hope they get back together. I think what she did to Jake was along the lines of what Edward did to her. I mean they lived together and were together for a long period of time and then she just decides not to move forward. Isn't that what Edward did to her? They weren't even together that long really. I get he has issues but idk. I hope they can talk and resolve some anger and hurt but then go their seperate ways. (Kinda like that movie The Breakup.. they didnt get back together in the end)
I am so captivated by this story that I can't wait to see what happens. I just kinda wish she would of given Jake or anyone really more of a chance. Not only that, but what she said about not really knowing him now b/c he is a different person than he was before. Maybe they will take the time to get to know each other again slowly. Then I would be all for them getting back together.

Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 22

I can't believe that it has been almost 5 years since they have seen each other.  I wonder if that is really the case?!  I always experience a butterflies and a rapidly beating heart when reading your chapters of this wonderful but sad story.  You do such a tremendous job of capturing the nervousness of Bella.  I know that feeling and can only imagine the emotional reaction that they will both have when they see each other again.   I truly don't know what you have planned for them but I am sure that it will make me a nervous wreck! 

I love your story and your writing!!

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

Dear TalulaBlue, I love you. Even when i hate you because Edward and Bella haven't even spoken to each other in 4 fucking years! Wonderful chapter, and I'm so very happy that there has been some sort of communication, and am REALLY looking forward to the meeting . . . and hoping that we can get to some relationship building fun with these two soon!


PS I also love your playlists :D

Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 22

wow! what a time frame!


Reviewer: DanceWithMe (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

Oh, wow.  The way it turned out with Jake was surprising.  But it makes complete sense... if I were in her shoes, it probably would have turned out the same way.  Well... I would probably consider moving in with him, but only because I am a selfish person.  Anywho... awesome job, as always!  I absolutely love reading this story.

Thank you for writing!  Can't wait to

Reviewer: Vega80 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

Jesus fucking Christ. And I thought I was excited about the last chapter to get here!


Superb, as always.

Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 22

oh my.


my stomach always aches when i read this. i'm really looking forward to seeing how their conversation goes. i'm such an insufferable, ridiculously hopeful romantical optimist. i'm still holding on to that thread of hope for an edward+bella.

i roll my eyes at myself.


Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Poor Jake. Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, it's been almost 5 years? That's crazy! I might be murdered by crazy Edward-loving girls for saying this... but I don't think they should get back together. I think Bella should see him and get her closure, he should apologize, and that should be the end of it. Jake is a great guy, and Bella should choose him. Maybe Edward will meet someone, maybe he won't, but I don't think Bella should be an option for him. It's been too long, and he hurt her too much.

Reviewer: drlena (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 22

I can't believe they haven't spoken in 5 years!

Reviewer: why (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great chapter. Can't wait to see their reunion. Five years it's a lot. It will not be easy for sure. The important thing is that Bella didn't delete the message. I was just wondering, is she still with Jacob at this point? Thank you once again. It's getting hard to imagine that this story it's almost at the end. It's sad. Love, T.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 22

I wanna read the convo pretty badly now.

Reviewer: IzzyBizzy (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update. PLEASE update again soon!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 22

Hey TB

Thanks for the update. I should be doing lots of reading for university, but instead, as soon as I saw this update in my box I had to come & read it.

They reall did a number on each other, didn't they.  Bella obviously hasn't moved on properly with her life & although Edward appears as though him might have got his act together, he needs to set things right with Bella.  I'm thinking it's going to be a very traumatic meeting.

I would love to see these 2 back together again but I will go where you lead me.

Thank you  for such a wonderful story.


Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 22

omg omg omg i can't wait til the next chapter. please come quick. please come quick

Reviewer: LadyTx (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. I can't believe you've done a 4 year jump since she saw him at that bar!

Reviewer: relative (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 22

These chapters are never what I expect, but it's still always a good surprise.  Even though it's almost been five years since the bulk of this story took place, I still got giddy when I read Edward's message.  I have no idea what's going to happen at their meeting, I'm just hoping for something more than forgiveness and resignation.  I like when they're together.

Reviewer: crzymusicfreak11 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

oooooh please update with their meeting immediately! this is one of my favorite heartbreakingly true stories and i've been missing it!

Reviewer: crzymusicfreak11 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 22

ooooh please update with them meeting immediately! this is one of my favorite, heartbreakingly real stories, and i've been missing it!

Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 22

She is so in love with him obviously.....and he never got over her. If she can forgive him that would great....Hopefully you will update faster this time please!!!!!

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow 5 years, I can't even imagine what it would be like to have to talk after all that time....  Oh wait yes I can... 

I am really looking forward to the talk even though I know it means things are coming to an end.  :)

Reviewer: Gaby_Writes (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 22

Im guessing that after almost 5 yrs..there is still a possibility of a makeup. I am saddened bc there is reality to ur story. addicts relapse all the time. & as much as id like for edward to go to rehab once & b recovered 4 ever it pains me he relapses. The questions now is has he finally reached a point of recovery where it lasts. Also if BxE makeup is she strong enough to b there for him. UGH!!! This story is a sad reality for many & I thank you 4 sharing it with us.


Reviewer: ebbingjen (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 22

She wallowed and felt sorry for herself.  She surrounded herself with friends and lived her life.  Bella was able to enter into a relationship with Jacob and love him for the man that he was.  When Jacob put his cards on the table, Bella was forced to do the same.  How lovely for her that her lover was able to treat her so well at the end.   This is how you end a committed relationship:  with respect and honesty. 

Jasper is such a sage throughout this story.  You've written this man to be such an amalgamation of so many things; including flawed.  His story was hard to hear but such an essential message was conveyed with his ending statement: ‘ I'm just saying that the nasty stuff was him, but so was the good stuff'.  You can't toss the baby out with the bathwater here.  Everyone is made up of good and bad.  It's up to each individual to weigh and balance their own rations. 

That voice message from Edward to Bella and how Bella acting during the final paragraphs of this do you do it?  How do you write pitch perfect emotions?  You pass your message from words into feelings and I find myself in the same state as your characters at times.  Powerful.

Bella deserves to have an audience with Edward.  How she chooses to use their time together is up to her.   I'm eager to read about their meeting.  Thank you for sharing this tale with us.  This story has touched me like no other. 


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