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Reviewer: Cat 00 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 22

Hmmmm.....can't wait for this meeting!! Thanx

Reviewer: jami (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 22

cant wait till they are face to face good chapter

Reviewer: FunmbiE (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 22

What a much time passes! 

1. "Jake's nice to me.  For the past three months he's been putting up with my moody bullshit.  I'm pretty sure he wants to ask me out, but he's heard bits and pieces of the Edward story and I think he gets that I wouldn't be able to say yes even if I wanted to.  And I'm not sure I want to."-I feel so bad for B...but she's trying, right? I mean, she's out, she has other friends...

2. "He's got good hair and pretty eyes and nice skin, and he's easily twice my size and can throw me around and I don't know why I like that, but I do."-Its OK...everyone wants to be man-handled once in awhile 
3. "One of them asked us if we were ‘for real Indians'."-BWAHAHAHAH, so whats a "not for real Indian"?

4. "What am I doing?  It's been nearly a year since that awful night in the bar.  More than a year and a half since Edward busted my heart open.  Thinking about him still makes me feel crappy, but not like it did before.  And I'm sick of thinking about it, of thinking about him."-And she kisses him...well B certainly deserves to be happy...and if E isn't willing to be the one to make that happen, then Im pro Bella/Jacob...but make no mistake, if E *was* willing to pull himself together, Id be Team Edward

5. "But it's been two years and I want to live with you."-WOW, theyve been dating for 2 years???

6. "Jake gets dressed and he gathers the handful of things he keeps here and he leaves."-WAIT! They break up??? Hmm, I wonder why B doesn't want to move in with Jake.

7. "Mike & Jess get married? PLUS Alice and Jazz are getting married? YAY! 

8. "We've invited Edward to the wedding."-Welps...this is going to happen sooner or later...

9. "Edward wanted, he wanted to speak to you - before the wedding - but he didn't know if you wanted to see or talk to him, so he asked me to ask you."-I want to hear this...I *really* want to know E's thoughts...his reasoning on the entire debacle 4 years ago

10. "We'd planned on getting married a couple of summers ago, but I relapsed. So we pushed it back."-Oh Jazz...I guess relapse is a part of recovery...and the situation with the nurse is just heartbreaking! 

11. B's reaction to the phone call...after 4 years? Does B still love E? Clearly she's hurt by him...even now she has such a physical, nauseous reaction just at the sound of his voice. Can she survive meeting with him?.....E doesn't sound so hot either in the voice-message...SO NERVOUS! But he should be

12. Who's Kate? A roommate?

13. "So of course you might cry. The guy decimated you. Everybody's got the person that did that to them...stop worrying about crying. I'd be worried about you if you didn't cry, quite frankly....Because you either need to see him and realize it's too much and that you can't see him ever again, or you need to see him and realize that you're okay with this and can stop feeling like you're going to shit your pants whenever you hear his name"-Hear, hear Kate! Love her voice of reason!

Welps, let's hear what E has to say. And I really hope B is open and tells him that he was an asshole...that he hurt her and she did nothing to deserve his disrespect!


Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow -- four years. Really nice job with the Jacob part of the story. Bittersweet. Glad you had them break up before Edward came back into the picture. That would have been so cruel to poor, sweet Jake.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Got a feeling it will be your best one yet.

Reviewer: Alliez (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 22

I always look forward to an update from you. It's a tremendous story. So moving. So powerful. So realistic. So sad. The next thing I would like to feel is So hopeful. Cannot wait for an update.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow -- four years. Really nice job with the Jacob part of the story. Bittersweet. Glad you had them break up before Edward came back into the picture. That would have been so cruel to poor, sweet Jake.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Got a feeling it will be your best one yet.

Reviewer: pool718 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

I hope Edward's been sober for a while now. 

Reviewer: nicoleaj (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 22

Loved it :)

Reviewer: carebear309 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 22

Ooh can't wait for them to meet up. Wonder what Edward has been doing in their time apart. did he relapse anymore or has he been clean the whlole time. can't believe how much time has passed. I'm glad bella at least had a relationship that lasted a while and wasn't pining away for edward the whole time/. I'm undecided as to whether or not I want them to get back together.

Reviewer: solange (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 22

You have know ideal how much I LOVE THIS STORY,and it feels like forever before you update (which is not true by the way-I'm just greedy) I love broken Edward and Bella. There is something so pure and innocent about their love and struggles to communicate with each other.

Hopefully next chapter we do finally get the two of them together...talking . It's been to long but so well written,very soulful

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 22

I just found your stroy yesterday and finished the 22 chapter today.  I can't begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed your writting.  I am total team Edward and for the first time ever i wanted Bellas to pick Jacob.  I hope you can change that for me before you finish this story.  Waiting for the next update.  thany you for your time and sharing your talent.

Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 22

God....I can't tell you how much I love this.

Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 22

I can't for the life of me remember who Kate is, but I guess it doesn't really matter at this point.  I remember who she is in Twilight, but I can't remember how she fits into this story.  Anyway, the meeting between Bella and Edward is going to be very interesting.  I suppose it is going to lead to them eventually getting back together, but 5 years is a really long time to let Bella's (justifiable) bitterness set in.  I'm excited to see how you are going to finagle the situation so it's believable.  You probably hate it when people say this, but it would be nice to have updates more frequently.  It's hard to remember what is going on in the story when so much time goes by, much less stay excited about it.  It's just a shame, because this is really one of the best stories out there, and I want to enjoy it as much as it deserves to be enjoyed.

Reviewer: instantkarmagirl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 22

You have a knack for writing comfortable dialog that builds a comfortable, natural relationship between the characters.  You don't have to go into every little happening in Jacob and Bella's relationship to build it for us.

That's talent.

My heart broke a little with the Jake thing.  The whole lord of the motherfucking dance that moved into the break up scene was fantastic and wrenching.

And let me just say, best break up scene I've read because it was about two people who actually love each other but what different things. 

So good.  I'm glad to have the update but I'm sad that I have to wait even more for the next chapter.

Edward's voicemail was perfect.  Even though Bella never reflects on his voice, just his words convey how awkward and comfortable he is.

God this story owns me.  Thanks for putting it out here for me to love.


Reviewer: ECis4ME (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow. What a time jump. I can't wait to see how far Edward has come. I bet it's far. I hope that Bella will give him a chance to make amends. I'm glad that she and Jasper had their conversation as well. I think that will help Bella see the big picture.
I'm glad you brought Bella and Jake's relationship to the point you did. I hope he finds the right person for him. Really looking forward to the next chapter. This one was a good break from the heart fail.

Reviewer: rachel1313 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 22


Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow! That was great

Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow -almost 5 years.  I am trying really hard to put myself in B's shoes right now and just can't - for obvious reasons.  Part of me thinks she is making too big of a deal about it...surely she has gotten over him in all this time...but then again, he did "decimate" her back in the day.  I am assuming he has got his shit together by now based on what Jasper said, so it will be interesting to see her reaction to the new improved E.  Based on your writing (which continues to be BRILLANT by the way), I definitely don't assume you are giving us a HEA like most stories on this site, so my stomach has its own set of butterflies right now.  For once, I don't even know if I am rooting for them to get together although I am definitely hoping they can find happiness in life...

Reviewer: Boxer R65 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Five years! Edward must have come so far in those years being able to understand himself much better - all those things that Jasper called him on. Of course they can still get together - no happy-ever-afters as that's not the way  you're writing this story - however, what's to to say that they cant figure things out and have a real honest to goodness relationship that works - once Bella lets him have it of course.

Edward is getting better - 2 steps forward, 1 back - why not - Jasper and Alice are balancing it. Edward seems still really interested in Bella after all this time - he needs to check it out now that he's better able to handle the troubles that come with all relationships because they are so good together. I loved the sex too!

Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, just wow. Time passes but some things do not change. They have moved on but still think about each other. I hope, if nothing else, that they can get some kind of closure and have some sense of peace after their meeting. I'm afraid I am going to cry my eyes out. I want to read the next chapter but at the same time I am almost scared to. It makes my stomach hurt. I hope he is well after all these years. I hope she can at least see that.

Reviewer: emily612 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 22

The entire time I was reading this chapter I had one eye on the scroll bar to the right.  All I could think about was, how much more do I have left?  Will we get to her conversation with Edward this chapter?  But alas, no such luck.  The cliff you left us on is huge!

I must, though, thank you for not making Jake out into some horrible person.  I have a soft spot in my heart for Jake, and I hate it when he is the villain.  

My favorite part of this chapter was the conversation with Kate.  I'm torn, though.  You have really painted a vivid picture of the dark side of addiction.  Do I really want Bella to return to Edward?  Not unless he is much, much better than he was when he dumped her.  I liked, too, Jasper's comment that both the good and the bad were all a part of the real Edward.

Thank you for this chapter1

Reviewer: bitchfaceruinedbella (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 22

So is next chapter the chapter they reunite? 

I always get excited when I see this updated - though 5 years passing in a chapter is... a lot.  I'm nervous to see how this will work out, as it feels like the fic is winding down but they don't seem nearly finished. 

Excellent job, BTW.  Like I said, I always look forward to your updates.

Reviewer: froggydee (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 22

love this story!

Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 22

Thanks for your honesty, lol, summer makes me lazy, too.

When he's well written, I often fall in love with Jake, like I did here and bummed when they break up, but I'm excited to read E try to make amends.

Thanks for the update!

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