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Reviews For With Teeth
Reviewer: acamp88343 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 22

This is one of the few stories that I just can't guess where it's heading.  Thanks for keeping up with it.  Keep up the wonderful writing..I'm dying to see where these two end up.

Reviewer: herm (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 22

Ohh! Poor Jake, poor Bella loved this chapter and loved the chat with Jasper!

Really looking forward to meeting up with Edward!

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh, sounds like the next chapter is going to potentially be meldown-city for Bella. She's pretty darn amazing to be agreeing to see him after all this time - if for no other reason than he owes her some kind of explanation for how he hurt her all those years ago. Knowing Bella though, she probably feels some kind of misguided sense of 'owing' Edward in some way to hear him out. I did love Kate's threats if Bella didn't agree to see him though!

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 22

great chapter; can't believe jasper's story! shocking to say the least. also, interesting use of the time gap. wasn't expecting a 4 year lag, but it makes sense! looking forward to their awkward heart to heart.

Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

Oh goodness. I'm so nervous for Bella, and for Edward. Can't wait for the next update :)

Reviewer: eliza41 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

Glad Edward is getting his life together. Doesn't seem like Bella is able to move on with hers. Can't wait to see what their conversation will be. Great story.

Reviewer: lomitch (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 22

I never thought I would feel so sorry for Jake if Bella rejected him, but I did. I could feel what Bella was feeling in this chapter. I was 'affected' all day and I returned and reread this chapter....yep, still feel the sadness. This says alot about you as a writer....I want to 'feel' what the characters are going through! GREAT JOB. Now, to the more important stuff.....when Bella and Edward meet. SO.CAN'T.WAIT!

Reviewer: Labella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 22

Fantastic Chapter! Stellar writing!

Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 22

Hmm.  Okay, bring on the necessary evil.

Reviewer: kingsley (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

This story just gets more and more painful,...and more and more real.

The Jasper admissions - very powerful.

Excellent writing, thank you!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 22

I think almost 5 years is long enough for them to start over. I hope Bella will give them a chance.

Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 22

Um, update time...terrible cliffy...can't wait for the meeting. Is it ready yet? How about now? Now? LMAO...but I am anxious to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 22

Excellent. Omg 5 years have passed. I would be a nervous wreck. I would be torn between punching his lights out or dropping him on the floor and having my way with him, consequences be dammed. Great chapter, Jasper opening up like that so Bella can see and hear what the other side maybe going through. Next update please.

Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 22

That was a great chapter. I like how you told all of Jacob's story within half a page and still managed to make me feel for them. I also like how you interweave Jasper and Alice's story. You can tell Bella's grown-up since we last saw her. She's still not my favorite character but if she was nice to Edward when he apologizes, I might learn to love her. I look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

This is a good story, but it breaks my heart. 

Reviewer: majose (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 22

Please, update soon! I know this is not really a review, but this was sort of a transitional chapter. A nice one at that. I cannot believe that so much time has gone by. Jasper story was also quite sobering.

Reviewer: msj2779 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 22

SO excited for them to have thier talk.  They both need this.  Bella obviously has some pent up anger toward him.  I love our writing.  The dialogue parts of  your story might be hard for you but they are effing great.  Can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: hunnibunni210 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

aw the whole jake thing makes me really sad he seems so perfect in this and as much as i am always a team edward i just love jake especially this one

Reviewer: lincolnanon (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 22

So good, thanks.
Now pick up your pen and write!

Reviewer: NelsonSmandela (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 22

WOW, so much good in this chapter... I wasn't expecting this at all... I'd honestly expected for her to be with Jacob when Edward tried to make amends. I wonder if her inability to truly love and be with Jacob is due to all the suppressed anger and bitterness she has toward Edward. And underneath that, is there still love? I'm not sure there could be. I mean, yes, the opposite of love is indifference, and she's certainly not indifferent. I worry about how much she has not dealt with - it sounds like she just bottled up all the hurt, and now it's going to come spilling out. OK, I know I'm rambling and what I am really feeling is just impatience for the next chapter. I can't wait to read it! ^_^

Reviewer: onoimatwitard2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 22

I actually flinched when I saw the update in my in box.  I'd say that's a pretty good indicator that the angst in this story has ripped my heart out and stomped on it. 

If Bella didn't desperately need closure for herself I think I'd say she should tell him to fuck off.  But Kate was right, unless she faces it, and finds her peace with it, then he'll always be something that robs her of a little bit of freedom in this world.  We shouldn't give anyone that power in our lives and only she can take that power back from him. 

Reviewer: chilenitta (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 22

God.. I feel like my stomach was in knots the whole time I was reading this update. You have no idea how much I dread and rejoice at these I really hope you update soon. thanks so much.

Reviewer: 1853kaz (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

Finally! It took a long time to get here.. I hope the reunion next chapter is a good thing for them both. A lot to clear the air.. Lead on, Blue. Lazy? I don't think so. Quality takes time! :)  

Reviewer: i-was-broken (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 22

Great reason for them to clear the air between them.  I do hope it goes well. 

Love how Jasper just puts a situation out there and waits, letting the other person work it out for themself.

Great job.  I feel nervous apprehension, like Bella, just waiting for the confrontation.

Reviewer: Autumnltd (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 22

I don't know if I am looking forward to the meeting or dreading it...  Be gentle with me..  I am a Wussperv but I so love your story!

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