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Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
wow what a long time for Bella to be in pain. Yeah she still has a broken heart. I hope her meeting with Edward is all she hopes it to be. Great Chapter.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow, five years is a long time to not be over someone. I think this is going to be a cataclysmic meeting!
Reviewer: rileyd84 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 22
This story is like crack. Like the really good kind of crack you can only get from rich people who are stingy with it. Not that I've ever smoked crack but jesus christmas, I cannot stop reading. Thanks for another great chapter. I'll be really bummed when the end comes.
Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 22
This meeting might be pretty painful for both, but I agree with Kate, it's really necessary, there's too much history and hurt and they need to just explain themselves, get closure or lay the foundations for a tentative new beginning. But I don't believe in this too much, I hope, but I don't believe. This don't strike me as a HEA kind of story. I might be wrong, I hope I am, they both deserve to be happy and if they could do it together it would be great.
I still love this story and it still tears at my heart at every chapter. I don't know if I should thank you or curse you. Maybe both.
Reviewer: amberdk (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 22
First off, I would like to thank you for writing such a moving story. It is one of the best I have read in the fandom. It is so well written, and has depth, and pulls emotion so well. I had heart fail for Bella when she was hearing Edward's voice for the first time in years, I can only imagine what that would be like.
Again, thank you fro writing and updating.
Reviewer: mzotou (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 22
Great update :) I'm feeling a little more hopeful for the two of them :) Bella has seemed to grow a lot, but of course the effect Edward has on her is still strong :) I agree with Kate, this meeting will be healing for both of them, she needs some answers.
I'm really hoping for them to find a way back to each other, they had very good potential when they were together, and now that they're both more grown up and mature, they have amazing potential :)
Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 22
amazing. I love love loveeee this story. Normally whenever bella and edward are apart I just skim through it until they are back together again, but your writing is so amazing I find myself still wanting chapters even knowing they will still be apart :)
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 22
Hi tb. I adored this chapter. It's amazing to me how well you span time and show the growth of Bella's character. Kate is awesome. I'm glad Bella has a friend like her. It was hard to see her with Jake but I appreciate what a good guy he is and how he treated her. I like that she stays honest with herself, even when it's hard. Edward's message made my heart race. I cannot believe it's been almost 5 years. I have so many questions and concerns running through me regarding him. I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for their rendezvous. Love love this.
I'm freaking out over your playlist for ch 22. I'm a total nut for the national. My hubs and I just saw them last month. Green Gloves is such a pretty song. Built to Spill is awesome. And Sun Kil Moon has a special place in my heart. My favorite song of theirs is the cover of neverending math equation.
Thanks for updating, dear!
xxoo annie
Reviewer: sunnyfara (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 22
This story just breaks my heart. But it is so wonderfully written, I can't stop reading.
Reviewer: m7707 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 22
You can really feel Bella's conflict and all of those terrible, confusing emotions. Excelllent job!
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 22
And cue the tears! Great chapter.
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 22
Awe, I can't help but want a HEA for them. He may of moved on already, I'll hate if that's the case. I don't know something about the idea of true love, ever lasting, accepting & forgiving love.
I'm so glad you updated, I've really enjoyed this story & your writing, looking forward to next chapter.
<3
Reviewer: Tez (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 22
Loved the heart to heart with Jasper. This story is so good!
Reviewer: ssuryan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 22
Wow - there was a lot going on in that chapter. Not complaining, just sayin. Anyway, I have developed a soft spot for a sweet Jacob, so I was kind of sad to see him go so quickly. I know it's a BxE fic, but I still love a little side of Jacob.
Anyway, definitely looking forward to seeing how the reunion goes!
Reviewer: acamp88343 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 22
This is one of the few stories that I just can't guess where it's heading. Thanks for keeping up with it. Keep up the wonderful writing..I'm dying to see where these two end up.
Reviewer: herm (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 22
Ohh! Poor Jake, poor Bella loved this chapter and loved the chat with Jasper!
Really looking forward to meeting up with Edward!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 22
Oh, sounds like the next chapter is going to potentially be meldown-city for Bella. She's pretty darn amazing to be agreeing to see him after all this time - if for no other reason than he owes her some kind of explanation for how he hurt her all those years ago. Knowing Bella though, she probably feels some kind of misguided sense of 'owing' Edward in some way to hear him out. I did love Kate's threats if Bella didn't agree to see him though!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 22
great chapter; can't believe jasper's story! shocking to say the least. also, interesting use of the time gap. wasn't expecting a 4 year lag, but it makes sense! looking forward to their awkward heart to heart.
Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 22
Oh goodness. I'm so nervous for Bella, and for Edward. Can't wait for the next update :)
Reviewer: eliza41 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 22
Glad Edward is getting his life together. Doesn't seem like Bella is able to move on with hers. Can't wait to see what their conversation will be. Great story.
Reviewer: lomitch (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 22
I never thought I would feel so sorry for Jake if Bella rejected him, but I did. I could feel what Bella was feeling in this chapter. I was 'affected' all day and I returned and reread this chapter....yep, still feel the sadness. This says alot about you as a writer....I want to 'feel' what the characters are going through! GREAT JOB. Now, to the more important stuff.....when Bella and Edward meet. SO.CAN'T.WAIT!
Reviewer: Labella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 22
Fantastic Chapter! Stellar writing!
Reviewer: Carlisles Beloved (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 22
Hmm. Okay, bring on the necessary evil.
Reviewer: kingsley (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 22
This story just gets more and more painful,...and more and more real.
The Jasper admissions - very powerful.
Excellent writing, thank you!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22
I think almost 5 years is long enough for them to start over. I hope Bella will give them a chance.
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