How awesome is your Jacob?! (despite his maddening sleeping habits. I’m so fucking jealous of these people)  So awesome it’s hard to believe it’s a Jacob. Not that you didn’t stick with his canon traits, you just emphasized them (and left out his worst traits). Another reason I liked him is that you made it clear it’s NOT Taylor you have in mind. It’s no accident SM had him grow up so much in order to be a somewhat believable opponent to Edward, but of course Scummit failed to see that. But what makes him the most likable is the way he took Bella’s rejection. Poor kid :( I wonder if he’ll find a Nessie.

I really liked Bella’s reaction to Jasper telling her Edward wants to meet her, and that he used his own past to get her to give a more ‘informed’ response. We also got to see why Rosalie was behaving so coldly towards Bella, until she found Edward wouldn’t be going to Seattle with her.

Since you do have canon pairings, I’ve been wondering if Carlisle and Esme will show up as the uncle and aunt (with whom I’m guessing Edward must try to make amends too). Also, I thought the way none of Edward’s previous hook-ups were named Tanya is kinda suspicious. Please don’t tell me he’ll bring a Tanya to the wedding :(((( Bella, on the other hand, can bring anyone she wants!  It’d be nice if she brought Seth. For some weird (malicious) reason, I want Edward to find out she was fooling around with Seth when she first met him hihi.

We all know Bella is gonna look her name in the blue dress at the wedding, so  I wonder if she’ll dance with Edward canon-style? I can’t wait for their meeting. This chapter has actually gotten me thinking there may be an E&B HEA after all. Of course it’d be extremely hard to make Bella falling again for the man that dumped her so cruelly believable. Then again there’s the addiction complication/reason, and there’s the NM ‘u’ll be safer this way’ explanation to the sneer. Also, you’re one of the like two ff authors that I believe could pull it off. God, this story is so unpredictable!

So, Kate?? That was interesting. Edward sounding so awkward was of course expected, but the way you wrote it made is so damn re-readable. Loved the “Because of course I’m saving this message” line.

Seriously now, I love this story so much I could wait for as long as it takes for an update. I know I’d been bitching a lot about how it waited in the beta validation queue (and isn’t that supposed  to make sure there aren’t spelling mistakes or repeated phrases or whatever? Anyway), but that’s because I honestly believe this story just stands out. Just look at what all the Twific communities are saying about it. This is the only Twilighted-only story that has received so much praise. And that’s *so* deserved.

Again, thank you (though my nails don’t)

:)

Really excellent chapter.  I don't know how you managed to bridge the years so well without feeling like it was a dizzying jump for the reader, but you did.  Kudos.  Glad to see Jasper gave Bella some perspective - that's a very important tool in life.  And I like the Bella / Kate dynamic too - cracks me up.

Wow, this chapter covered so much!  loved the conversation between bella and jasper. so glad edward called too.  sweet jacob....sorry for his hurt but not really since of course i want her back with edward if he can be healthy. can't wait for them to finally speak.  hope its next chapter???!!! thanks for writing.

OH NO!!! It's not complete! Foiled again!!! GAH! Please tell me you'll update?!

Holy fcuking heart fail batman!!!! OMG My heart hurts and my stomach... oh good greif! I totally saw it coming but it still hurt! ACK!

can't wait for more!

*sigh*

The stage is set! Wow, are they really going to meet and talk? What could he possibly say to her? The Jake interlude was sad; it's clear to everyone except to Bella that she hasn't really moved on, despite the years... I'llbe sitting on pins until the next update!

Soo good!!! I will be anxiousley awaiting the nxt chapter!!!!

I can't wait until Bella and Edward meet to talk. That should be a very emotional experience. I'm wondering if it will stir hidden feelings they both may still have for each other? Is Edward with anyone right now? Is the reason he wants to see her so he can finally come to some type of closure between them? I have mixed feelings on whether these two should be together or not. On the one hand I think they should be. No one is perfect. Bella would have to question if she is prepared to take Edward for all that he is. How long, if he is, has he been clean and sober? What has he done with his life since she last saw him? It sounded like he was working towards a degree of some sort.

I am very anxious to read more of "With Teeth". Do you have an idea of how many chapters this story may be? I also like that you give Edwards POV.

My heart hurts for both of them. I am wondering if E and B get their HEA with each other? I really hope they do. It would totally break my heart if they didn't. This story has really blown me away. I think Bella is fooling herself. She still loves him and he still loves her. I am pulling for Edward to have his shit together. I can't wait for the next chapter!

mind-blowing chapter, you never cease to amaze me in this story. Love that you've jumped in time, actually loved your Jacob *gasp*! Kind of wish that Bella was stil dating him during the wedding, for support you know? Glad that she's going to talk to Edward and eagerly awaiting their reunion (will the next chapter be all from one POV, or both? I'd like to see it from both if possible...). Keep up the amazing work, I can't get enough of these characters! xx

Goodness....this torture is killing me!  I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!  Please stop being lazy!!  :)  I mean that in the nicest way possible!!!