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Reviewer: itsyblue (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 23

Love that this takes place over a period of time; that they aren't apart for just a few months. Not saying I don't want them back together, I do.

 

 

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 23

thanks for writing.  THIS story is amazing.  so glad to finally see them back in the same room talking.  can't wait to see where this goes...please let them reconnect in a good way at the wedding!

Reviewer: pool718 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 23

Super chapter.

Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

Amazing!  I stayed up way past my bedtime to read this.  Their emotions and reactions are so real.  Really looking forward to what happens with the wedding.

Reviewer: PJAustin (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 23

Please tell me you believe in a HEA for these two beautiful people. Please?

He still loves her, doesn't he?

Reviewer: eliza41 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 23

Every time I see a new update for this story I am so excited and can't wait to read it. But at the same time I hold my breath because I'm not sure how much pain you are going to put us through. I have never been one to read really angsty stories but this story owns my ass. It is incredible and once it is complete I'm going to reread it in its entirety. Love it.

Reviewer: Alby Mangroves (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh Edward... *sigh* You're giving an excellent insight into the program and the issues that face him, including the details of treatment, it's fascinating.

It's great to see him expressing himself a lot more succinctly these days, his head was such a vaccuum before that to be in there now and see cohesive thoughts is like meeting him for the first time.

Highly emotional chapter. I cried reading through their exchange!

Reviewer: SewinthePast (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 23

Just found this and at first I thought I would not like it but I am happy I kept with it...it is really really GOOD!

 

Reviewer: SewinthePast (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 23

Just found this and at first I thought I would not like it but I am happy I kept with it...it is really really GOOD!

 

Reviewer: fancastride (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 23

It was good to see Bella get answers to the breakup I'm sure she was more hurt then she let on.  Edward has come so far I think he is realizing just what a jerk he had been with her.  Oh the letter he kept it, I think I saw Bella's heart break all over again.  Great Chapter, can't wait for the wedding. 

Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 23

I liked it....I am glad they talked they obviously still have feelings for one another. I would love it if he did text her, just out of the blue and she responded. Why can't they be friends and then maybe eventually date???

Reviewer: pluekaymapropayvee (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 23

You're right, I am already reading Just Wait :)

 

And I just thought I'd say I really, really enjoyed this chapter.

 

Progress ;)

Reviewer: mellieb2 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great Chapter!! Can't wait for the wedding! Update soon please

Reviewer: woodycakes (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 23

your updates make me cry. i love that they got to talk. and their conversation? BROKE ME. i wish so much that they could make it work but it's gonna take a lot of work on both their parts.

i loved his conversation with dr. sayer. she seems to be really good for him and i hope he continues to get better.

i re-read the letter and i remember really feeling awful about it. wow. 

basically, much love for your story. it kinda owns me big time <3

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 23

I'm glad that they had this conversation. Though it really seemed like Bella had changed a lot! I hope that Edward can get to know her again.

Reviewer: bibliojodienda (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 23

you are very good..., is so real and so mature , i haven´t read something that good for while . thanks

Reviewer: twiheart89 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 23

best chapter in awhile, blew my mind. Love EPOV so much. Was hoping that Bella would be a little angier, was also hoping that she would remind him that she LOVED him, I thought that was a big ommission from the conversation? I really enjoyed Edward's talk with the shrink at the end though, hoping for more of that in the following chapters. Actually hoping for a lot of this chapter in ones to come, I loved it. Is the next one the wedding already?

Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 23

I need to read more of this. As soon as possible.

Reviewer: persuasion72 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I think it's realistic that Bella and Edward could fall in love again...and even likely that they never really stopped .  Those feelings were put on hold...terrible things happened.  It's interesting that Bella's romantic relationships during the last five years have ultimately failed...that something was missing.  I think that a platonic friendship would be difficult for them to maintain over a long period of time, as their attraction is too intense.  I believe that Bella and Edward are wrong when they say/think that they no longer know each other: although they no longer know the details of each other's everyday lives, education, and social networks, they still relate to each other on a more important, intimate level: they recognize, understand, and appreciate each other's fundamental personality.  It's similar to how so many people relate to this beautiful story: at the most basic level, we connect with these characters because they feel what we feel - love, obsession, shame, inadequacy, etc etc.  It's kind of how, once in a blue moon, we have an amazing conversation with someone we don't know and feel an immediate "kindred spirit" connection.  It's an amazing feeling and we don't feel so alone in the world.  Bella and Edward are not alone either.    

Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 23

Ohhhh I haven't herd of Just Wait, who writes that?????

I thought the conversation went well, I think what they both won't admit is that they still have feelings for each other and haven't really ever gotten over the other one.  It is so great to see Edward healthy and living and hope that these two crazy kids can find their way back together :) 

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapter. Edward and Bella's meeting was so very complex and interesting. I can't wait to see how it goes when they see each other at the wedding.

Reviewer: deenerneener (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 23

I felt both sad and hopeful, maybe more sad than hopeful but still a bit hopeful, during Edward's meeting with Bella.  You rendered their conversation, their surprising bits of awkward and not-so-awkward laughter; Bella's tears, Edward's apologies, so very beautifully and realistically.  Of course I have my preferences for how they end up, so it still hurt my heart that it has been so long, and they are virtual strangers.

Edward's therapy session also had a ring of truth to it. 

I'm mostly overjoyed he's clean and sober again, and he and Bella have seen each other.

Can't wait for them to meet up at the wedding.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story!

Reviewer: montannaleigh (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 23

AMAZING CHAPTER :)

Reviewer: potterchick86 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 23

I love the way you write. It's a sparce, beautiful world you've created.

Reviewer: i-was-broken (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 23

I'm glad they're moving toward some sort of resolution without unrealistic expectations.  I was a little bummed when he said he wasn't in love with her though. :-(

Continued success.

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