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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 17
Is this where you take our hearts and stomp on them. ;P
Charlie's reaction was much better than I thought, fair play to the bloke.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bahahaha... This is fab. So realistic. I'm still grinning like an idiot.
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Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 24
Thanks for writing an update, I really enjoy reading this story. It's kinda heart wrenching though. I feel like they're still completely in love with each other but aren't sure of the rightness of such a thing.[tragic error playing the right wrong game, in my book]. It's hard to tell if they can forgive and give each other what they want.
I'm excited to read what you decide their fates will be;)
Reviewer: Dragonflygrl (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 24
I love the way Edward and Bella are getting to know each other again. It's not too fast, Bella's still feeling really unsure of it all. It's so much more realistic than those stories that have them fight and then see each other again and realize they love each other without any struggle. This story is so gritty and believable.
Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 15
It seems someone's fallen in love...
Gah it's 1.45am. Hubs and I have some serious DIY tomorrow else I'd have no problem with staying up a reading through the night, but I need my game face on tomorrow. Darn it.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 14
Geez, is it getting hot in here?
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 13
Can't. Breathe.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 12
I am in need of sleep. I am in need of 'With Teeth'.
'Decisions, decisions...'
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 11
So I get to the really good bit, you know the er... bedroom stuff and my eldest comes downstairs for a drink, I get him cleared back off to bed. The literally 2 peggin' minutes later hubs is home and wants to chat. I patiently place the laptop on the floor, nod, smile, laugh.
After about 20 mins he needs the loo. Thank goodness! Oh dear I had to re-read to get back into the moment.
*smirks*
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 10
The sexual tension is... *sigh*
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
Gosh I just simply love this. It so darn amusing and my heart is all puffed up and now I feel ridiculous. lol
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
I can't say any more than I did in my last comment...
Jasper's unspoken concern is nice. I'm pleased he's let her make her own mind up though.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 7
lmao, well written hun. I was cringing and laughing with these guys... The inner monologues were hilarious!
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
I want to keep him company, he's making me so sad.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 5
So glad you explained the sponsor thingy, I was thinking oh Edward runs too and this is only just being mentioned... It's been a long week for me, that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it. lol
The way you're describing those first new feelings when you attracted to someone and nervous is perfect. I find myself blushing on their behalf.
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
Loved this chapter hun. All I could focus on during his week though was how regular his bowels are... lol
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
I must be missing out on sooo much by not sniffing men. lol
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Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 2
It's funny, I don't care who Edward and Bella 'do' outside of the Saga, this is the first time I've felt comfortable about Bella being with an insider though...
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Reviewer: QuixoticalJuxtapositions (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
The end of this chapter- seeing Edward like that- made me sick. I actually felt horrified and a bit sick, and now I'm just in complete shock. When I first read "Then, just like that, just so easy like it's nothing, he raises a bottle to his lips." I almost wondered if you forgot he was an alcoholic, haha. I was just so shocked.
And I've never reviewed before, but I just wanted to say that your characters seem very realistic. The way they interact, the way Bella thinks, the way they act, etc. Authors of Twilight fanfic can sometimes get carried away with the fantasy of it all in all human fics, and it gets a little ridiculous. You however don't do this. I feel like this could all be happening, and between just normal people.
Reviewer: VampireGrin86 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 24
My first review but I've been with you for the past couple updates. I couldn't not let you know how awesome I think your story is. I love your ability to make me so absorbed into every moment of the story. The emotions throughout are so accessible. Edward's breakup, seeing him during his relapse at the bar, Edward and Bella's POV on their reunion, and the wedding.
I appreciate that you allow there to be a journey for Edward's redemption because I know when/if it happens; it will be that much sweeter.
Thank you. I look forward to more updates. :-)
Reviewer: JDSHANNON117 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 24
That was an awesome chapter. I love a great written conversation...thats part of the reason I loved twilight so much. I HOPE they are on their way to finding the way back to each other. I love that Bella admitted she is still angry and she doen't know how to get over it. I love that he can understand that. It was so well written... Can't wait for more. THANK YOU for sharing.
Reviewer: Ouiser Boudreaux (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 24
Dear Ms. TB,
I NEVER would have guessed that I would say this because I'm the definition of a happily ever after girl.... but *gulp* I'm going to be okay if they don't ride off into the sunset together in a flower filled horse drawn carriage to an island full of fluffy white sheets for weeks of sex filled days and nights. I kid I kid (kind of)
They are both in such a healthier, happier place and that some how feels authentic to me. That's not to say I'm not hoping for them to find their way back to each other romantically! Its just to say I think you've done an outstanding job with this story and these characters.
Thank you!
Cheers,
Ouiser
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 24
love it, cant wait for more :D
Reviewer: Addicted32 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 24
I feel nervous and on edge as this chapter closes...ugh
Reviewer: snix (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Whoa, I'm speachless... Nearly! lol
I guess it's safe to say he's a bit of a mess. *shakes head* Amazing start.
THAT is the most incredible chapter I think I have read in my life!
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