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Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 9
I've always had a thing for the Pixies...
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 8
Must be patient.... I have high hopes for them.
Reviewer: pennycocktail (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 7
I like it so far...
Reviewer: kammy24 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm eager to see where this is going, so far hes not spoke to her. Hes just being a customer, and you can;t read his mind---
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Reviewer: Miss Bear (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Detailed, deep and dirty. I like it :)
Reviewer: BoydBlog (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 27
That was so enjoyable, and heartbreaking. I started reading this maybe twelve month ago, not sure what happened, or how many chapter were posted back then, but when I remembered it and looked for it again, well, I had the best time re-reading it to the end xx
Thank you for writing xx
Reviewer: erock281990 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 27
This was a beautiful story inside and out. The way you are with words and how detailed you are is amazing. I also want to comment on the fact that Bella and Edward in this story is very realistic and I love how you didn't rush them getting together and you took your time developing the characters
Reviewer: chantiemaya (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2012 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 27
Wow, what a story. So well written, and so real, it touched me deeply. Thank you.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awwww, they're so cute tiptoeing around each other. (Was that a date? Yes? No? Should I ask her for another one?) Good story, keep it up.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 5
Curiouser and curiouser. I'm loving the literary allusions!
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start! I like it.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start! I like it.
Reviewer: msmar (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 9
You are an amazing writer. From your first artfully crafted sentence you have drawn me into a story that I just picked out of the blue. I love the way that you give bits of the familiar but weave it into an entirely different story. And really, how can I not love a writer that makes a reference to one of my favorite movies of all time. You rock!
Reviewer: pengeary (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 8
You have given these characters depth and animation with great skill. I appreciate the slow build.
Reviewer: pengeary (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
You, my dear, would make a great screenplay writer. I love your style. Keep it up.
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 27
beautiful beautiful ending, hard to do and you nailed it!!! thanks so much for this story, made me think a lot about my past, I still miss my alcoholic and wish things could have turned out as well as in your story =) best wishes meg
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 26
you just write dialogue so so well, I nearly melted when Edward said, " i got you" swoon!!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 22
sigh we all need a good girlfriend like Kate =)
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 20
wow, well done
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 19
very good, i used to be with an Edward, for a very long time and you write the alcoholic well, that flip that switches, the Dr. Jekyll-Mr. Hyde complex. Makes me cry just to read this- very overwhelming, but so well done- thanks
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, and I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond. "That flip that switches." All I can say is that I know exactly what you mean. Exactly.
Reviewer: mrsgamp (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
my hands look like two white birds in the dark...pale and shaking....
that is really nice...i think i'll remember that sentence
Reviewer: mrsgamp (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 4
really like the way you describe his breakfast in brackets eggs (scrambled),sausage(links), etc. don't recollect seeing that before..very creative.
Reviewer: mrsgamp (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 3
you are such a good writer''......i envy you
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 16
nice! i like this chapter! I completely missed that is was a actual puzzle, thought maybe it was metaphorical one =)
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