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Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 26

I let my dinner go cold to read this. It was worth it. Thank you so much for writing this. It's just been a beautiful read.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you've enjoyed it (so far, of course).

Reviewer: searchingforstories (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 26

...meaning, I can't believe it's already over. Darn...



Author's Response:

Me neither. Writing the last chapter made me a little sad. Such is life.

Reviewer: searchingforstories (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 26

already??? awwww.....

Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 26

He grins, looking shy.  "Yeah. You set off all the bells and whistles. You light me up."   

He kills me. I love him so.

This chapter made me giddy with smiles. I can't even tell you.

Thank you for updating! And I adore your playlist as usual.

xxoo
annie



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reviewing!

"He kills me. I love him so." Ah...I know the feeling.

Beach House rules. Glad you agree.

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 16

They're sooooo cute together! if you've ever seen the movie Julie and Julia, the look like the Julie and her husband in my mind. It's soo sweet. warms my heart...

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 14

i liked that they were honest and especially him of there history however i think it wasnt a good plan for them to be together like that...especially with her leaving in a couple months..,,what is she thinking?  she atleast should be the rational thinker here...and as for the sharing....how will she ever get married if she doesnt share a bed,,,,very lonely girl

Reviewer: laddymischief (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

okay. so i was gunna wait until i finished before i reviewed...but this is just too damn amazing.

 

i just had to say....

so yeah.

:)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 11

i loved that scene  but definitely not ready for that step...he should be sober for longer i think

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

Two lemons in a chapter; phew, your either really horny, or on a roll!

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 13

Sexy...

Reviewer: Mona Lisa (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

omg these two are so cute together! I'm loving the story so far :)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

i think bella has pretty high expectations of ppl and how she expects them to be ....eg the voting,littering, edwards opinion on cops,...there is ppl that work everyday and live innocent lives that hate cops,.,,does that make them bad ppl in her book? 

Edward has a really good heart,,,,he is always so unsure of himself and its so sad...i guess the drugs gave him confidence,,,it seems he started down the wrong path after his parents died



Author's Response:

God forbid she have opinions...and express them... ;-)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

There banter is entertaining...i am glad he can be open with her

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 8

she thinks he is weird?  she gets mad when ppl nmight take a bite of her food,,,just sayin,...

i am glad that they arent going to jump into anything,,,,

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

The date was kinda cute but her attitude at the end was for shit...yeah he littered a cigarette as most do because its not the same as throwing chip bags or whatever on the ground,,,but it wasnt even that it was that he offered to pick it up and was trying to be nice and she acted like a bitch and ignored him.,,,i am sorry but immature child much??  and edward?? he is very sensitive...he has so much anxiety and fear with everything that he does in regards to others.,,,he is being a nice guy and if someone doesnt approve of him then fuck them...you cant please everyone

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

wow you really paint edward as an asshole while he was high and drunk.  So different to his normal personality??? or does he not have one anymore,,,he seems very,,,,on the outside of things right now.  I am glad he felt extreme remorse for what he did to that woman at his apartment,,,no one should be treated like that as fucked as they get.  If he wasnt the dealer he might have been like that too.  i am curious if since he was a dealer then he must have had a nice apartment at some point unless he was a small time one of course.,,,,i am glad he told bella though it scared him too,,,,jasper seems like a good guy,,,i really thought from what alice said about seattle and all that that edward was her bro but i guess not..,.i wonder where his parents are and what about the cullens,,,,emmett and rose?

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well i didnt expect jasper to be an addict.,,,i wonder how he and alice met??  great so far

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

Edward is different....i am not used to this ooc edward,,,,i have seen ooc him before but not so dark unless he was a vamp...i like it in a way..,i feel bad that his friends or family are scared around him to push him back into that life but i totally get why they would be like that as well,....i am glad that he realizes how he acted before to woman and others wasnt good.  I hope he does apologize to his family for things,,,i would like to see those apologies from his pov as they would be interesting,.,i think he needs to smoke,.,,i know it isnt healthy but most addicts need an outlet and alot smoke,,,if you gave up alcohol drugs and smoking i think he would be over the edge and give up easier then if he had a little something to calm him down which smoking does.  Cant wait to see how bella and him interact,,,and who edwards family is....i would like to know where his family was while he was selling and high all the time,,what made him get that way in the first place,

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

i have to say i wonder how there relationship will work or any one that is in relationships with addicts.,..i mean if they date will she have to give up booze all together forever just for him? is that acceptable or expected?  i get the drugs maybe or if she just doesnt do it around him but definitely interesting....seth is interesting glad he said it straight out that they are only a sex thing and nothing more.  I am wondering at this point what edward is thinking....i think he is certainly aware of bella but proabably avoiding her because with rehab and all he is too afraid to get into relationships at this point...especially how he treated women in the first chapter,,,,eekkk...and what about jasper? i wonder his and edwards backstory...what made edward become an addict and dealer etc...

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Alice is interesting.,,,i have a feeling she didnt go to seattle cause of her brother edward if that is who she silently didnt talk about....Bella and mike best friends eh?  lol i like that its different and i am sick of stories where mike is a douche all the time.,,cant wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

       You made sooo unexpectedly not annoyed when the *boom boom* happend. I thought that, like every other fanfiction, the scene where the finally got together would be severly annoying; but you didn't! you made me smile and feel oddly proud of you; someone I don't know one thig about.

Reviewer: Julz04 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

I'm very much enjoying the story.  I really like how realistic your characters are and how you describe events in your story.  The way she didn't get off twice in a row with the greatest of ease being an example.  I'm looking forward to further developments.  I'm wondering if or when he's going to relapse.  You being the realistic kind of author, I'm expecting it as that's how it usually goes.  Thanks for you time and effort in entertaining the masses.  :D

Reviewer: bunnykitty (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 19

Even knowing it was coming from the beginning, it was painful nonetheless. It was the most painful thing I ever went through, again, and again, and again. I'm glad I am reading this story, although it is difficult.

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 8

This story makes me feel fuzzy inside. LOVE IT!

Reviewer: sugarlemons517 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 6

Edward is... sweet. That was my exact thoughts after I had read this chapter. I like how heavy this story is but at the same time its... sweet. it makes me love it on a whole other level. You know what I mean? It's probably my favorite story written for Twilight, EVER.

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