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Reviewer: YetAnotherJenny (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 26
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! I'm so in love with this chapter! While that was "spontaneous" it was still so mature for them! WTG E &B!
Reviewer: sass (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 26
So beautiful. Bella brings up valid points and I can understand her trepidations. And poor, sweet Edward He deserves so much. He makes me all fuzzy and hot and loose, just like Bella. lol
Wonderful update, thank you so very much!!
Author's Response: I appreciate it. Thank you. Hope you enjoy the final chapter.
Reviewer: amieforshort (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 26
I can't believe it is almost over. These guys have matured so much, their actions are proving the point. Edward meeting Charlie, their talk, even their ability to stop their intimacy all show how much. I look forward to your next update. Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for taking the time to leave some thoughts. =)
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 26
omg that's one of the sexiest, sweetest, most perfect chapters i've ever read.
WELL DONE!
i'm SO sad this is ending...i deeply hope you write something else!
Author's Response: THANK YOU! That's very sweet. =) I appreciate it.
Reviewer: chilenitta (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 26
i dont want to believe that it's all coming to an end. *pout*
i really, really love this story. the flow, the music.. it's all just amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: lzc (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh, please, tell me it's not the last chapter to come. (insert HUGE snotty, sniff here). Honestly, this has been such an incredible ride. You have such a lovely way with words, with a story, with characters. Just, thank you. This has been wonderful. Really. I'm just so sorry to see it all end. My fingers are crossed that you'll be writing something else that I'll happen upon.
Author's Response: If inspiration strikes, I'll most likely post it here, so...
Thanks for saying nice things about the story. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 26
God, I just love this story so much. I can't believe we are at the end. It has been a hell of a ride, but a great one!
Author's Response: Happy that you've been enjoying the read (and the ride, as it were). Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts.
Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 26
perfect.
Author's Response: thanks. =)
Reviewer: Izzy Whitlock (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 26
So good. So so good. I love how they are so raw and gritty and real and god, I just want it work out for them. I appreciate that it's not perfect and that they struggle. It will make their happiness so much more worthwhile.
Author's Response: Love your phrasing in your comments. "I love how they are so raw and gritty and real and god" in particular.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 26
I was wondering how that moment would be when they finally gave in. I was surprised that it didn't start with a kiss. It really felt natural though. I am glad they talked too. I loved the pin ball analogy. Surprisingly, I don't think I have heard that before.
Author's Response: "Surprisingly, I don't think I have heard that before." Success! =)
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: kellyprovence (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 26
*tears* just tears. so good! Happy tears!
Author's Response: Happy tears are good (right?).
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 26
you wring me outside out with thse chapters, love.
seriously.
i... swooned and sighed. i was about an inch away from the screen, drinking in the kissing and the touching, loving it, my tummy in knots, reading and re-reading.
and again, temepred with reality at the end. so perfect. i want things so much for them, i want the intensity and passion and love for them. the bells and whistles.
ahh.
bt i understand.
still, i hope.
Author's Response: Didn't your parents tell you that sitting too close to the screen will ruin your eyes? =)
Your comments are just...lovely (I use this word far too much but it applies). Compliments mean a lot coming from you. So thanks.
Reviewer: corie403 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 26
so sad it's ending!!
Author's Response: Yeah...but man and woman cannot sustain this level of angst forever. =)
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: idlehands (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 26
very very very well written. the emotion in this chapter was almost tangible. i loved it. can't wait for more. keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy the final chapter as well.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 26
great chapter! i love their talk..
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 26
I'm dying to know what made Edward take a chance! Excellent chapter, as always!
Author's Response: Sexual frustration? I kid, I kid...
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 26
I like the way you write the sex parts. It's more about what she's feeling than what he's doing to her.
Author's Response: That's what I'm going for, so great! =)
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: mommiluv42 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 26
I am seriously going to re-read this chapter over and over. I cried, got chills, smiled, laughed and got HOT. ;-) This was perfection. Pure perfection.
Author's Response: Hope the next chapter does half as much for you. ;) Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Nirbaan (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 26
Thank you for the chapter. It was beautifully done. I am sad to think the next one will be the last. I have come to love this story so deeply that parting ways with this incarnation of Bella and Edward will be painful. I can't even hazard a guess as to how this will end!
Would love to hear about your future projects.
Thank you:)
Author's Response: Thanks! And if I do write anything else, I'll post it on Twilighted. I'm going to miss writing this story as well.
Reviewer: AuroraBlue (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 26
Wow! Great chapter...again.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: H3ra (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 26
ahhhh symbolism love
Author's Response: I know, right? Would you believe me if I told you it was accidental? (Maybe not subconsciously, but consciously...)
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 26
Perfect. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Succinct! But lovely. Thanks.
Reviewer: livindol (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 26
*Sigh* I can't believe it's over already....I liked this chapter, they were being so completely honest. I'm impressed with his willpower and I really think he's going to make it this time, but one never knows. xoxo
Author's Response: It's hard for me to believe I started posting this story over a year ago. (!)
Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 26
amazing! The make out session was stellar but the honesty of their conversation is what made this chapter so amazing to me!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your comments about the dialogue - I take some time with it. Of course, calling the make out session stellar is also pretty complimentary. So thanks for that, too. =)
Reviewer: Autumnltd (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 26
This story has been such an emotional ride - I will miss it when it is complete but am glad to have taken it...
Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed all of it (most of it?). Thanks for reviewing.
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