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Reviewer: Sparkly1 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow... How can I hate Edward the dealer so much for how he treated that strung out lady, yet in the next section totally feel for Edward the recovering addict as he's crying while telling his story at his meeting? Makes me re-evaluate my snap judgement, book by it's cover self.
Hmmm... soul search much? Hehehe! Continuing on to the next chapter...
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2013 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 27
Awwww. Brilliant! . Made me smile. I think they'll do fine. A little sad they might not have a child but hey ho, thingsjust might change. I absolutely loved this story. Loved their conversations n it felt truly real like I was a fly on the wall. Thank you so much x gonna miss this Edward n Bella.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 26
Awwww.. I love this story so darn much, don't want it to end...... But running on. So hope they make it!
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 25
Awww. FAB chapter. Love how they're good friends again. Love Carlisle n Esme too. Running on but don't want the story to end.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wonderful chapter - thoroughly enjoyed it! Am so glad they got on and were honest with one another. Hope they can become more than friends tho. Can't help it!! I loved hearing about what Edward had been up to - thanks for that! Gotta go sleep now - work in morning & its 1.15am... but so want to carry on reading! lol Havent had a story grab me like this in ages!!
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 23
Amazing chapter!! Loved it. Still want Bella to let rip at him tho, lol Their conversations were fascinating - fantastic writing!! I was at work & dying for it to end so I could read on the way home. I was curious about what Edward had been doing during the last 3 yrs - the little inbetween things not mentioned. Where he finally got the strength to pull himself together & get clean & stay clean. Am so addicted to knowing about him. lol ;)
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 22
Brill chapter, so relievedwhen Bella packed in Jake. Oh btw forgot to say when Edward started playing piano at night at school, broke my heart but i loved it! Soz reviewing from car
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 21
God damn it took a while but praying he can hold it together this time. FAB chapter!!! love reading this, fantastic writing!! Loved it when Jasper gave him some hard truth, had to be done. Edward can only do this himself. Running on.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh Fuck Edward what have u done!! Loved all the chapters but twi keeps throwing me out when I post review n I needed to read on. :-)
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K
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 20
Sodding Hell Edward!! My heart is breaking for him.... but atleast he finally realises... he wants to get better. God bless Jasper, thank God he's there.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Shit!! Bloody Hell Edward!! Fab chapter - great writing. For a minute I thought maybe its possibly a light beer - but then the sneer. OMG Poor Bella - thats gotta hurt. Feel so sorry for her. Silly Edward. Looking fwd to seeing where this goes. Praying he's not doing drugs or dealing.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 16
Love ya!!! Just wanted to say first time I've read where Bella got cystitis - about sodding time ~ more true to life than other ff stories, thanks for that!! & Brill writing as always. I love these two
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh Fuck Edward what have u done!! Loved all the chapters but twi keeps throwing me out when I post review n I needed to read on. :-)
o
K
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 14
HOT HOT HOT!! Loved it!!! Brilliant...you captured the moment the feelings so bloody well Before n after! Bravo!! I also like how she didnt come straight away - makes a change in ff!
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 12
Fab chapter!! Am glad Bella isnt a virgin - my mistake with her not sleepoing with Seth. HOT chapter.... Lord knows how she managed such self control, lol Runnign on
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 12
Lovely chapter. Love how they're taking it slow - even tho' I think both want it full on. Bella's so careing of Edwards feelings, trying not to rush him plus guessing she's a little afraid too being a virgin.
Brilliantly written tho ~ could feel the electricity in the the air... the tension... the tenderness.... the heat *fans self* Brill... running on
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
I wondered if he'd go to Forks. OMG!! what a chapter!! God that kissing session was fantastic, so real I could visualize it so much. Ahhh I got to go sleep, its 2am, but cant wait to read more tomorrow!! LOVE IT!! ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
Lovely chapter!! So kind of Edward so drive her ~ thought he might offer. Cant wait to see, in the future, what Charlie thinks when he finds out who she's friends with. Running on... ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 9
Loved all the banter. They're getting more comfortable with one another ~ its nice. Lovely infact. She really likes Edward, gotta be hard thinking they can only be friends. I was a little shocked tbh that she went back to Seth ~ but then understandable... a girl has needs rt. Am thinking she was thinking about Edward tho when she took Seth in her mouth. Its good that Edward is comfortable enough to talk to her about stuff, drugs etc. Running on...
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
Awww... Such an endng to a lovely night. Poor Bella gonna be so confused me thinks. Loving it! Running on...
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7
Awww - fab chapter. Loved it! Both so shy.... felt like I was watching on tv. You captured everything so well! Looking fwd to their date on Saturday - wonder what film they'll watch.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Edward, such a mundane life at the mo. He'd be ok playing piano in a blues bar - only problem is it'd be a bar ~ could he resist the alcohol. Could he have one drink.... or like he says 1 drink leads to more... leads to drugs... But then again, was he more a druggie than a alcoholic. Could he have a drink without becoming addicted again, to both? I dont know.. Am interested to see what he's going to do in the future tho. Guess he could maybe study ~ evening classes. Am intrigued... Am hooked on him. ;-D
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2013 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 5
Fab chapter. Secrets coming out... I like it!! Poor Jasper ~ guessing thats why Alice never moved away.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Poor Edward, he's in a hard place, but he's hangin on. Brilliant insight into his world right now.
Reviewer: pussygalore47 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2013 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 3
Aahhhhh.... am dying to hear Edward talk.. lol Running on. Love your style of writing. Loving the characters.
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