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Reviews For Married at 18
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 08:19 PM · On: The Stepsister

keep this up ... love this story

Reviewer: Mtarbox8279 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:41 PM · On: The Stepsister

Gonna keep it short and sweet... LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: The Stepsister

ooh, scandal! love it!

Reviewer: Canet (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:57 PM · On: The Stepsister

oh my!! what will happen next?? update sooon!

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:40 PM · On: The Stepsister

Jane is a freak! But she's hilarious! Your fic is so funny. I still hate McBastard.  I think Edward hates her because well, she's not falling all over her ass worshipping his beautiful crotch, or whatever, hahaha! But Bella is not as GOOD as she thinks she is? Something to do with another boy perhaps? hmm...update soon pls!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:32 PM · On: The Stepsister

Truly inspiring story.  A new avenue.  Really enjoying the first three chapters.  Looking forward to upcoming chapters.  Like getting a place, furnishing it, etc.... Of course, if they were really starting out thrift store furniture and housewares or garage sales.  I can't see Edward taking this step.  Are you sure he's going to be nice somewhere down the road.  He has convinced the judge in favor of his side, leaving Bella to just follow along.  Marriage is a two way street.  Equal participation in decision making for the household.  looking forward to future chapters for their budding relationship and banter back and forth.  Update when you can.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:26 PM · On: The Stepsister

wow until next time

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:21 PM · On: The Stepsister

This is a fuck awesome story

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:19 PM · On: The Stepsister

okay yeah hi... i am so CONFUZZELED! .. i mean is this gonna be like an all coannon-cuppeling thing with like the six of them +human couples too or just like a whole bunch of mix match things... and who is related to who?.. obviously emmet? is tanya's baby daddy... right?... but then what about rose? i know you metioned her a little in here but.. just way to much information of process right now.. maybe you could brake it down a little for us..?

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:26 PM · On: The Stepsister

oh my heck what a start!

Reviewer: BellasMommy (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:53 PM · On: The Stepsister

omg i effing love your story!!!!!

you need to post more chapters fast!

i want to know what happens!

so get to typing chic!!

Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:46 PM · On: The Stepsister

so tania is not having edgard baby? please update soon

Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:53 AM · On: The Stepsister

WTF?????????????????? Tanya fucking Cullen?????!!!!!!!!! Are you kiddin me?????????

Anyway... What outfits do u need?? Please answer if u have time...

Reviewer: truemidnite (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 09:43 AM · On: The Stepsister

intriguing.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:44 AM · On: The Stepsister

Hey cool chap =] Omg Angsty plot twist lol

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 08:14 AM · On: The Stepsister

Fabulous update! Can't wait to see where this will go...

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:26 AM · On: The Stepsister

Great chapter. The gossiping session was funny to read about. Not really because of what was said but the mental image it brought up. Anyway, who's baby is Tanya having? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:19 AM · On: The Stepsister

I can't wait to find out why all the hatin' is going on!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:13 AM · On: The Stepsister

Thanks for updating! :-)

Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:21 AM · On: The Stepsister

The reason why you are getting so much attention is because of the way you have the charaters speak and think. You have Bella pissed off and talking like a real life crazy cursing teen. She doesn't like putting up with the BS. I loved Jane superficial ass. My friend has a step sister just like Jane. She is all about her looks and thinks the world revolves around her.

I love where you are going with this story. Bring us more as soon as you can. Great job. I laughed too. 

~Shani

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:21 AM · On: The Stepsister

I REALLY will be pissed off if Tanya is truly pregnent by Edward!

Reviewer: EmpressOperaDiva (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:13 AM · On: The Stepsister

I'm excited by this story... It's still so new but it's getting be hooked already! Please update soon! I am excited to see Edward start becominga  good guy. And Holy Potty Mouth Batman with Bella..,. I LOVE IT!

 

Thanks Again,

Michelle

Reviewer: tinaababy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 11:23 PM · On: The Stepsister

I;m wondering if Tanya is Edward's cousin or something. Since you said he isn't the 'bad guy' in this then I'm thinking he's not Tanya's babys daddy. LOL that sounded weird.

Anyways, it'll be interesting to see who's related to who and whatnot. :)

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:20 PM · On: The Stepsister

The-ra-py! The-ra-py! I need some guidance :)

Reviewer: Daisy-Chain (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:18 PM · On: The Stepsister

Wow.

Jane was amazing. i find nothing more difficult than creating a character who can chew an ear off like that. Incredible.

Great chapter finish too. That was well worked up to.

Good stuff!

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