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Reviewer: Sparkly1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2013 06:10 PM · On: Going home (content1)
I registered at Twilighted just to read this story. It was recommended in another story I was reading on FanFiction.net: How to Seduce a Werewolf. I really enjoyed this. I don't know how long ago you last posted a chapter, or if you're even continuing this story, but it certainly gave me a lot of food for thought. I liked the conflict with Jacob and Edward on the possible necessity of turning Bella into a vampire. Funny that Jacob's pro vampire, and Edward, even faced with Bella's iminent death, is still hesitant. You've got me thinking about where Bella will turn if she does indeed get turned into a vampire. Will she stay with Jacob? Or will she gravitate back to the Cullens. Interesting that Edward made Jacob and Bella's backyard meadow part Quilleute and part Cullen territory. It opens the door for MANY possibilities.
And I don't know how overdue this is... but congratulations! I LOVED your author's note about your pee stick having two lines. It made me happy for you.
Sparkly1
Reviewer: Prost2000 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 12:19 PM · On: Surprises
Do you write a next chapter? Looking forward for it......
Reviewer: jobops (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Surprises
Are you planning to continue? I am really enjoying the interplay between Edward and Jacob, and can't wait to see how it all plays out.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Surprises
Wow, loved the proposal. Simple and to the point. Nothing fancy. Can't wait to see what will happen next.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Now What
Now actually Billy's speech made me cry :-(
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 06:02 AM · On: Decisive indecision
I wonder where you will take us with your story.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Another hospital room
:-(
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 02:28 AM · On: Life is what happens
You sure know how to keep me on edge with your story.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 01:31 AM · On: A Not So Subtle Message
Eek. Can't believe he watched them. Can't believe let him watch? OMG Wait till Bella finds out. Omg
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Want
Gosh darnit!!! What a creepy stalker. Uhm, did I mention my dislike for Ed-stalk already?
Can you please go back to Bella's or Jake's POV?
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Struggle in the jungle
Will he ever learn that what he's doing is called stalking and that this is creepy?
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 02:46 PM · On: The End in the Beginning
Another well done chapter.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Aftermath
Charlie coming into her room finding her asleep with Jake = prizeless. Who is walking in on her in ghe meadow?
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 01:54 PM · On: Waiting
Interesting start. Hope Bella will get over it and finally realise what she really has in Jake.
Reviewer: lunachic (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Surprises
Jake is so sweet! I can't beleive Alice knows what'll happen and still won't give us a clue!
Reviewer: dls84 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 07:58 PM · On: Waiting
Love it
Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 06:29 AM · On: Going home (content1)
This chapter makes my heart ache for Edward and yes even for Jacob. Great story telling.
Reviewer: A_ALIgator (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 10:20 AM · On: Another hospital room
seems Jake might ask eddy to change bella.bella.
Reviewer: Cadimogirl (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Surprises
Wow I just read the whole thing. And I got to say I LOVE it.
I was never NEVER a J/B fan I actually detest it. But now I want Bella to stay with Jacob I couldn't care less about Edward.
Oh God please tell me Bella Is staying with Jacob….
You are an amazing writer. Thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, and thanks for the incredible compliment!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:33 PM · On: Surprises
Even though i am team Edward, that was a very sweet chapter
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope that I am managing to make both sides of the divide happy (for now at least)! And thank you for the reviews. I see the counter for reads going up, but without reviews it's hard to know if I'm making people happy.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 09:41 AM · On: Surprises
P.S. See. Long chapters are good. And thanks so much for my present. It was just what I wanted!
Author's Response: I try!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Surprises
Damn, girl, what do you think? I adored it!! From beginning to end. Charlie was cute, Bella and her fears about Jake's imprinting was very well done, Jake was darling as ever, and the sex scene was perfect.
So nice to have a cheery, sexy chapter again. I miss Jake and Bella together. Still can't believe you're going to rip them apart. *sigh*
Thanks so much for updating, sweetie. It's ridiculous that people aren't reviewing this great story. It's so well done. You are a tremendous writer, dear one.
Author's Response: Thanks Lee! I'm glad you liked it, I worried that maybe I had twisted it too much, finishing so far from where we started.
Bella is always so uncertain of relationships, I thought fears over his imprinting were valid. Truly, that is always a concern.
Working on the next chappie!
Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Exit strategy
Just found this one. Very nice. Hoping that Bella can somehow get a miracle and get a happy ever after with Jake. I'm not usually a big fan of her and Jake, but I like it here. Edward is a bit (or more than a bit) creepy.
Author's Response: Thanks for finding me! Creepy...hmm, I didn't really mean to make him creepy. I just wondered if this is the way he would have responded. As I have said many times, I try to keep my characters IN character as much as I can manage without being SM. So far I've managed to walk the line between B/J and B/E fans, hoping to keep it up (for a while at least)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Exit strategy
Can't wait to see the proposal
Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 06:42 PM · On: Exit strategy
Poor Edward. I can't imagine what it is like for him to be there but not really be there at the same time. Can't wait for more.
Alaina
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