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Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 3
Love it so far my only advise longer detailed chapters your on a decadent start
Reviewer: MeyaRose (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the story so far! I'm interested in Edward's reaction at Clint, to be sure!
Reviewer: aaahhhtwilight (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the story. I wish there was more. Get it here already, I'm dying to find out what goes on.
Reviewer: aaahhhtwilight (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
I like the story. I wish there was more. Get it here already, I'm dying to find out what goes on.
Reviewer: NICOL3 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
please add more chapterssss
Reviewer: huntergirl89 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
Really like the story so far update soon
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
This seems like its going to be a great story rockin w edward.
also would you like a banner. I make them and this story is great. Check out my thread and let me know.
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=5683
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
So far, I like it, can't wait to read a little more. But I am a little confused, in your summary it says that Bella is a single mom working at the grocery store when she meets Edward so that means she already has a baby, but it also says something about will Edward stay around after he sees her stomach start to grow so does that mean she is going to have another baby?
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 3
VERY good... cant wait for the next installment
Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
It will be interesting to see Jake's first appearance next chapter, but at least Edward will make an appearance, too. I want some more Bella and Edward together time.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 3
Good thing I'm team Edward. ;-)
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is very cute!
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
WOnderful! Please update soon!! I am loving this story!
Reviewer: djjajacool (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
well im not a die hard Jake fan or a fan of him at all he got on my nerves. Im sorry if this situation happened to you I take it that you are doing better now. I do like this story it is interesting. I especially like how her friends moved with her to help her out and just to be near. actually on both sides.....
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 3
Edward was also taken with Bella, so much that his friends caught it as soon as he got home. And they both seem happy to see Edward thinking about someone. The same goes for Bella and the girls.
So... how soon will Edward need to go grocery shopping again? Perhaps for pickles ;)
Lets hope Jake doesn't cause too much trouble for Bella tomorrow.
Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
Just found this tsory and I loooove it :P
I have to say that my favourite bit so far was Edward's POV though, because I think you did it really, really well. I love how you've made him, and I love the interaction with Emmett and Jasper - which was hilarious! :P
Everyone here is portrayed really well, and is totally awesome! :P I love them all! And the plot is super! Plus your writing style rocks :D ...oh and I always love a nasty Jake :P
I hpoe to see lots of Edward/Bella action, and some Edward kicking Jake's ass maybe? ....
Can't wait for more!!! :D
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P.S. Didn't turn out the way I wanted, but I was bored, and I suppose I ought to send it anyway... http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Rolled-Over-Beethoven/CUOAF.jpg Blah... :P
Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Just found this tsory and I loooove it :P
I have to say that my favourite bit so far was Edward's POV though, because I think you did it really, really well. I love how you've made him, and I love the interaction with Emmett and Jasper - which was hilarious! :P
Everyone here is portrayed really well, and is totally awesome! :P I love them all! And the plot is super! Plus your writing style rocks :D ...oh and I always love a nasty Jake :P
I hpoe to see lots of Edward/Bella action, and some Edward kicking Jake's ass maybe? ....
Can't wait for more!!! :D
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P.S. Didn't turn out the way I wanted, but I was bored, and I suppose I ought to send it anyway... http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt46/Rolled-Over-Beethoven/CUOAF.jpg Blah... :P
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loving this story....Excited to see where you take it.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 3
keep up the good work!! i am very interested in seeing where this goes!
Reviewer: MadisonAshlee (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
I have to admit, I was a little startled when I first read that Jake was Bella's ex. But I can see it.
So far, great story. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
I can't wait until Edward and Bella get together.
And Jake? >_< Is Edward going to save her?
Please, please, please update soon?
Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOL, I totally laughed my ass off when Bella was staring at Edward's crotch. Of course, who could blame her? So Edward and Bella finally meet. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: addictedtotwilight116 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Going Home
This story looks interesting so far. I'm glad that Bella finally got out of the relationship with Jacob, not only for her, but for Clint as well. It's sweet to see that Alice and Rose came to help Bella.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Thoroughly enjoyed this :D
Author's Response: thank you so much! im glad!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awww...sweet clumsy Bella...feelin' the love...
I'm still worried about Jacob reappearing in her and Clint's lives...
Keep us posted:)
Author's Response: he will def. make a reappearance. be forewarned, i dont like jacob... or who he represents in the story to me lol. so it wont be pretty.
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