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Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Progress
I'm very glad Alice is seeing Jasper and not Jake. That would be awkward. Looking forward to finding out whose baby it is, even if there is no child.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Revelations
Wow, Jessica's mother didn't even know? Perhaps that's because she isn't pregnant at all...or that Jess is trying to hide who the real father is.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:59 PM · On: An Early Christmas Gift
Thank you for the lack of heartfail in this chapter. I'm not sure these two could take it, lol!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Movie Night
I love Christmas movies. It's too bad these two are so confused about each other. :-(
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Reality Bites
Poor Edward...I hope he fights hard for her, but Bella is right. She does need to take care of herself.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:04 PM · On: You're Invited
I'm with Edward...I would want to know, one way or another, whether the responsibility was mine or not.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Homecoming
I love your Esme. She's good for Bella.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:44 PM · On: The Cullens' Kitchen
Whew, that kitchen scene was worth a review just on it's own! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Esme's Intervention
This was a hard chapter to read. I'm glad Esme came along...Bella is in good hands now. I hope Carlisle is all right.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 05:45 PM · On: The Truth Shall Set You Free
Wow, Bella took that much better than I would have thought, though I would have thrown up too. Good job with this chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
Another great chapter, bb. Poor Edward, ticking the time down until he thinks Bella will leave him. :-(
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:57 PM · On: A Family Breakfast
I don't think Carlisle's requests of Edward are unreasonable, and I'm interested in finding out what happens when Carlisle does an ultrasound or something on her. Is she faking? Is she really pregnant, but it's not his? Is it his? So much coming up!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Bella's Secret
That was a hard chapter to read, plus Edward still didn't tell Bella what happened with Jessica. I hope she's actually having Mike Newton's baby or something...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 04:17 PM · On: An Addition to the Family
I'm not so sure the puppy was a good idea, lol! But some truth comes out.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 01:10 PM · On: The Cullens
Oh man. That flashback with Charlie was tough to read. Carlisle (in this story) is definitely the father Bella should have had. I'm interested in Edward's list of errands, and I can't imagine James coming to Forks would be a good thing.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Pity Parties
Ooh, sneaky Esme. Good thinking on her part of getting Edward out of the house.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Insensitive
And he didn't even get to tell her Jessica's big news. Though I would hope he's not the father...and he should have been a LOT nicer about letting her know he wanted to use one.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:18 PM · On: The Horrible Truth
Oh man...Jake AND Jessica in one chapter? These two are in for it...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:00 PM · On: The Truth
We got a lot from this chapter, and very little, too. Definitely keeps you hungry for more! :-)
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Disappointment
Sounds like there are some more confessions coming up! This is gonna be gooood.... And I'm definitely a bit worried about Charlie, what with his drinking problem and overdrawn account and all...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Stay
Whew...what a tough thing for a teenage boy to find out. No wonder he's been angry with Bella, though I believe her that she didn't say anything. I'm pretty sure he doesn't know about the baby, though....
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Dr. Cullen Strikes Again
I called it! Well, mentally, anyway. I had a suspicion she got pregnant and lost it. This was my favorite chapter so far...very well-written and paced perfectly.
p.s. I just noticed you're a new beta here! Congrats, and welcome to the partay!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 01:05 PM · On: The Sweetest Thing
That was so sweet! I'm with Bella...Edward probably wouldn't act so nicely to her if he didn't feel SOMETHING...
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Starting Something
A little too intimate, huh? I can see these two feeling that way. Excellent job.
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:19 PM · On: But for now, Love, let's be real
I'll bet Edward feels more than hate toward Bella, he just doesn't want to admit to it. Excellent lemon, very hot. :-)
xoxo Sarah
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