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Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Sleepover
all I gotta say is Bella better be happy in the end because u have tortured the shit out of her. As for Edward eh who really cares about his happiness level... not saying i hate him but every single thing thats gone wrong is because of him. And no you can't help who you love but at that age... you might love them then but A LOT of changing is done in your twenties... trust me I know. I was told that when I was 17 and I didn't believe it but now I'm sorry to say its true I hate proving myself wrong.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Sleepover
So mature and then so not. I am on pins and needles waiting for Jessica to get hers! Soon Please!!!!
Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Progress
Can we keep them together now? Bella is giving me whiplash... Speaking of, can someone whip Jessica Stanley... it can't be Edward's baby. I really think it would do Bella in for good, no matter how much she is drawn to him. With Bella's inability to have kids, it would always be a reminder of the baby they lost. Kick Jessica and her baby to another baby daddy and let Edward and Bella be happy - alone.
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Progress
oh, thank goodness. The thought of Alice and Jake just squicked me out fiercely!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Progress
OK--------enough of the Jessica angst! She's got to be faking this whole thing--------so can the next chapter reveal her for the big liar that she is? Please? Or does she plan on kidnapping a real pregnant woman and stealing the baby? Is she really that desperate? Especially since a paternity test would be a certainty? The clock is ticking Jess! Time to face the music...and time for E&B to have some happiness.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Progress
I love how Alcie responded "My boyfriend!" Thank you for the quick updates!!!
Reviewer: browneyes1970 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:54 PM · On: A Fair Warning
I'm giving you all the LOVE there is but right now I hate Edward
Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Progress
ok please tell me that this baby crap is just that a bunch of her lying crap
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Progress
I'm thinking that Jessica is faking the pregnancy...or at least that's what I am hoping for! =)
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Progress
NOOOO you cannot end it sooo soon!!!!!
THat is fan fic murder!!!!!!
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Progress
My vote is no baby at all. But I guess time will tell what you have on your mind. Great job with the story.
Reviewer: CliodnaWrites (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Progress
In Re: the baby - Personally I'm hoping there IS actually one, just that it turns out it's not Edward's :D
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Progress
can't wait for more
Reviewer: fanpire1 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Progress
please no baby at all bella been thru enought
Reviewer: JStone78 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:47 PM · On: Progress
Make the pregnancy fake.
Reviewer: edwardftw85 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Progress
I love that the dogs name is Eddie thats awesome... hehe because thats exactly what Edward is in this story... a DOG. Boy needs to learn how to use condoms...As for Bella well she needs to sit back and REALLY think about EVERYTHING because she is flip-floping entirely too much. But over all it is a good story... I just don't see everyone or anyone getting the HEA but thats how life goes sometimes.
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:21 PM · On: Progress
really really good!!! I so hope the babyisn't edwards though!
Reviewer: Like_a_meteor (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:10 PM · On: An Early Christmas Gift
Sweet! Especially this, it made me squee a little: "I love you so much. So much, Bella. I wish I could fix everything for you. I promise, if you ever need me, for anything. I'm yours. I'm just waiting for you."
Just had to say that before I continue....!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Revelations
poor Bella. nothing ever goes right for her -- yet!
Reviewer: crevaine (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Revelations
Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Revelations
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:17 PM · On: An Early Christmas Gift
Great way to bring the truck in!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Revelations
So glad you posted these! The last two chapters made me feel better after a really rough day!
Author's Response: aww, i'm glad you feel better! i'm trying to get twilighted totally caught up to fanfiction.net. also, chapter 33 is at the beta right now! it'll be updated tomorrow =)
Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Revelations
i'm not ready for it to be over either! LOL i get so damned atttached to these stories, i almost get a little sad when their over. pathetic, i know haha! but you're doing a great job! i absolutely LOVEEE this story!! :)
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Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Revelations
can't wait for more
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