Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: toecoe01 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Trapped
lol
rather funny i have to say quite perverted though watching your own brother have sex:L
Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Trapped
OMG PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS!! I AM IN LOVE!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Trapped
Yuuuummmmmm.
Reviewer: ihearta7x (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Trapped
Hott! But it would have been funny for them to get busted!! :)
Author's Response: It would have been, but I felt it would distract me from the hotness. Rose and Emmett have a tendency to get carried away in my mind.
Reviewer: ipodRlover (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:25 AM · On: Trapped
haha love your work!
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2008 12:42 AM · On: Trapped
hell yes. Loved it. God Damn! that was so hot! are you sure it's only going to be a oneshot? because I would definilty love you if you continued.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading; I'm glad you liked it. And though it began as a oneshot, I was talked into writing a sequel, Freed. It's up here on Twilighted.
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 05:53 PM · On: Trapped
i loved it you should write a sequel
Author's Response: I plan on it and it's partially written. It may be a little while, though, before it's posted. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: shookie (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 01:43 PM · On: Trapped
I would really like to read more from this story. Like how they get out and how things turn out. That was just hot
Author's Response: Well, you'll be getting your wish. Eventually. I have part of the sequel written, but I need to go back and edit some things. Just a note: don't write when you're half-asleep. It just turns out a little weird. lol.
Reviewer: Twilighter826 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 07:25 PM · On: Trapped
That was absolutely - positively, one of the best one-shots I have ever read! I shouldn't call it a one-shot though because you're defintely going to write more... Well I hope you are. Please...pretty please...with an Edward on top!
Author's Response: Yep, there's going to be more. Okay, just one more, but still more.
Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 01:00 AM · On: Trapped
I've read this 2x! When it came out, and now...now lol. This is so HOT! I'd really love it if you continued the story from this point on...pretty please?
Author's Response: Thank you for the read. :D That's awesome. And I will be doing a sequel, but it's only one chapter. It's still better than nothing, though, right? lol.
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Trapped
oh.mi.god.!!!! that was absolutely amazing! E/B sex while locked in a closet and watching Em/R sex!!!!??!?!?!?!? you are officially 100% BRILIANT!!! but yeah you soooo have to do a second one. maybe a really LONG whole multi chapter fic...;D no, but really, this could be like a deleted scene or something...*hint*hint* really good. Amazing!
Author's Response: Well, I've been talked into doing a sequel, but it's a little slow going (then again, I've only been half-awake for the past few days so that's probably why). It won't be multi-chaptered or a deleted scene, rather Edward and Bella somewhere they can make as much noise as they want. Thank you for reading the story. :)
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 04:01 PM · On: Trapped
Holy HOTTNESS!!! This was amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Trapped
Now I'm curious how they got out of the closet. That was greatness.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The how they got out is simple. They waited for Emmett and Rose to take Round Two into the bedroom and they'd quickly sneak back out the way they snuck in to begin with. Bella would, however, leave all Rose's underthings in the coat closet. She's no longer drunk and doesn't want her blonde friend to beat the crap out of her. Yes, I've thought about this all way too much.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 10:32 AM · On: Trapped
Ahh I'm sure Alice saw this coming, which was why she sent Bella over in the first place!! Sneaky Alice!!
Author's Response: Actually, it was pure coincidence. I think that human Alice definitely has some 'feelings' about things, but when she's so drunk she's about to fall off her chair and actually seriously creates a dare involving Rose's panties after the college incident, then any feelings she has are completely negated. No one had any idea that Edward and Bella would end up there at the same time and have the bad (or should that be good?) luck of being stuck in the closet together.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 02:37 AM · On: Trapped
WOW! . . . . . that was soooo HOT! *fans self* Amazing job, loved every minute of it. :) ~Cat~
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: bspest04 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 09:57 PM · On: Trapped
w.o.w. that was sooo hot!! i def liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad everyone seems to be enjoying it.
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 06:56 PM · On: Trapped
HOT! Very well done! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Trapped
Amazing. Wow.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 06:08 PM · On: Trapped
is this just a one shot
Author's Response: At this point in time it is. Someday I might write a sequel, but I'm not even considering it at this moment. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 05:32 PM · On: Trapped
***waves hand in air**** I'll scream all night!!!! Guh, I need a drink, what a ride!
Author's Response: lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
