I've really enjoyed this story.  Do you have any plans to update it anytime soon? I hope so!!

Thanks for updating the story! I love it and hope you'll finish it one day

Wow! What an absolutely fantastic idea! I've read Edward as a doctor, bartender, architect, many, many things! But a ghost is a brillaint idea! I love it! And now everything is explained, there is so much more to find out! I take it he really is expired, not in a coma. I know a funeral was mentioned. So want know more, looking forward to the next update!

I'm so relieved, I was really freaking out about chapter nine! I'm so glad Edward saved Bella, again. So glad he finally told her what he was, and she got her answers. So happy that he told her he loves her and now they can be together. Although that could bring up issues that I'm not even going to get into because I don't know if you are going to finish this story or not. I was slowly piecing everything together, but I never thought of him being a ghost, and Jasper too! But all the stuff I was adding up in my mind came kind of close, maybe a tiny bit? This has been so much fun reading, I really hope you are going to finish it. I love this story, your idea was so original. =)

So what, now Edward can fly or jump three stories down out of a window? This story is seriously messing with my mind! LOL :) Well, Bella wanted to be in Edwards room, I guess she's getting her wish. I wonder if she'll get anything else she wants? I doubt that Edward would think that was proper.

I'll start with the good, I'm so happy that Bella has Alice as a friend...I'm thrilled that Edward seems taken with Bella and she obviously likes him, after all he's giving her the contact she's been craving for so long, plus it doesn't hurt that he's gorgeous...Now for the weird and unexplained; I've noticed things piling up in my brain, like the fact that Edward had no lunch tray that one day, he had no books, paper, pencils, or pens for class, he started to take notes in class, then stopped like it wasn't important. He said he was glad she was okay when she mentioned that her truck broke down, kind of like he knew something, but what? How did he get to the house, there was no other car, and he could have gotten a ride with Alice or even Bella. I wondered as Bella did why there wasn't much food in the fridge for there were three people living in the house, and why did neither Edward or Jasper eat anything? Oh, the other thing I just noticed is that Edward is kind of old fashioned, and he was awfully vague about his past...

This is the most interesting story I've read so far. I like Alice, she doesn't seem weird to me, maybe a little quirky but we'll see what she's like when Bella spends the night with her on Saturday night. Alice and Edward seem to have some kind of connection but I can't put my finger on it. Why was he staring and glaring at Bella, being kind of mean to her at lunch, then all apologetic to her later? Poor Bella she's been craving human contact for so long that when Edward held her hand she passed out. What's with him being all cryptic with his knowing she's been alone 'too' and  said "You're not as alone as you think." And why is his skin so cold? Why are he and Alice the only ones to touch her bare skin, when even Bella's own parents never did? I'm going to go insane trying to figure this out! But I love it! I can't wait for the 'sleep' over. I also can't wait to meet Alice's boyfriend...Here's a random thought, since when do college aged people have sleep overs?

I honestly don't know what to think at this point. I need more info. Need to read a little more! Why did Jacob run away from her? I don't understand why her parents never told her anything about what happened. Maybe they don't know why she feels different to the touch, or maybe she's giving off some kind of weird energy like static electricity, oh I don't know, I'm just guessing at this point. Bella was wearing gloves yet Alice shook her hand, maybe a little hesitant at first and yes, she seemed to ponder something, but at least she didn't shy away from her. Mike acted like he was almost afraid to touch her, but he did at least lightly shake her hand. I just don't get why no one will touch her bare skin, or not even get close to her, except her parents. I think maybe Alice is clairvoyant or maybe somekind of a psychic or something. I'm still guessing at this point, so on to the next chapter! I love a good mystery. ;) 

I blinked in surprise and then absolute delight when I saw an update for this story in my inbox.  I emailed you a while back to ask about it, as it has come into my mind on many occasions, so I was THRILLED to see a new chapter!  Thank you so much for not giving up on this!  I love the plot line that you revealed as well - unique and unexpected, but really well done.  There is something so deeply poignant and moving about this story and its characters.  Even with only 10 chapters so far, I have grown so fond of them all and so concerned for their welfare.  I really hope to see an update again soon whenever you can spare the time.  Once again, thank you for this! x 

I for one am quite excited to get some answers to the mystery! 

Love the link to the song and that it seems I was right that his rescue breath was what "infected" her with a part of him and caused the untouchableness. Can't wait to hear how Jake's transformation links in.

This is definitely a fresh take on them being the undead and soulmated. 

The arrival of Rose intrigues me as well.

Glad to have you back!  :D

Thanks for writing and sharing!!!

Your imagination blows me away! This is so original and so well done that I can't forget about it. Take as much time as you need to write, but please keep working on it.

The wheels are turning, but I just don't know what I think is going on.  But it is so good. and creepy...

There is a whole lot of weirdness going on, and I love it! The more you reveal, the more questions pop up.