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Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Many of theses sotries die in the middle I hope you finish this one. AOF has been pulled from this site so i cant read it. 18/11/2012
Reviewer: Maxi Brux (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
I want you to hurry up and finish this story. I want to know if Jasper and Bella end up together of it Bella gets back with Edward (I am a B/E person so that's what I hope for). Big events change people and vampires so all the main parties would be changed by Alice's death so it's not that far OOC for different pairings to happen. I notice that Tanya is listed as being a character so Iguess she would be the one to even out the numbers, I just onder with whom.
Please finish this. I really want to know how it goes.
MB
Reviewer: etw (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 01:51 PM · On: Prologue
Wow! Now this is a story I can fall in love with! So good, great emotions, its just fantastic! PLEASE continue writting I would love to know the ending :)
Reviewer: soccerchick_14 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Oh my goodness...this is good. i love it:) please keep writing!!
Reviewer: mrs-J-Hale (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
oh my god, i love this little bonding thing between jasper and beela its so cute, but i will never understand why you killed alice in the beginning lol!!! i love alice and jasper together but meh, its a great story tho. oh and keep the chapters coming xxxxx
Reviewer: RoasalieHale (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Are you planing on wrighting anything else??
Reviewer: RoasalieHale (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
IM ADDICTED! i cant wait to find out what happens!
Reviewer: bAbee 4eva (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Prologue
keep writing. good chapter
Reviewer: JustSarah (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Prologue
So I sat down like an hour ago thinking "Oh I'll give this a try, it sounds interesting" and it was beyond that, it was great!! I read the entire story, excellent. I wish I could read Acting on Faith, but when I tried to look for it nothing came up....
Excellent, update quickly please.
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Well I'm ready to read more! please post soon! It's amazing with great detail.
Reviewer: Faultydroneunplugged (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
getting so anxious waiting to find out how this all turns out! hope you update soon xx
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Please write more soon!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Left in the Wake
This is the best fanfic I've read yet. Litterally. I can't get enough. It's so amazing
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Letting Go
I love the details...everything about this story is amazing.
Reviewer: moonletters (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Just read this all in one shot, without reading Acting on Faith. I know I'm missing something, but it still flows just as well. Good job and thanks!
Reviewer: Faultydroneunplugged (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Oh noooo I just got to the end of chapter 8, went to click next, and theres no next yet!! I'm loving this so much! I seriously cant wait to read more. It's going to drive me crazy waiting lol
It's beautifully written and so powerful. I love whats happening here and I'm really excited to see how this story develops. I dont often leave reviews as I can never seem to quite communicate how much I love something, but felt the need to write something here. It's really amazing :)
more more more!
x
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Both Broken
You have an elegant way of showing the extreme pain and feeling in this moment. So raw . . .
Reviewer: lindaneale (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Prologue
You hooked me quickly!
Reviewer: Madonna (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
Nooo! Come on! I want more!
Reviewer: arielx (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
This is such a beautiful story. I've never read anything besides Bella/Edward, but I'm glad I stumbled across this gem =)
Reviewer: rosesoliloquy (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
WRITE MORE PLEASE?!!?!?! :D I love it! :)
Reviewer: livy4evr (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
what happens after bella is a newborn? i want to know f they find the cullens again. write a story about that.
Reviewer: BEEternity (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 8: I'm Ready
I think this is beautiful, incredible, entrancing, raw, real, dark without being depressing and I can't stop thinking about it. I am looking forward to reading the story that started it all...thank you for writing this, it has been a wonderful read.
Reviewer: BEEternity (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Left in the Wake
I hate that I am nearing the end of the updates for this story because I am so wrapped up in it. I haven't read AOF yet, but am planning to after I'm finished through the updates on this one - it's really amazing Whitney.
XXJules
Reviewer: BEEternity (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 6: Breakdown
The breakdown was brilliantly written. I could completely picture it in my mind. You have a gift for the written word. Glad you are my beta or I may not have stumbled upon this incredible story.
xxJules
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