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Reviewer: ravenbeauty (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I cried. A. Lot.

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow... I dont know what to say to be honest... this is an amazing and terrible story at the same time! But i think it sends an very important message for life!!

Once i figured out it wasnt Bella that was the bride, I was crying like a baby all the way to the end of the story...

Usually I dont read stories that have either Bella or Edward dying.. cause i just cant take that since u know real life is though enough as it is, so I want HEA when i read fanfiction, but I really like this story.. as I said I think it sents an important message!

Well done!

Reviewer: lholoubeck (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Holy crap! I havent cried this much in years! Beautiful and horribly sad.

Reviewer: mynae (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. I loved how you shown Tanya as a great woman in this story, unfortunately I'm not a huge fan of her.  I wished you had flip flopped the two roles.  Nonetheless; it was a masterpiece of emotions.  It was very clever of you on how you kept switching the time frame of the story from past to present.  I thought Bella had her miracle and she survived, but after fully reading the story, Edward finding love again......that was her miracle. 

Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

My thoughts? I cried like a baby. Am crying. :,(

Reviewer: his_lover (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

i can't even continue reading for the "two years ago" part... i don't know.. i just love Bella and Edward .. i'm sorry...

Reviewer: thoratwilight (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Fuck I cried a lot. You know in the begining I thought that Bella would survive but this end is so much dramatic. Amazing work.

Reviewer: xxedwardforlifexx (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

I swear, I can't stop sobbing. This story was heartbreakingly beautiful and unbelievably sad at the very same time. The love and faith and hope and promise and fun shined through every word, and it's my favorite one-shot ever. I can't bring myself to be upset that Edward didn't end up with Bella, because she was with him right up until the end. The shooting star concept is so brilliant and beautiful. even though i did start bawling when Alice was saying goodbye... Somehow, you managed to make it a happy ending and I praise you for your eloquence. GREAT job.. 

god i wish i could stop crying!!

AMAZING.

Reviewer: elina (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

i almost cried when i read that bella died, but then u made it better.

thank u!

Reviewer: nch2691 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

OMG I'm sitting here bawling. Truly surprising and a great read.

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

I cried like a baby aww I was so sad but I wanted Bella to be with him to hell with tanya loved it though

Reviewer: kiss of sun and lilac (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

this story was absolutely touching and brought tears to my eyes. very beautiful.

Reviewer: xanthe_80 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

loved this story - just read it for the 2nd time round (or was it 4th?) still brings tears.... lovely lovely story

Reviewer: xanthe_80 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

so touching..... i'm not one for tears, but that definitely had a hitch in my throat....

great story

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

ok, went back and read the end!  still crying!

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

i always love your stories so much but i had to stop reading ths after bella was gone and tanya comes out to the veranda....can't read anymore, made me cry! 

Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was amazing. but so sad. so happy he got his happy ending tho(:

Reviewer: BrunetteDevil (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

great, i cried like a baby. THANKS A LOT. haha kidding, this was an amazing one-shot you wrote. snaps for you!

Reviewer: bexkate-leah01 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

this was so beautiful. its different to the stuff i have read by you before, but you did this brilliantly!! keep up the writing!!! :D :D

Reviewer: tox (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

I cried my eyes out!!! Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: vwatt (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!!  What a great story.  I was looking for something to read, checking out the top ten lists, and recognized your name from FanFic.  I enjoyed your stories there, and this one did not disappoint.  Kleenex worthy!  Can't wait to read some more.

Reviewer: alwaysforever (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm literally trying to write this review while tears strem down my face. So sorry if some things don't really make any sense lol. But the story was really good, incredibly sad but still amazing. The whole time I was hoping for some miracle, that it would be Bella that he was marrying but clearly I was wrong. But regardless, it was still an amazing story :)

Reviewer: Charm City Girl (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!  That was beautiful and amazing.

I usually don't read one shot, but for some reason I opened this one.  Now I'm sitting here at work crying trying to make eyes look less puffy before I go to a meeting, lol.  I too was hoping for a miracle.

Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. So sad. Beautiful at the same time though.

Reviewer: Quartz (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm reading this at work.... like I shouldn't be doing, and I almost cried... legit, I think I need to go to the restroom and hide for a minute!

Not gunna lie, I was hoping for a miracle, and he was marrying Bella......

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