HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER.

So happy to see an update.  I hope that Bella's decision is what I'm hoping it is.  Also, I truly hope she and Edward finally have THE talk.

Well bella the ball is in your court go for it.

It's getttinnng hooootttt inn heeeerrrreeee!

Let's keep it going I just hope bella realizes how edward feels about her and stop denying her feelings for him.

Edward needs more from Bella.  He loves her and has for a long time.  He wants to be able to express it and to move forward to the next step.  He wants a permanent relationship with her. Bella loves him too, she's just too stubborn to admit it.  Bella is afraid of being played like one of Edward's other women in the past.  She wants to be the woman to use and walk away.  She wants to get pleasure and not to be hurt.  Of course when and if it all falls apart she'll be the one hurt the most.  As she can already start to feel just by his actions as of this evening. Telling her he wants more from her out of their encounters.  He has feelings, he wants commitments, relationships, wants it out in the open, no more secrecy, etc...  Bella doesn't.  When Bella saw him leave one bar after her refusal.  Then to find him in the second bar she attends.  Seeing him sexy dancing with a his normal ho type woman, Bella's green jealousy is burning within her.  Edward is hers and no other woman is allowed to dance with him like that.  So when another man approaches her and asks her to dance with her, she agrees.  she makes sure to captures Edward's eyes.  Keeping eye contact while she dances seductively with another man while luring him out onto the dance floor. Edward was about to crumble to Bella, but I was so proud he walked out on her.  He kept true to himself and his decision.  Bummed Bella, but it's her fault.  She needs to admit to herself she has feelings and she needs him just as much as he needs her.  On her cab ride home she finally realized she really needs Edward, she can't live without him.  She doesn't want to either.

Freat story..sad no more chaps to read..sorry I have not reviewed until now..I was so addicted that I couldn't wait to read the next chap..I can be greedy that way!  I hope u will not be the same and continue of with ur wonderful story!  I just love it!  Congrats on all your RL news xo acey

 

Can't wait to hear what Bella is thinking.  She better get her shit together soon, before she looses the best thing in her life.  Great job with the chapter it was very well done.

i started reading this a while ago  and i loved the first few chapters but rl stepsin and i got lost so when i got to your new chapters i was having a hard time following your plot line so i decided it was time to start back at chapter 1 and i am so glad i did you really have the touch   its been a wonderful way to spend a rainy sunday     you go girl    

Okay, first of all, I think I love you for the Homer references.  I'm a big classical civilisations geek, and The Odyssey is my all-time favourite epic. 

And you already know how awesome you are at writing all those sexually charged scenes between our favourite couple.  My mind turns to mush whenever I read a new chapter from you, but it's good to see Edward holding strong to his morals!  He's just so adorable I want to jump into your story and give him a hug. xD

 

So basically, Homer references + hot E/B fanfic = me happy. ;)

 

Edward has a valid point.  It is a strange one coming from a man, but it can happen.  He has been in love with her forever.  He wants a relationship, a commitment, shared feelings.  He doesn't want to be a f--- buddy.  I hate that term.  He wants it to mean something when he makes love with Bella, it's not just sex to him.  Bella is just being stubborn, afraid of her heart being broken again by him.  They both lack communication skills to bring their issues out in the open and discuss them.  I mean they have been friends forever.  Just say what you feel, tell the other you've been hurt, attempt a compromise, and come to a resolution.  If not then it's time to walk away even if it's just for awhile.  Edward getting up and leaving not one nightclub, but two should send a message to Bella. He meant what he said.  Yes he desires her, wants her, but not on her terms.  Edward doesn't need Bella just for a sexual release, if he wanted that any of the women who hit on him would do.  He loves Bella and wants to be with her and only her.  Angela read him right about his trouble being women. Edward almost gave in when Bella was on the dance floor, but I was proud of him that he just walked away.  He flirted with both Vicki and Angela.  Angela would be someone he could date or talk.  The part shot at Bella was to ask when Angela worked at the club.  It should get Bella to start thinking what she might loose with her carefree ways.  If she wants sex then talk to Lee.  Edward won't like it.  If it's all she interested in then any man should do for her.  Maybe she needs to think about it.  Why does she only want to be with Edward,  Why was she trying so hard to make him jealous.  She wants it her way or no way.  Well Edward feels the same way, his way or no way.  It's all or nothing.  Should be interesting to hear Bella's view of their evening out with Alice.  I am sure she was hurt when he walked out on her twice when she was putting the aggressive moves on him.  As I said before talk it out.  Compromise and resolution of what you can allow and what you can't allow or tolerate. Edward flirting with Angela at the bar will upset Bella, it'll make her livid.  She'll think wait he's mine.  How can he flirt with someone else?  He said he wants me.  Good food for thought Bella. 

 

Why can't Bella see the forest for the trees?  When will her inner monolog allow her to love Edward and feel the self-worth she deserves?  I feel ill to think that Edward could “hook-up” with anyone but Bella.

I'm kinda hating Bella a little bit here.  Hopefully at some point she will pull her head out of her ass.  If not, I would be more than willing to make poor Edward feel all better.  What?!?  You all know you would do the same!  Thanks so much for writing.  Love your story.