Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...
Can't wait!
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...
Let the games begin!!!!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...
Love this story! I really like how you've made Edward into a *really* caring person. Can't wait until you update again.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the E/B connection. Hope we hear from you all soon! :)
Reviewer: DreamAngel (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Crap. I was just getting into this story and there is no more yet. :( oh well. On to alerts so I can read more.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Eric cracks me up!!!
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
LOL on the fuuuuuudge part. I love tht movie. Okay that wasn't too horrible of wolfpack interference but I have a feeling the mutt will be back with her payment and I don't like it one bit. Maybe Bellla will sing that song from Annie "Dumb dog, why are you following me" actually I don't care what happens with Jake as long as she ends up with Edward. Great story glad I found it and I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 5: Back in Business
Enough with the losers where the hell is Edward? That was an interesting spectrum of situations there. Jake was mentioned this chapter and I am fearing he may play a bigger role in the next. Jacob is never good. Bring on Edward, please.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Thanks for the update. Cute chapter. Will we see any more of Jacob?
Reviewer: hekate22 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
I hope you udate soon again. I really like this story. I rarely review but I felt I just had to tell you. Well done! Hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 4 : Emmett, the Philosopher
Wow, I think Victoria has so;me serious problems to not know when a guy is not geting off. Great chapter. I am definitely ready for some B/e interaction. Emmett cracks me up as always.
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Bella seems to be above average as far as girls who work for escort agencies. She's really such a doll.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Yay I'm excited for IsaBella and Edward to meet!
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Aftermath
eric is darling. love him.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: Mike Newton
yuck. mike makes me vomit.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Setting up shop
Very good so far =)! Happy Holidays as well!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
OH Hale Yeah...that wedding went well in my opinion. I am really happy for Leah and Sam and can't help but laugh over the whole thing. Sigh...Eric is just the cutest thing. Ohh I hope the good doctor calls soon.
Reviewer: Cynali (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
What a darlin christmas presant! Thanks! I am dieing for them to meet... will it be the next chapter?
Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
Oooh.. need to know more! Please update!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Wedding
I liked the way you worked the Sam/Leah/Emily story line into this. That worked really well and I'm looking forward to seeing what more you have in store for Jacob as I think it could be really interesting if once Edward and Bella are happily pretending to be a couple, Jacob comes in to rock the boat! >.< What can I say, I'm a sucker for drama! lol. Anyway, great chapter! But I really can'ty wait for them to meet/be in contact, so I hope you update soon! Oh and I hope you both have a great christmas! :D
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: Back in Business
I loved reading about Bella's different dates. I'm glad to see that she's not just turning into a glorified call girl. It means Bella is happier with what she's doing and it'll make things more interesting with Edward. Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to read more. :)
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 4 : Emmett, the Philosopher
Great chapter! IU loved the way Edward was slipped Bella's card so discreetly and that it wasn't a bit hooha. Edward's back story sounds interesting as well but I can't decide whether he really did see Tanya having sex with another man or whether it's just his over active imagination. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more. I can't wait until they actually meet! XD
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Aftermath
I can't believe she is still going to do this. I should stop reading this but I can't... damn you two for making this naughty story so good ;)
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Mike Newton
That was depressing. I didn't think she would actually go through with it. I don't know how I feel about Bella as a hooker, because after this chapter she has now earned the title. Mike sounds disgusting. I can't believe Rose got her friend in this. I'd take the bills any day. I'll give you another chance though, since you promised it will be better.
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Setting up shop
This story is totally enethical but I can't help but love the concept so far. When is Edard coming into play? I am worried one of them is going to get themselves into a bad situation. Great job so far, I really like it.
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