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Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 14
"“You are so beautiful. May I touch you?” I said, reverently.
Knock yourself out. Watch where you touch though, this kitty bites.
“I promise to be a gentleman.” I ran my hand along the side of her head and over her shoulder. I scratched her behind the ear and moved down under her chin.
She started to purr very loudly. Mmmmm
“Like that, do you?” I whispered.
Yes, I’ve never had anyone do that before.
“As it should be.” I said with satisfaction."" AWE!!!!!!!!!! HAHA Bella bites.
HAHA Charlie taught Bella to swear like a cop.
I love how Bella showed Edward her memories!!!!!! I love how Edward can read Bella's mind when she shifts.
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 10
I absolutely love how at ease Bella was with Alice!!!!!!!
Alice got Bella some sweet awesome biker boots!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8
""Esme knocked softly on the door and opened it without waiting for a reply. “Oh my goodness, Edward has found a girl!”
“I’m sorry to interrupt, Edward, but I need to speak with Carlisle.” I’m so happy for you, my son. Go now, and I’ll take care of your stubborn father.
“Certainly, Esme.” I paused to kiss her cheek before I left. Yes, I see this girl is good for you."" Yep Esme will sort Carlisle out. He can't deny her anything.
I love how Billy doesn't actually need hiw wheelchair n this story!
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Alice and I were still at the piano when Emmett ambled in. “I found a little Bella birdie in a tree listening to your concert. She took off without talking to me, but she dropped this.” Emmett handed me a tattered piece of paper."" What Emmett said to Bella was kind of sweet and cute.
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
""Just as I thought. Now you’d better meet Carlisle at the door before Rosalie narks on you.
“He’s not going to be pleased with my defiance.”
Edward, you should know better! Once Esme knows her “baby” has found happiness, she’ll make sure Carlisle relents."" HAHA Edward's Esme 'baby'. Carlisle will do anything to make Esme happy!!!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love how Edward saved Bella from going to the carnival with Mike.
Edward and Bella have an interesting chemistry.
""Ah, another extrasensory reveal. Still elated by her acceptance of my unorthodox invitation, I playfully blew a concentrated jet of air over her head, which rained my scent gently down to her. She breathed in deeply and sighed happily, and I couldn’t help but continue.
Sight, smell… how about hearing?
I said lower than a human could hear, “Is that better?”
She automatically responded, “Yes, much. Thanks.”
A full second passed, and then she swore in a most unladylike manner as she realized what she’d done. I grinned, her bad girl ways were strangely endearing to me. Then I started to feel like a cad for having tricked this out of her.""
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Epilogue
I really love what you did with the Cullens and the Quileutes, making it a great story. Bella and Edward together forever, just as they should be, loving each other and all their family and taking care of everyone. Way to go!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 29
That was some awwsome fight! The Thunderbird appeared in time to save the day and Bella saved Seth. Doesn't get any better than that. Great idea to completely destroy the Volturi and put the Cullens in charge. God, I love a happy ending.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 28
I'm so glad the wolves are training with the Cullens.Never a dull moment around Emmett with his goofy sense of humour. He's like the comic relief in this whole thing. The Volturi don't know who they're messing with this time .
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 27
That was as nice a wedding celebration as any I've ever seen or read about.The gift exchange was awesome and the wedding night was lovely.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 26
Important information for Edward, from Carlisle. Did he plan on never making love to Bella? That would have been terrible, not to mention an awful waste.Things are coming to a head it seems. Playing his piano to help her sleep was so sweet of Edward; lucky Bella.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 25
Bella is my hero, the girl has nerve and courage, brains and beauty and lots of other good stuff. I notice Edward didn't argue about the binding ceremony. I can't wait for the potlatch.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 24
Therapy in the hot tub, wish I could have seen that. Also the Risky Business dance number with Emmett and Bella. It was so nice to see the lyrics to Only You, that one takes me back. The love just grows between Bella and Edward and that makes Esme so very happy for her favorite son.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wouldn't you just know? The damn Volturi are going to make life a misery not only for the Cullens but the Quileutes as well. Destruction, that's their answer to everything.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 22
Nice of you to give Bree another chance. Bella held her own until Edward got there to help along with his family and hers. Now we know the Volturi are after Bella, for some reason. so everyone will try to keep her safe.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 21
Bella was wondering when the other shoe would drop and now she knows. Too bad, they were having a great time, everybody getting along, even playing together, you knew it was too good to last. Poor Bree!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 20
Tickled me no end when Bella took care of that lecherous s.o.b, the girl is good . It was even better when her dad stood up for her. Even Rosalie was impressed.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 19
I get the feeling there's a Norton Commando in Bella's future, if she will accept it. Charlie seems to be okay with Edward a boyfriend for his only daughter. Now, if only the identity of this mysterious council can be found, we'll all be happy.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 18
Such a nice afternoon, even with getting caught in the rain. Cute , having to meet Bella's dad, eat pizza and get your clothes dried, while watching football.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow, what a responsibility, being a conduit to the Spirit World. Why do I feel this could be a cause of real unhappiness for Bella and Edward? Despite the protection of the pack and Edward, I have a bad feeling something may put Bella in danger.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
The visit went very well, I think. Edward's mother loves her and Jasper can control himself, Alice already loves her and Lord knows, Edward is in love with Bella. That only leaves Rosalie to win over, and she 'll bring Emmett.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 15
I'm really liking the way Edward and Bella are together. It's comfortable, easy, playful and quite sexy. They are very much equals in this story and it's really good.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a wonderful thing to be able to share yourself with another like that. Especially someone you love.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
You must admit, it is a line unlike any other and unique to this couple. That Bella is a mountain lion is too cool. I can see why Edward wouldn't hunt them any more. This deal about a council is worrisome. Who are they and what do they want with Bella? Oh yes, how wonderful that Edward can read Bella's mind when she shifts.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 12
Help! What is that girl thinking , running after a vampire on her own? I think Edward is about to find out what Bella is and maybe not in a good way. Just when things were looking a bit romantic, too.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
Alice wouldn't be Alice unless she is dressing someone. It was cute how horrified she was over Bella's unmatched underwear. Alice sharing the vision of Bella undressed was a tease to Edward and a clue to what Bella is. I'm glad she saw the birthmark and shared the following vision with Edward. The motorcycle talk was not only exciting to Edward and Bella, but me too, I love bikes.
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