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Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

made me cry an amazing job well done

Reviewer: mrebeccan (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

It has been a while since I've cried this hard over a story...

You did an amazing job

Reviewer: Sdominas21 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was such a hard story for me to read. My husband was in the army, thankfully never deployed. I also live in Wonder Lake and I am very aware of Spc. Nurnberg. My husband lost friends from the Woodstock Guard unit not to long ago as well.  I am very very sorry for your loss. This touched me so deeply and made me cry so hard.  It is such a hard thing to go thorugh and takes strong men and women to serve but even stronger loved ones to let them go. Thank you to all who serve our country. I am so proud to be married to one of them.

Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was so beautiful. I am crying right now. This is just...indescribable. It's so sad and yet I love it. Very, very beautiful writing. I'm so sorry for your loss. Great one shot.



Reviewer: jenidig (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh my god. that was so sad. i was hysterical. how did you write this? it was amazing..just so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: jenidig (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh my god. that was so sad. i was hysterical. how did you write this? it was amazing..just so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: tajzanna (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 brother is laughing at me right now because I'm crying...but wow...I love that song and your writing to go with it just made it better!

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

gosh darnit now i'm crying :( sad but good.

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was so sad and beautiful! And heartbreaking, especially for Edward instinctively knowing that he wasn't coming home.

Reviewer: twilightfan0521 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

That truly was a wonderful story. I don't ever cry when I read stories but this one had me bawling. So sorry about the loss of your friend, my brother is a U.S. Marine and is over in Afghanistan fighting. It is always hard having someone fight in a war, but it is even more hard having someone die in a war. Amazing job writing this story.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

This broke my heart and made me cry like a baby.




Reviewer: meltingpoints (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was absolutely gut-wrenching. For me, all human fics tend to feel like they're missing something essential, like the depth of Bella & Edward's love for one another, or the family's bond. Absolutely beautiful. Heart breaking.

Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

*wipes away tears*

This was a beautiful and heartfelt story.

chellik x

Reviewer: bysm1114 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

this is such a good one shot i balled my eyes out it was so good :Þ

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, I probably shouldn't have read this sitting at my desk @ work- because now I'm bawling like a baby.

One usually cannot write something like this unless they have been profoundly affected by something similar- the didication at the top notwithstanding.  I am so sorry for your loss.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful one-shot.

Reviewer: Jngr (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

What a sad brought tears to my eyes.  My heart goes out to all that have served and lost someone to the tragedy that is war. 

Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

you have succeeded to make yet another person cry... :(

its a really beatiful story... :)

Reviewer: jebby (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful!  And I'm not sure anyone can read that and not have at least some tears in their eyes. 

My thanks to all who bravely serve.

Reviewer: indieoxxy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

*SOB*. wow, im literally bawling my eyes out! it was really well written!

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was the saddest story ever, but so well written.

Reviewer: May-u (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

That made me cry!

I can't believe Edward died!

Reviewer: CleanEco (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. Moving story.

Reviewer: cpattinson (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

oh dear, that made me cry alot, such a devastating story, :( x

Reviewer: Wonkeygirl (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't cry at fiction usually - it's films that get me - but right now I'm blubbing like a baby. Seriously, that was just so heart wrenching. Beautiful, just beautiful.

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