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Reviewer: shayislegend (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 10:57 PM · On: The Blackness Closing In.
omg! keep writing!
Reviewer: coconuthi (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 03:47 AM · On: The Blackness Closing In.
I've made it this far without crying *fist pump* I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 07:47 AM · On: The Blackness Closing In.
Very good story! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Not anymore
Very interesting! And a nice perspective on the characters! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 06:16 AM · On: I Had Surrendered Happily
Wow. Interesting situation! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 05:05 AM · On: When Angels Are Screaming
No, I would like to continue, because it is my kind of story. But I was totally lost.
Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Truly In Hell
Looking forward to more chapters:-). Love it!!!!
Author's Response: updates will be a lot more regular now that im completely finished with school :) thanks for taking the time to review, and i hope you stay along for the ride xx
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 11:53 PM · On: The Blackness Closing In.
When was the last time you updated? I have forgotten almost everything. Why did you not add a recap to help the reader to reconnect with the sotry? Now I either have to let the story go or to reread it completely. Not nice.
Author's Response: ill have a recap added to that chapter later today i hope you dont leave us and stay for the ride. thanks for taking the time to review xx
Reviewer: malion (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 03:34 AM · On: Not anymore
I had to review and hope that you will read this and hopefully continue with the story. I haven't had enough and would love to hear what happens between Bella and Edward in the future. I hope you haven't given up on the story!
Author's Response: I haven't :) Im so sorry about all the inconsistency, but I'm not giving up, even I want to read what happens next! lol Update will be up shortly once the chapter for my other story goes though. THanks so much for stciking with me!
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Not anymore
what's up with the long delay? this is a really strong beginning, very compelling and so heartbreaking. i hope it doesn't last too long, and he comes back to her.
Author's Response: Sorry about the delay, the next chap will be up after the one for my other story goes through :) Thanks so much for reading! And I hope you stick with me :)
Reviewer: vampire101 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Not anymore
I love it! Please please keep writing!
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up shortly, just waiting on the other one going through. Thanks so much for reading :)
Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 12:27 PM · On: Not anymore
I am very interested in this story. Please continue. I am a little reluctant because I am an all Canon kind of girl, but I will definately give it a chance.
Alaina
Author's Response: Oh don't worry, I'm an all canon kind of girl too, I have a few things up my sleeve :) Thanks so much for reading, next chapter is on the way x
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Not anymore
Oh god I ran out of chapters already ; ; noooo!! I must read moooore!!! ; ;
Tanya's blatant advances are sickening to me D: Rosalie I can understand. But oh ; ; Edward... Bella.. ; ; next chapter is Bella? /cries
Author's Response: I know, Tanya is someone who has alays aggravated me, just had to portray her as a bit of a skank :) Bella is on the way, cried a lot trying to get in the right frame of mind for it :) thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Craik1995 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 07:20 AM · On: Not anymore
omg update sooon pleeaase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its awesome!!
Author's Response: On its way, so sorry for the delay! Thanks so much for reading :)
Reviewer: cagemydreams (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Not anymore
I'm glad you are back and updating. This is a very interesting piece of fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you< I'm so sorry about the delay, but I promise a lot more is set up and on the way :) stick with me!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:33 PM · On: Not anymore
Poor edward! And that Tanya is such a hussy ;)
looking forward to seeing how Bella is doing!
Author's Response: Won't have to wait much longer :) Thanks so much for taking the time to read, and review!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Truly In Hell
That was very good, I am enjoying this story!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:22 PM · On: Beyond Her Reach
So he's not saving edward for Bella's sake. Interesting!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Faulty monitors
I love that Bella is so observant! And if I was Elizabeth masen, i sure wouldn't leave until his heart was done.
I am looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Carried Away By Her Beautiful Notes.
I really liked the last line, very intruiging!
As a parent, I think I would be crushed to be pulled away from my dying teen son so he could cuddle with his gf. I would picture them all around his side.
Also, i just don't like it when characters sing song lyrics & those lyrics are part of the narrative- I know lots of readers do, but thats just my two cents. Maybe its because I can't sing!
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Not anymore
i love this story it made me cry. i only hope that you intend for a happy ending and bring bella and edward together.
Author's Response: All shall be revealed soon, thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 07:49 PM · On: One Last Message From A Doe Eyed Girl
Okay, that was a little too short! I can see that edward would be too tired to fight death, but would he find it peaceful to give in? I am looking forward to how the rest of the story unfolds.
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 07:46 PM · On: I Had Surrendered Happily
I think my heart is breaking :( But I was expecting the angst!
This is written very well, with a nice pace to the story. I am liking it!
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Not anymore
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Its on the way, so sorry for the delay. Thanks so much for reading and I hope you stick ith me :)
Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Not anymore
I really like the twist in this story, with E&B already being in love before his change. He has to go back and find her. I would like to hear from Bella now on her thoughts about sighting Vamp Edward outside her window and how she's been coping since. She either thought she was hallucinating or is now dead set that he's still alive and that's helping her cope.
Please update soon, I really like this and want to read more!
Author's Response: Im so so sorry about the delay, to say that times have been hard is a complete understatement. The next chapter is set to go once the my other story has gone through, so not long to wait :) Thanks so much for sticking with me, and Bella is up next for us
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