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Reviewer: brittanymichele (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Goodbye My Friend

PLEASE keep going! pretty please? this story is seriously awesome!  ♥

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Goodbye My Friend

What a shame you are no longer updating this story. It is really interesting!

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 12:19 PM · On: Goodbye My Friend

I really liked where you were going with this.  Any chance you'll come back to it?

Reviewer: twinkle_girl (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Prologue

just a version of twilight with jake and ed as best friends right?

keep updating! looking forward to whats happening next

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:33 PM · On: Prologue

Sigh.  I just reread the prologue.  I love this story.  I hope you update soon.  I am sending good thoughts your way...

Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 04:59 AM · On: Goodbye My Friend

I like this!  I think they probably could've/would've been friends like Seth and Edward were after Eclipse if it hadn't been for their feelings for Bella.  Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:42 AM · On: Goodbye My Friend

Great so far. Looking forward to where you go with it.

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:12 PM · On: Goodbye My Friend

Ugh, too short!  NOT criticizing at all, I just really love this story and have gotten used to your nice long chapters.  I’ll be checking for updates daily!  Good one, thanks!

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 09:36 PM · On: Goodbye My Friend

Aw! Poor Jake! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Imaginethat (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Who's Who

This is a wonderful story. The development of all the characters is spot on and so much more than the original Twilight.  The prologue was beautifully written and has set the stage for a very intriguing and complex story. Please continue,it is a joy to read this.

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 10:38 PM · On: Who's Who

Yay!  Please update soon.  I love that you're kwwping the characters so close to their original personalities but still creating your own story.  I'll check again tomorrow :)

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 10:32 PM · On: Premonition

Your writing in this is great!  I'm going to finish what you have up today and hopefully you'll update soon.  I'm really enjoying this one!

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Three Hearts

Love it!  Can't wait for B and E to meet.

Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Prologue

Yes!  I love the prologue!  I'm trying to be good about reviewing, I know it means a lot to the authors... but if this stays so intense I might have to cruise through and come back later to review!

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 09:13 AM · On: Who's Who

I LOVED it! =D I never knew Forks had "cliches"... Hehe! ... "The unpopular jocks" I would've thought that that was an oxymoron... =D

Hmm... Edward's leaving because he can't control his tirst... I wonder what Jake'll say about that...

Hmm... I wonder how you're going to have Bella find out about vampires/werewolves... Hmm... 'Cause Jake can't tell her, 'cause he hasn't imprinted... and he's bound by secrecy... Hmm... Does that leave Edward, then? 'Cause that seems highly unlikely... Interesting... Very interesting... =D

Can't wait to see where you go with this! =D Update soon, pretty please (with a cherry on top) *puppy dog eyes* =P

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 06:07 AM · On: Who's Who

I think it's coming along just fine! Love it so far. So sad he thinks he has to leave.

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:49 PM · On: Premonition

Duh duh duh dun...

Hmm... I'm surprised that Edward didn't recognize the Chevy as Jake's old truck...

Ooh! I'm loving this turn of events! Edward's new personality intrigues me... It breaks my heart that he feels so "alone"... But I think it's kinda sweet that he was more inviting when they first met in Biology... Even though he now wants to "suck her dry"... lol

I really like your intro quotes, by the way! =D

Great chapter! I can't wait for the update! *wink, wink; nudge, nudge* ; )

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:26 PM · On: Three Hearts

Hah! Go Rosalie! lol She ruins Edward's car, and he has to go to a werewolf to get it fixed! Oh, the irony! lol

Aww! Jake still says, "Sure, sure." I LOVE that! =D

Oh! That makes sense! You made Eclipse (or, at least a part of it) Pre-Twilight! Edward and Jake probably would have become friends after that... if it hadn't been for that whole little teensy-weensy problem about the "love triangle." lol

Hmm... I wonder how old Jake is... Well... I guess it doesn't matter, though, does it? I mean... in all his were-wonder, he's gotta look older and... *drooling* Oh! Sorry!

Hehe! Jake met Bella before Edward did! Isn't it funny how wishy-washy Bella is!?! I mean, in Twilight, she met Edward first... and she fell in love with him (and didn't think that she had any feelings toward Jake)... And now, she meets Jake first... and, in all his "were-wonder" (You know, I'm starting to like that word! lol =D) she's gonna fall (I gather... based on the prologue) for him... Oh, Bella, Bella... What are we going to do with you!?! lol =D

Since when does Alice have a red car? :?

LOVED it! ;D

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 10:51 PM · On: Prologue

Ooh! I LOVE this! The repetition is great! "If he had a heart, it would be..." (Although... I pretty sure that he has a heart... It just doesn't beat... Hmm...)

Ooh! I can't wait to find out what happened between Jake and Edward that made them best friends... Coming from Edward, that says a lot... =D

"They had survived... centuries of hatred..." They've both been alive for centries...? Hmm... Ohh... You meant that figuritively, didn't you? Like... They've survived the dogma of a centerian hatred?

Ooh! Bella's chosing Jake over Edward!?! 8^O Now, this, I gotta see! =D

Reviewer: kia (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 05:45 PM · On: Prologue

Well, from the prologue, I'm assuming that Bella will choose Jake at one point. I do hope that she ends up with Edward though, because it was certainly painful to read.

And I really don't want the friendship between the two to be broken, that's also very sad.

Reviewer: septentrion (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Premonition

You've got me hooked, this beginning is very good. I wonder if this will be an E/B or a J/B, but you won't probably tell me ;)

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 04:14 AM · On: Premonition

Very good! I love it!!

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