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Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love this chapter!  Hope Rose can fix the generator...and she and Emmett can work out their issues.  And yeah...can't wait to see what happens with the outside forces such as the Army.  If they decide to use nukes, I'm betting the Cullens have a way out - tunnels or something - to shield all of them.

More, please!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

They could always escape into the ocean couldn't they? If they swim out far enough they could just head for different land afterwards!

Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 6

Good chapter! I really hope they find a way out of this alive. I want them to be able to go with their lives. Maybe they find a way out of Washington. There are just so many ways this could end. Do you have an idea of how you would like to this wrap up? Is there a definite number chapters left?

Reviewer: jenn8581 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

So I love the story so far. Zombies are my absolute biggest fear and I have to tell you, you write them perfectly. My only pet peeve is if the zombies are only aware of "food" why would the zombie Ben start chomping on Emmett? Since Vampires have no blood wouldn't the zombies not even notice them? Just curious. Keep up with the regular updates, I love this story!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

Poor Angela... Seth did not work that right.  She's just lost her whole family and the love of her life & he... well... stupid wolf who wants to make things right...

Ugh, what a group to be locked up tight together... Leah needs to get over herself (but then again, so does Rose).  Charlie needs to lighten up a little, too over protective dad... but then again, he's just watched his entire town turn into zombies, and had to shoot several of them in the head, so who's to say what is going through his head.

I'm a little worried about their hunting trip... I doupt the zombies can break their skin, but what happens if they eat something that's infected?  Or they meet up with another vamp who's been infected from munching on a human?  Oh, my brain is doing evil things to me.

I'm looking forward to more when ever you have the time to post it.  I understand the wait because I'm having that same problem (stuck on chapter 5 myself).  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

awwww well i guess i will just have to wait then huh?

Reviewer: PugLove (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love you! this is awesome! the imprinting seemed like it couldn't have come at a worse time, which of course, made it all the more hilarious. are you by chance a max brooks fan?

Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Seth imprinting on Angela, too funny.   I wonder what Alice and co will find hunting.  Cannot wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

Yay! Ang is safe! but i also feel sorry for her....... what Seth did wasnt the smartest.... update as soon as you can!!!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

I so love this story

Hopefully it won't take a couple of weeks - I really do look forward to reading this one.

Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 5

I've really enjoyed your spin with having Zombs!  Please continue to write as it has been very entertaining!

Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nooooooooo! why do i have to wait for an update now! i usually think the zombie thing in movies is ridiculus- i mean they go so slow and still people get caught?- but this is amazingly good. very suspenceful. please update soon.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

hehe. Emmett afraid of Zombies=LOVE

Reviewer: Traci (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

what's with all the cursing? not that i have a prob w/ it, its just that the real characters wouldn't be throwing the "f-word" around all the time. that's my pet peeve.

other than that, the storyline is great. it's very original too.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I know some people might be offended with the cursing, but in my experience, teens and adults curse all the time.  I find it a little unrealistic that they wouldn't, especially given the situation that they are in, so I made them a little OOC.  

 

 

Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG, it gnawed on Emmett's arm?  I know they have indestructible skin, but God, I hope this doesn't mean Emmett will become a zombie!  LOVE this story!

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

My pet peeve?  I've got a fear of drowning, if that's what you want to know. 

Anyways, bitchin chapter my main man :)  So we finally got to the source of Emmett's zombie phobia.  I was rather surprised.  At first I though he'd been in a zombie plague before but when he saw the white zombie?  Ha, pure laughs mixed in with some sympathy. 

And I liked his conflicting emotions, how he was pissed at Rose for her sensitivity.  I know exactly what he's talking about. 

Nice rescue of Angels, very exciting sequence.  I hope that in later chapters Emmett gets a chance to really shine.  I felt bad for the big teddy bear, gimme a hug!  Even so, nice rescue on his part. 

Ta

Master of the Boot

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

Very creative idea, and I'm still intrigued with it!

I'm enjoying reading it very much! I'm very curious as to how this story will end up. I'm waiting for you to surprise us with some plot twist, because right now my imagination is limited to me imagining the zombies somehow all getting killed, and everyone's free and yeah, which I don't think you were planning to do.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

^.^ awesome chapter!! i love that Emmett faced his fears and got Angela to safety. Update soon!

as for a pet peeve..... when people completely ignore me. or, if im talking to them on the phone (or skype) and they dont respond. that really gets me pissed.

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

But the zombie spit is still on his arm!! Isn't it? hehe

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

not zombies! Emmett reminds me of that joke, hey i love you to death and were best friends and all, but when the zombies chase us, i am definitely tripping your ass!  ha ha ha ha !!!!

Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

I so seriously HEART this story; hilarious.  I loved the fact that Emmett grew some and went and got Angela.  I hope she did not get bit and will turn into a zombie on them.  Got to love it.  Cannot wait for more. 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was a great chapter. Love EPOV. I hope Emmet dumps Rosalie and ends up with Angela!

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

LMAO Emmet and his grapefruit balls, that had me falling over laughing.

Reviewer: PugLove (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

you are so vamp-tastically awesome!! i am a HUGE zombie fan and of course have read max brooks zombie survival guide. on my myspace under movies i put anything vamp, wolf or zombie does it for me and you have just put ALL of my faves together. you rock!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

Nice update.  Glad to see that Emmett faced his fears of the zombies and save Angela.  Update soon.

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