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Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Left Holding the Bag
All the loaded glances and wordless exchanges are just heartbreaking.
Enter Rosale Hale hahaha. This should be good!
Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Old Friends, New Friends
Wow. Bree is the uberbitch. Truly evil. Will we ever find out why she is torturing Edward?
Reviewer: oliveU (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Cherries and Chocolate, Respectively
Enjoying this very much.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Compromise
I enjoy this story so much. I really hope that in the end...what goes around comes around...Bree will get hers...as well as the other floozies who turned on him. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: kdark (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:18 PM · On: On Skeletons and Closets
Hey Lady - love this story. Please, please, please in an author's note someday soon, could you refer to your protagonist as Backward? Eagerly awaiting future installments.
Reviewer: paola2208 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:53 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
You are an amazing writer. This is one of the best stories I'm reading right now. Your writing is incredible. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 11:15 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
What an odd day. Starting out great, going to tension, then tentative, then freeing, then numb, then pain, and then satisfaction and terror. If he wants to keep her forever, he's going to have to pull deep within himself and find the man that he can be.
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Naked
I just want to say: I am enjoing it! Great story!
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:17 PM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
I think this is one of the best chapters so far, by miles... These two need to have a quiet drunken night at home, possibly with blindfolds....
I relate to poor Ruinward. My last ex left me so destroyed that when I met my current guy, I couldn't even say the word 'relationship' anymore. I'd always been so easy to speak and I literally told him, "Do we have to say it? We know it is THAT word." He was patient and now, I propose to him every day. Edward will come around.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:13 PM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
Holy shit that was so emotional I felt myself welling up in the coffee shop. Although Edward hasn't said 'I love you' to Bella in so many words, it's obvious in the way he thinks and gravitates around her.
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Monster
Wao!
I didn't spect that!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Pale and Black and Red
Amaizing!!!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:48 PM · On: A Knock at the Door
Wao! Just wao!
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:50 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Left Holding the Bag
Nice twist!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:50 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
this story just owns me
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:45 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
Finally some PDA!!! Good for them and thank goodness for Alice and the gang..... They should be able to help out our fucked up couple....
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Cherries and Chocolate, Respectively
That was sexy!
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Thirty
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 04:49 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
Can't wait to see how they deal with the Bree/Esme thing. Bree really needs her comuppance (I know that looks wrong but you know what I mean!!).
Achilles
Reviewer: carbella02 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Fault Lines
I recently had find out your fic and I only want to saw that I like it.
Reviewer: anonymous1029 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:05 AM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
holy crap....this is so beautiful. they are so meant for each other!!
Reviewer: jattyca (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 11:34 PM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
I so love your screwed up, twisted couple. And I sincerely love your mad updating scheduling! You're spoiling us.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 11:12 PM · On: What I've Said Out Loud
You fear that if you love her, you will lose her.
You fear that life will inevitably come to reclaim any semblance of happiness that you feel has been accidentally bestowed on you.
You fear that lonliness and despair will once again triumph over your joy.
And you can't help it. Your mind, your heart, your soul lock down and all that is glorious dies in defeat.
But oh Edward, exhale in surrender and reach out your hand, unfurl your fingers, and graze the cheek of the one who loves you devotedly in return. She will not be taken. She will not be lost. All you need to do is take hold of her and hold on for dear life.
She is your love, your hope, your everything. As you are hers. So rest easy now, melt into her embrace, and swallow your fear.
Godspeed.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Behind Closed Doors
WOO :) What an absolutely brilliant start to Act III! Cannot wait to see where this develops...Edward HAS to find a way to have Bella in his life in a public manner. They shouldn't have to hide their feelings. Can't they trap Bree into admitting it was all a lie?
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