So...I have been thinking about this story non-stop...my brain is in over drive and I have smoke coming out of my ears!  =)  For some reason, I get this feeling that Angela has said something to Edward...I don't know why I think this but who knows what made Edward say those horrible things to her.  GAH!!  I'm going crazy trying to figure everything out..I can't wait for Mike & Jessica to be outed; they are slime..yeah, it's wrong that Bella and Edward have been together but I really think that Jessica put something in their drinks that night at the club.  Anyway, Edward better get his shit straight and man up because Bella is going to need him when she finds out that her supposed best friend has been screwing her fiance.  OMG!  I can't wait to see what happens..I am putting my faith and trust in you that all will end up how it's supposed to be! 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing.

Angela having something to do with Edward's outburst...a very interesting concept. I am so happy this story captivated you so. Every time I think that this started out as a little idea in my head for that first scene in the club, I can't believe it has come so far.

More coming soon. Everything will come to light: Jessia and Mike's affair. Edward's reasons for treating Bella like that. Who is the person who has been advising Edward. The wedding and of course...Bella/Edward and Charlie's reactions to the blow out! Keep reading.

WOW!! OH WOW!!! I did not see that one coming - hit me upside the head like a mac truck - well F**K - Eddie boy had best have a damned good reason for this shit - and I would rather it not be some BS about he was thinking what was best for Bella - just my opinion but the boy just mindf**cked her as bad as ole James did the real thing!!

Author's Response:

Edward is receiving blow after blow for his actions in this chapter. I know he was cruel and it killed him to be that way, believe me, but he does think he had a good reason. He will explain shortly. Thanks for sharing. I think you damned near killed him with that James comparison.

ok ... im trying to think of who would say something to edward to make him do something like that. all I can think of is that mike said something to him, and that along with the fact that mike prepared the whole yacht thing too ... i dont knwo for sure though. And I really cnat wait for them to catch mike and jessica ... and I cant wait for edward to shake off whatever spell has been cast over him ... he isnt making any sense. maybe he saw the way bella was with mike and decided that he cant give her the things mike can and therefore he isnt good enough for her? I dont know ... all i know is if I dont get to read the next chapter soon I will go insane !

please update asap ! thank you :) 

Author's Response:

I will try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible. I would answer some of your questions if I could but I can't without giving too much away-though I will tell you are on the right track. All I can say is, don't be too mad at the person behind this, they meant their words to be helpful.

Thanks for sharing! 

Me no likey but me have faith. Lover writing. You are very good. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing. I know this was difficult to read, sweet Edward being so mean, but hopefully he can redeem himself. Thanks for sharing.

Holy shit Edward is an idiot! I don't care about his reasons. Once Bella finds out Mike is cheating, with Jessica no less, she will be completely crushed. Eddie boy is gonna feel like such an ass!

Author's Response:

Yes, that revelation is going to be hard to stomach for many people in this story, but most Bella and Edward, especially with what Edward is going to find out (more on that later ;)) Thanks for sharing. Give Eddie a chance to explain.

Pardon my French, but: WTF?!

What's going on? Has Edward, after seeing Mike's yacht spiel, one of his "I'm not good enough for her, he is, so I have to let her go" fits? And what a &§)!"!$"§ is Mike anyway, with Jessica on the side already and still doing the grand gestures for Bella? He wants a trophy wife and a yummy little dish on the side for his extra appetite (bastard!), and therefore deserves to end up alone.

I'm excited to find out the real reasons and truth soon. I trust in you and HEA ;)

Author's Response:

It's okay, I expected such reactions to this chapter. I'm glad you trust me enough to continue with the story and see what really is going on in both Mike and Edward's minds (trust me there is a lot). Thanks for sharing and for rating, I appreciate both. More coming soon.

are you fucking kidding me, WTF. i started reading this last night and could not stop except for (human moments). please say you will update soon, and why in the hell cant bella see that jessica is screwing mike, she is to smart for that. what good ass reason does edward have for pushing bella to mike. please the drama is already thick enough, why must you give us more???

still love the story and you, but damn that shocked me to death.

Author's Response:

Everyone sees things they don't want to see and their brain just ignores the signs. Bella has seen hints, but Mike and Jess have been very slick, and what Bella did see, her brain just never acknowledged.

Glad I can still show my face after this chapter and not be stoned on sight :) I know this was a shocker (It shocked me too), but Edward has his reasons.  More coming soon. Thanks for sharing.

please hurry and update.....

Author's Response:

My fingers are tying as fast as they can. More coming soon!

ARE YOU KIDDING ME????

 

This has Jessica written all over it!  That beeotch somehow got to Edward and made this happen. 

 

No, wait.  That doesn't make any sense as Jessica would want them broken up.

 

Leona! 

 

Dang.  I'm so confused I'm confusing myself.

 

Thanks.  Just thanks.  :)

Author's Response:

Okay, I know I shouldn't laugh because you're confused, but I am...sorry. I wish I could tell you what did happen, but I can't, you just have to wait and see :) Thanks for sharing.

What did he find out about Mike?I am shock.

Author's Response:

All will be revealed in time, I promise. Sorry for the blind side. Thanks for sharing.

I knew something like this had to happen... It hurts all the same. I hope Bella ends it with Mike anyways, she needs to prove to herself how strong she is... 
As always, your writing is so enjoyable!

Author's Response:

I know it does and I am sorry for it, but I promise I will make it up soon.

I'm so glad you like my wrirting. Thanks for sharing!

I so wish I had waited to read this til later this weekend!  Bella is still driving me crazy with her lack of standing up for herself and letting Mike walk all over her.  If her love for Edward was so much greater than hers for Mike, then why couldn't she tell him?  Oh... my heart hurts a little today!  I am on the edge awaiting the next chapter...

Thanks for sharing!

Heather Ann

Author's Response:

Hi Heather Ann!

Thank you for sharing on this chapter, and for the rating. Bella was going to tell Mike, but she wanted to prove to herself first that this new gesture of his wouldn't change things between them and make it better. It didn't. She was going to tell Mike about what happened with Edward and that she was leaving him, but the boys got in the way. Now Edward has left her and she's feeling more at sea than ever.

I will try to fix the pain in your heart very soon. Jess and Mike get outed next!

You are very welcome!

 

Chantal

Please hurry, good twist !

Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing. I am writing as fast as I can ;)