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Reviewer: CrymsynRayne (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

i can't wait to see wha happens next. i love this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for rating and sharing your feelings on this chapter. More coming soon, I promise.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

great chapter!! im so excited for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your feelings on this chapter. More coming soon!

Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Pleeeease! tell me Bella is going to find comfort with Edward! And great chapter. Love it! Can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, rating and reviewing. I can't let anything out of the bag, but this is an Edward and Bella fic, so you can work out how it's going to end ;)

New chapter coming soon-Edward's POV!

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

i was soooo hoping for edwards POV.... sooo hurry and update.... cant wait



Author's Response:

I know everyone wants Edward's POV so they can find out why he treated Bella that way, but the outing had to come from Jess-there was no other option. Jess was the perfect perspective for it.

Update coming soon-Eward's POV.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Oh my... what a tangled web we weave.  Not quite what I was expecting to happen, but what a way for everyone to find out and a way for Bella to get free of Mike.

Go Edward! He deserved to be punched.  Now I want to see how he's going to make up to Bella for the hurtful words he said.



Author's Response:

Yes it was a very tangled web indeed, but now the broom has been taken to it and the house is clean. All there is now is for Edward to make up with Bella.

What did you see happening? I think I might start a thread about that.

I'm glad Edward punched him too, though Edward wanted to hit him again, but he was worried about Bella.

Edward's POV next chapter. Look out for it.

Thanks for sharing and rating. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Bout time! Now it's time for Edward to fess up to his stupid rant the day before. What he was thinking!?!

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

HA! I know!

Edward's POV is coming next chapter, which will be up soon, hopefully. Everyone will know what his motives were very soon.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: farmergirl (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

That was good. I'm excited to see more



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing. More coming soon!

Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Yes, it was brilliant :) Jessica is so mean, I can't believe she did that to Bella. :( Jess and Mike deserve each other. Please let Edward get Bella back. Please update real soon :) I have to read more

Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. I was so nervous because people were really looking forward to this chapter and I wanted it to be as good as they expected. I'm so pleased that it did. Mike deserves no one, and Jess needs to find her own man and not someone else's.

More coming soon. The next chapter is Edward's POV.

Thanks for sharing, it means a lot.

Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

I want to know what Edward was thinking when he told Bella he didn't want her.  I hate that there wasn't any interaction between them in this chapter.  I know he was the one calling, but what the hell?



Author's Response:

I assure you that Edward's motives will be revealed in the next chapter, and when that happens I hope he can be forgiven. This chapter needed no interaction between Bella and Edward because this wasn't so much about them, as it was about Jess and Mike. Yes what happened affected them, but their time will come when it pertains to their feelings. Edward's is coming in the next chapter, followed by Bella's.

He was the one calling, but as you can see Angela was being the good friend and protecting Bella-at least so she thinks. We'll find out the reason for him calling in the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Kisster (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Oh, wow! That was an interesting turn of events. I figured Mike was just using Jess, but for her to be pregnant and him to be such an ass. Wow.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing. Jess was being used by Mike, but like many women before her, she fell for the words and not what her gut was telling her. Now she has to face life with a child on the way and Mike hightailing it for the hills.

Reviewer: Sandra (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

On a scale of 1 to 10 of 'Complete-and-utter-a**holeness' Mike ranks a solid 23. Even though Jessica is 'the other woman', I actually feel bad for her. A little.

Can't wait for E's side of it all.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing. I agree with you entirely and thank you for the a** hole rating. I might just use that in the next chapter if I have your permission. Let me know.

Edward's POV next chapter.

Reviewer: KellieR (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Hurry with your next update.  Can't wait to hear Edward's side to this whole debacle. 

Thanks for a well written and imaginative story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch for rating and commenting on this chapter, and the story on a whole. I very much appreciate it. The next chapter is coming ASAP and it will be Edward's POV. Look out for it!

Reviewer: springlilys86 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Ahh!  This story is really going to kill me!  I have to say, I kind of expected Bella to call the wedding off in spite of what Edward told her.  But it works this way too.  Please hurry with the next chapter!  We must find out what's going to happen!



Author's Response:

Awe, I hope it won't kill you, that would be a terrible weight on my conscience :) Bella has her reasons for not calling it off before and those will be revealed in her next chapter.

Edward's POV coming soon!

Reviewer: ilovethisplace (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Totally worth it!  Every chapter just keeps getting better!



Author's Response:

I'm so pleased you think so. I knew everyone was waiting for it. Well I hope to continue that trend.

Thanks for sharing and rating.

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Wow, I didn't expect it all to come out THAT way! I'm so glad they all know the truth about Jess now, though, and how they ended up together. Looking forward to Bella REMEMBERING a night with Edward.

Author's Response:

I hoped that this chapter might surprise some of you, and I think I can say that I accomplished my goal. I always knew Jess would be the one to blow the whistle on her relationship with Mike and that it would be at the wedding. I couldn't wait to get to this part.

Glad you're enjoying the story. More coming soon-Edward's POV.

Thanks for sharing and rating.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

GAHHHH ... i hate mike ... he is a complete jerk ... what was he planning on doing? keeping jess around to screw her whenever he wanted? that ass ... poor jess . I mean she isn;t a good person herself but nobody deserves to be treated the way she was. I cant wait for edward's view ... i need to know what was said ! AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Mike was taking care of his needs and didn't bother about anyone else. I can say this much, he wasn't going to keep Jess around forever. I agree Jess was dumb, but what she got she didn't entirely deserve.

Edward's POV is next so look out for it. I hope you enjoy it as well. Glad you're enjoying the story so much. It's wonderful for us authors.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Please!!  I need EPOV.   Great chapter.  Mike and Jessica deserve each other.  Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Edward's POV is coming in the next chapter, followed by Bella's. This mess will be very different in perspectives for these three and I hope you enjoy them all.

Mike deserves no one. He isn't worth it.

Jess, deserves someone who can be hers and not have to share. She needs to deal with her issues and I think a little therapy is needed.

Update coming soon!

Reviewer: nslachey (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

What the heck? What a way to find out about all that mess.

Jessica is one crazy bitch!!!

Love the update and love the story. I can hardly wait to see Edwards side of this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your feelings in this chapter. I love to hear from my readers. It was a very out there way to have the truth come to light, but there was no other way it was going to.

Jess was blinded by her love and the hope for the life she always wanted. She just wanted it to happen, but unfortunately she went about it the wrong way and ended up hurting everyone around her and herself.

Edward's POV next chapter. Look out for it.

Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

That was so AWESOME!!!!  I am so glad that the cat is out of the bag.  Now I'm dying to know what happened with Edward.  Please update again soon.  Once again, I love you're story.  Please keep writing, and I will most definitely be waiting to read it.



Author's Response:

AHHH!!! I'm glad you thought so! I'm stoked that you enjoy my writing. If you haven't checked out Tortured Heart yet, you might want to do so. I am also working on several other projects but they won't be coming to Twilighted until Broken Promises is complete. Vote in the poll if you haven't already.

Edward's POV is coming in the next chapter. I know everyone wants to know why he did what he did. I hope he can be forgiven once he explains.

I'll keep writing. I promise. Thank you for rating and reviewing.

Reviewer: lindseyfair (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Is it bad that I feel sorry for Jess? Mike really screwed her ten ways from Sunday. Can't wait to hear if Edward was the one calling and why he did what he did the night before.

Author's Response:

No it isn't bad that you feel sorry for Jess, I do too, as do a few others. Mike screwed everyone because of his own personal desires and didn't care what happened as long as he ended up on top.

Edward's POV coming up next so look out for it. Thank you for rating and reviewing.

Reviewer: pavelowwife53 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

ssssssssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooo  worth it!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

OMG, intense. For the first time in fanfic history, I fee bad for Jessica. She was reacting as any woman in her place would. I think Charlie should punch Mike...now THAT would be awesom!!!! Come on, work it in for me :)



Author's Response:

Hahahaha! I will see what I can do on the Charlie punching Mike scenario. Thank you for rating and reviewing. I appreciate it. I felt badly for her too, though I knew there would be mixed emotions when people read this. I knew some people would sympathis and others would think she is just dumb, but I hope that most of us see she was just being blind and stupid, but we can feel a little sorry for how things have ended for her. Thanks again.

Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Wow.  Talk about a bomb.  We all knew it was happening, but I never thought it would happen like that.  Great call on putting it in Jessica's POV.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I am so pleased to see that everyone agrees that this was appropriate coming from Jessica's POV. I think her perspective gave this chapter more depth than if it had come from someone else. Yes it was a bomb the way she told everyone, with the press there to boot, but I know everyone is glad she did. Now everyone is single, but unfortunately, no one is happy.

Update coming ASAP-Edward's POV.

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Yeh. At least Edward got to finally hit Mike though I would of liked him to hit him more than once. Jessica is really just dumb as. Next chapter from EPOV will explain what he was thinking when he broke it off with Bella. I  hope. Post soon please.

 



Author's Response:

Edward's POV is the next chapter, so you will get to find out what made him act so strangely and so cruelly towards Bella. Edward is pretty happy he got to hit Mike, he would have done it again but he was worried about Bella. Jessica was blind and stupid, but she isn't completely evil (a glimpse of that later). Thanks for commenting and rating.

Reviewer: lag0725 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride

Love that they finally split! Love that it was from jessica's point of view! Love that she's pregnant! I'll be waiting patiently.. (Kind of) update soon!

Author's Response:

I am glad you have so much love going around for this story. I share your feelings. Try to be patient with me, the next chapter-Edward's POV-will be coming soon, hopefully in a week if not sooner. Thanks for sharing.

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