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Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Call Me Irresponsible
That was such a sweet meeting in the garage. That Edward shared an embarrassing moment about his car, so sweet. I loved their little conversation, and that sweet kiss. I hope they keep their date!!! Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Bewitched, Bothered, & Bewildered
Yes, they are all right! Bella is meant for Edward! The two week probation? Damn....wonder how this will turn out!!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Elvis has left the building . . .
Yay for Rosalie! She helped out Edward! can't wait to see what happens next in that garage!! Love it!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:36 AM · On: It's Now or Never
Ah, so obviously she feels it too, and wants to start breaking rules.....hahahaha. Love it. let's hope Miss Trip and Falls shows up and lands on Edward's lp....lol. Reading on!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Viva Las Vegas
Nice beginning to your story. We get the point that neither Bella or Edward are from the bar scene. Emmett is the loud usual horn dog, and most likely Rose is the other waitress. Reading on!!
Reviewer: cullensbabe (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
I love yhour story
Reviewer: cullensbabe (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 02:09 AM · On: Call Me Irresponsible
luv it
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 07:22 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
Can't blame Edward for getting jealous with those men's behavior towards Bella. They weren't being respectful to her at all. Yes she's a playboy waitress, but that doesn't give them a free pass to touch her for any reason. Emmett should never have asked Edward to go to the club. It would be hard for Edward to watch men ogle his girlfriend in her skimpy attire and not want to punch them all to stop. I'm glad he apologized to her and explained his actions. They both made their declarations of love to each other. Edward had better tell her about the job being almost completed before they make love at his apartment. Because if he doesn't Bella will think he only told her he loved her to use Bella and leave her.
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 06:09 AM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
Loved the update! OMG what is going to happen when he has to go!! I a little worried about that *sighs*
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
FANTASTICO!!!!
I had always wanted to see Edward's possessive and jealous side come out, especially in seeing Bella working with type of men and clientele she deals with everyday. Now that Edward is openly in love and involved with Bella, seeing other mens' reactions to her would most definitely cause that jealous side of him to flare up.
I'm thrilled you're back to updating, Darlin'! It's a Christmas gift to your readers! WOO-HOO!
Reviewer: kate89 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
sweet and sexy. All i have to say.
Reviewer: tlwatkins36 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 07:53 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
He needs to tell her asap.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 05:27 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
Excellent chapter!
I was wondering when Edward would get jealous. I'm glad that they got through it, though. :)
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
Wonderful chapter sweets. :)
Edward's jealousy might be showing, but DAMN!! That man is so sexy when he's jealous! ;)
That was such a fantasic update.
And as always, looking forward to the next chapter, my friend
Reviewer: rugbystarturnedwriter (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 02:00 PM · On: Hey! Jealous Lover
Jealous Rosalie would have been fun to see. But I guess I shall just have to be happy with my little Rose and Emmett bits. I love your Emmett *sigh* hes such a ... a ... sweetheart?
Anyhow moving on, bad bad Edward *shakes head* now that is not the way to a girls heart. most girls are not to thrilled when you compare them to strippers. Even ones that look that good in a bunny uniform.
Reviewer: kate89 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 12:49 PM · On: My Foolish Heart
GAHHHHH! sums it up! Ive read this title of the story before but I've always skipped over it. I'm glad I took the chance and read it. The characters are soooo sweet and old fashioned Edward makes my heart flutter when I read about his mother manners. It reminds me that that's HOW boyfriends are suppose to act. Please update soon or you'll have a very antsy reader on the web!
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 11:12 AM · On: My Foolish Heart
I'm so glad you updated, this is such a cute story!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 09:59 PM · On: The Nearness of You
i am in love with this story
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 09:00 PM · On: It's Now or Never
i love it so far
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 01:05 AM · On: My Foolish Heart
Edward and Bella sleeping the day away together awakening in each others arms how romantic. Edward's best day ever was waking to Bella in his arms cuddling closer to him. Emmett calling ruined part of it, but quickly got rid of him. Calling regarding fight tickets when Edward was spending quality time with Bella. Right Emmett like it was a hard choice for Edward to make duh Bella or fight tickets. duh! Bella of course. Since Rose is gone, Bella and Edward have the rest of the evening together and neither is seeing anyone else either. So Bella is Edward's girl and he is in love with her. Edward's convinced he is going to break her heart when he returns to Seattle after this Vegas job is finished. Hasn't he ever heard about long distance romance? email? skype? cell phone? text messages? etc.... Lots of ways to keep in touch with each other. Bella is attending college, but college doesn't last forever. Things could work out, he just needs to think things through and talk with Bella. She might leave Vegas and move to Seattle, change colleges, etc... He doesn't know until they talk about it.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 04:56 PM · On: My Foolish Heart
Edward, Edward, Edward, still hasn't learned even after all stories written.
Reviewer: lilangel_me (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 06:35 AM · On: My Foolish Heart
YEAH! Finaly writing this story again - LOVE it! I love the starting love in this story. Although I thought Bella would have figured out, being that she seems to "know" Vegas - the the guys aren't there forever. I'm nervous about her recation - but you will do a HEA - right?! You usually do, and it's usually GREAT - so I'm excited to see where this goes. Thanks again for continuing this story.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 09:21 PM · On: My Foolish Heart
So thrilled to see this updated!!!!!
And I positively LOVE how sweet and romantic they are with each other.
But I do have a question: won't Bella consider it lying if Edward chooses to not tell her that his stay in Vegas is only temporary? If he doesn't tell her soon, like asap or THAT night, then I expect that once Bella learns the truth, she will be devastated and immediately think that Edward only considered her a 'Vegas-Bunny fling', and not serious enough to tell the truth that he will eventually be leaving Vegas. Almost as if that by not telling her of his 'temp stay' that he will be ensuring that she won't leave him and that she'll be his Playboy entertainment.
Maybe Edward won't wait. But in any case, once Bella realizes she's in love with Edward THEN learns that he's leaving, she will inevitably feel a little fooled and betrayed.
Hmmm, I can't wait to see how you handle this. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 09:18 PM · On: My Foolish Heart
I loved everything about this chapter! It was excellent!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 04:17 PM · On: My Foolish Heart
WHY?! WHY IS IT SO SHORT????
I don't want Edward to leave Vegas! i want them to stay in their perfect little bunny bubble and get married and all that!
Please tell me that you don't have some serious angst coming up, because i dunno how i would take it. *sniff sniff*
I would tell you to update soon, but i won't say anything. I'm just glad that I at least got to read something ;)
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