This was a great chapter. It gave us another look into those crazy dreams that I am oh so curious about. :) To say they're interesting would be an understatement.

And another surprise--Leah coming to stand by Bella's side! I think her very drawn out apology was very in character. :)

Absolutely cannot wait for the next one! :D

Author's Response:

Okay, crazy dreams are becoming one of my favorite things to write (behind sexy Jacob, goofy Embry, pms Leah, and perverted Quil). They will be (slightly) explained at some time in the future.

I'm glad Leah acted appropriately bitchy. ;)

Thank you for your continued feedback!

Trekkies huh? I guess that's true. Some of us are just a little more open about our obsessions I suppose.

It's almost time. I am so excited!!! Oh yeah and great chapter of course.

 

Author's Response:

It upsets me that a lot people feel self conscious about their fandoms.  I myself am a little bit guilty of this.  Bringing up Twilight in my Interp and Argument class (which is specifically about fandoms) would probably garner more than a few eye rolls.  I really shouldn't care what people think, but...I guess that's human nature. (My brother on the other hand is an avid Star Wars fan and loud and proud.)  Do you like Star Trek?  I used to watch the Next Generation all the time when I was little, and I love the new movies.

Thank you! It's great to hear how much you enjoyed it.

awesome

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

I've followed this story for a while and i'm not sure that I have reviewed yet (I may have.. possibly) but I just had to say that I look forward to this update above all others. And that's a serious fact! I have so many stories on alert, from three different sites and over five different fandoms and Zenith makes me the happiest :) Does that make you feel a little crazy? Serious props to you for intriguing me so much. I want the whole thing now. Its like waiting for a new novel to come out and having to wait for a year in between!

Love your story, very much wanting for Felicity to do some hoodoo and make Bella either crazy, have some serious memory overloads or powerful in a bewitching way.

Also, I love how included Leah is in this, and the whole scars thing is pretty well written.

I'll be good and review next chapted too :)

Fool

Author's Response:

"A little crazy" doesn't even begin to describe how hearing that makes me feel.  Try "fervently rhapsodic"!!!!  It's just amazing because this story is like an little indie film compared to all of those box office smash hit stories out there, and I just love how supportive my audience has been even though we're a small community.  So thank you.

I'm sorry about how long it takes me to update, I AM trying to be better about that.  No more of those two month waits.

It seems you have a pretty good idea of what's to come, so I hope that I deliver it in a way that doesn't dissapoint.  I'm glad that you like the Leah/scar intrigue.  I've really enjoyed writing that subplot.

Thank you very much. :D

lol so am i it seems its rely movin on a jus want th big mystery 2 cum oot in th open a rely wana kno an a so hope jake an bella gt so much closer soon

plz update soon am so impatient for this story lol

=)

Author's Response:

Things certainly are moving now, aren't they? You sound as impatient as I am. WHICH IS ALOT!

I'll do my best to be super speedy! Thanks. :D

It's starting to get really good. Can't wait for "It is time" to be revealed. hehe Keep writing. :)

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Finally.  FINALLY it starts to get good.  Everything before this chapter was utter crap. ;)

Oh, I'll be writing for sure!  I'm too excited not to. Thanks!

I loved all of the pack interactions in this chapter but the best part was Bella riding Jake.  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to Bella being in the woods in the middle of the night with a pack of werewolves and he thougth her riding on the back of Jake's bike  was dangerous.  HaHa.  so will Jake give Edward the "this is what Bella looked like when you left her thougths"?

Author's Response:

Yes, I've decided to quit college and create a wolf-back riding ranch!!! I'm thinking it would go over VERY well once I got a few of the kinks worked out. ;)

Actually, the whole "Jacob purposefully recalling Bella's state after Edward left" happened durring their little um "chit-chat" in woods where Bella wasn't present.  A lot of people have asked me about that scene, and I am considering writing it as an outtake.  It would probably be from Edward's POV.

I'm hoping to have the next chapter submitted this Sunday. Thank you!

I'm not a fan of Breaking Dawn either. It's almost like she forgot all the characters' personalities. I like the wedding scene (because, duh, I'm a girl)... and I like the first wakeup... but... that's about it. I think Jacob is the only character that was true throughout the series. This is a reread. I'm a TOTAL insomniac; therefore, I believe this is my 10th time through the series. I just borrowed "The Blind Side" from my dad... so I'm going to shift gears to a football book before I start Twilight again. LOL.

Author's Response:

The first wakeup is good, I agree. Aside from that, the only part of the book I found enjoyment from was the humor in Jacob's POV. 10th time?! Bravo.  You're right up there with my big brother. I loved watching The Blind Side, so you'll have to tell me if the book is as good as the movie (usually books are better, but this book doesn't have Sandra Bullock).

Have to say I agree. I'm not new to fanfic but definitely new to the Twilight fandom and this is up there with one of the best stories I've read. And I'm really, really picky. :) I would still admire this story no matter who Bella ends up with, but I particularly loved what Jacob said to Bella about Edward's love for her and the Romeo & Juliet comparison. When I sit and think about what I'd love to see in a fanfic, everything is in this story. But I think you really struck a chord with that conversation. ;) Love it! Brilliant.

Author's Response:

Wow, it's so heart-warming to hear that you think so highly of this story, especially from someone who sounds like they've been around the block like I have.  (I've been reading fanfic since, um....gosh, since I was twelve. And I think I started in on twilight almost three years ago.)  Welcome to the Twilight fandom!  It's pretty darn extensive and can be kinda overwhelming, so if you have any specific story types you're looking for, I'd be happy to try to offer some recs. :)

Haha, the whole Romeo and Juliet speech got away from me a little. ^_^ Sometimes I get a LITTLE to passionate. (And I was in a Shakespeare class last semester with a crazily passionate instructor who rubbed off on me, so that didn't exactly help, lol.)  But I'm glad that something about it sparked a fire in you like it did for me.

Thank you, and I hope to hear more from you as the story continues!

Oh, and I love "That's what she said jokes"... they make me inappropriately giggle... and they are AWESOME when they follow the ultimate innocent comment. I love them, and being 27 with two young kids, I have to beware of letting it slip... I can just see my children saying "Yea... and that's what she said"... I couldn't help but giggle then have to backtrack. Guess I'm an evil person. :D

Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHA! Yes, be careful not to corrupt the innocent youth.  Kids do after all say the darndest things. :D

I LOVED all the jokes with the wolves, particularly the ones involving the leash and harness.  They got me laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes!  Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Eye-watering laughter is the best kind of funny. :D

Thanks for the feedback!

I am eager for this next chapter with everybody all together.  I love it!

Author's Response:

I'm really pumped about it too. :)

Thank you!