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Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 09:56 AM · On: Scarring

whoaaa wumble in forks!

haha



Author's Response:

They're the Sharks and Jets!!! Lol, I should have had them break out into song. :)

Reviewer: Katastrophe (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Agreement

And here I was just hoping that you would get to the part where Bella got her "powers" or we found out what was really going on with her.  I'm just a chapter too soon!



Author's Response:

Sorry!  You're right.  But I'll try to get the next chapter out ASAP.

Thank you.

Reviewer: x-Silly-Caitlin-x (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Agreement

Question: Is this a BXE story or a BXJ story? Or is it all a suprise?

And when do we get answers about Bella's transformation?



Author's Response:

I guess you can say that it's a surprise because I don't want to give away the ending, and when this story is all said and done you'll know why telling you now would give away the ending.  Sorry if that doesn't make much sense...

lol, you'll get some answers and even more questions next chapter. :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: stepy (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Agreement

Thanks for the update.  Great chapter.  Can't wait to see what happens with Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll try to keep your wait to a minimum. :)

Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Agreement

I read your entire story yesterday.... I absolutely love it!  I love that Bella and Jake are together, because I've always loved his easy going, good natured character.  You have captured his great sense of humor, and I love the way that he just "knows" Bella....  Sure, sure Edward is a great character too.... but his possessiveness and control in Eclipse bothered me.  As did his never ending self loathing and mistrust of Bella.

The extra twist on Bella's character is awesome!!! I can't wait to see where you take her.

SM gave Bella all this special "perception", and the vivid dreams, and never really explained herself, so making Bella a decendant of a witch is so incredible....

I also loved how you added Leah's attack.... it forms a special bond between Emily and Bella.

Truly a captivating story and I can't wait for the next update.  Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us!!!



Author's Response:

Haha, it is soooo bad that you were able to read everything in one day while my readers who have been with me from the beginning have had to read that much stretched out over the course of a entire year.  lol, I am BAD.  Shame on me for being so slow at times.

So you've been reading this story for a day, and I think you're already miles ahead of most everyone else.  One of my main inspiration for writin this plot were all of the little quirks that you mentioned Bella having.  We'll see that these things all have implications when it comes to her transformation.

Welcome to the story, and thank you for taking the time to let me know you're reading and thinking things! :D

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Agreement

Great chapter!  So if you are so excited about the next chapter why couldn't you have left us with a little tidbit and get us excited to?  Gah!  What's a reader have to do here to just get a little looky at another great chapter.  I am still confused about this whole transformation thingy.  You have really sparked my curiousity on this.  It's unique and different from all other Jake and Bella stories and I like that.  I had to go read some Ed and Bella All human stories just to cut down on all my incomplete J and B ones why I wait.  But love that you updated and can't wait to read the next chapter.  Chop Chop, my dear! :)

Hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

Lol, I read AH Bella/Edward stories too!  But I don't really consider them Twilight stories because the characters are usually butchered and reshaped to the author's own liking after being taken from their natural environment.  I just enjoy them as fiction. I have a small AH J/B story in the works, and I'm working really hard on keeping the characters and circumstances legit to the series.

If you're confused now, just wait until the next chapter when things start getting messy.  It'll answer some questions and then raise entirely new ones. :)

I couldn't give you a sneak peak, because I didn't have anything written to show you.  Plus, I wouldn't be able to give a preview for next chapter without giving almost everything away.

Thank you for being patient, Stephanie!

Reviewer: jmack18 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Agreement

i love your story!  Haha, that's awesome forks high school gets a 40 min lunch.  I only got 22 mins to eat lunch at my high school



Author's Response:

22 minutes!?!  That's cruel and unusual punishment! We got 30 minutes for lunch at my high school plus about ten minutes worth of passing perioed (my school was REALLY big).  I have friends who came from smaller schools and they get almost an engtire hour (WTF!).

Thank you!

Reviewer: nawaliy (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Agreement

I loved this story and you should continue this story but I have a question for you.........................

 

IS THIS BELLA AND JACOB or BELLA AND EDWARD story (due to the fact that I LOVE BELLA AND EDWARD stories and always will)



Author's Response:

Lol, I've had a great deal of people pose that exact same question, and let me just say that I am quite impressed that you've stuck it out this long.  Most of my E/Bers cut out on me several chapters ago, so I take it as a huge compliment that you've read this far.  Unfortunately I have to give you the same response that I've give everybody else:  I'm not gonna give the ending away.  I can tell you, however, that the three relationships I will be focusing on developing further are Bella/Jacob, Bella/Edward, and Bella/Leah(in a non-romantic capacity). You will see Bella and Jacob's relationship continuing to grow in the near future, but Edward and Bella have A LOT they need to work through.  They love eachother so incredibly much that they can't walk this narrow line of avoidance for much longer, so I will be devoting time to mending their relationship.

I'm afraid that's all I can give you, but thank you very much for taking the time to comment with your questions. :)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Agreement

err is Bella unguarded now? Because I don't recall anyone but Jacob being with her at the time Jacob left? maybe I read that wrong?

On another note, Bella's been reunited, of sorts, with the Cullens now - and Edward impressed me by not showing the longing that I assume he wanted to show.

Interesting times ahead :)



Author's Response:

At the beginning of the chapter the Cullens and the Pack worked out that the wolves can patrol in Forks again.  You'll find out exactly who's there in the next chapter. And then, of course, I'm sure the Edward has someone on watch at all times (if not himself).

Edward and his self-control.  *sigh* Don't worry.  He'll crack eventually.

Thank you, and, yes, very interesting times ahead.

Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Agreement

So many questions, so little time.

Can´t wait for the next chapter.  ;)

 



Author's Response:

I know EXACTLY how you feel.  There is soooo much stuff I have to fit into this story that it's taking me forever to get to certain parts.  This is why I'm excited about next chapter!

Thank you much.

Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Agreement

lol!!! u always make me smile :D

thank your for the amazing chapter!!! funness!!! u metnioned trekkies so i must say that it may be the new star trek, but im totally in love with chris pine *swoon* ;)

please update soon! ;D

-twi



Author's Response:

Chris Pine is yummy!  Seeing him and Karl Urban together on the screen nearly caused my fangirl heart to fail.

Yes, this chapter had some fun, but the next one is gonna be kind of intense, so be ready!

Thanks as always!

Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Agreement

Love love love it!  Please hurry with the next chaper!  You are so awesome and I love how  you are writing this!  My favorite story and I have read a lot lately!  Keep up the great work!  :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  I'll do my absolute best to be timely with the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: tmc1979 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Constellations

New to this story but absolutely love it!  I am sooooo into Bella and Jacob together I was actually disappointed that Edward was coming back *Gasp*  I was sooo team edward until I saw New Moon and then read Eclipse.  Didn't care for Breaking Dawn very much and how SM ended things.  I just can't stop liking Jacob and wanting him to be happy...with Bella.  I love your story so much and I believe this is truly how things would have happened if Alice  had not come back and Bella had never went to Italy to save Edward.  I love Bella and Jacob's relationship so much and I love how you are putting the twist in there!  I am excited to read more but wanted to give you praise for how good of a job you are doing!  :)



Author's Response:

Welcome, welcome, welcome!  You are soooo not alone when it comes to resenting Edward's return.  Many other readers share your sentiment.  Yeah, I didn't like Breaking Dawn either, mostly because it thoroughly repulsed me (the baby, Jake imprinting on the baby, the sparkly and tied-with-a-shiny-ribbon ending).

It's such compliment to hear that you find my story an acceptable alternative to how things really went down. That means alot.

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Agreement

still lovin it



Author's Response:

And that "still" means so much!  Thanks for sticking with me. :)

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Agreement

bella is a WITCH!?

Author's Response:

*nods*

And I am so excited to write it!!! gah.

Reviewer: candygirl (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Agreement

Great stuff! Keep up the good work. Post frequently! :-D Also, I am NOT a closet fan...I'm out in the open! This story rocks!



Author's Response:

*high five*

Awesome.  Welcome out into the light, baby!  No one here judges if you sparkle. ;)

Thank you for reading/reviewing, and I'll do my best to post in a timely manner.

Reviewer: mizbiz (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Agreement

darnit...

caught up...

grr...

...

...

GAHAHAHAHAAAAA   *wipes tears*  This story is freakin' amazing!  Gushy moments, sad moments... and downright HILARIOUS MOMENTS that make me laugh weird and probably have my roommate looking over at me and thinking wtf.

XD  Awesome story!  PLEASE CONTINUE!!!  PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

Welcome to the story!  I'm sorry I make you dork laugh. :)  I do that all the time when I'm reading stories.

Your gushing is making me blush, so thank you very much for that.  Of course I'll continue.  I'm in too deep to stop now!

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Agreement

I'm excited for the next chapter too!



Author's Response:

GOOD!!! You should be! :D

Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Agreement

you know what this story really needs? for someone to die... im hoping bella's little worry at the end of this chap was forshadowing hahaha.

is this ultimately j/b or e/b? e/j? maybe leah/b? loved the first part with the vampwolf meeting. id like to see more confrontation, like that scene.



Author's Response:

Someone to die, huh? *whistles nonchalantly*

Oh, there will be plenty of worrying going on next chapter.  And some Bella freak out.

I actually plan on developing Bella's relationship with all three of those characters (Leah in a friendship capacity).  It's really hard to balance Bella's love for both Jacob and Edward, and I have a very thin line to walk when it comes to emotional cheating and whatnot.  We'll see how Bella handles it.

lol, I'll try to work in more tense confrontations. Thanks!

Reviewer: olga90005 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Agreement

dang... i didnt know you can get info on how many people favorite your story... in that case I think your story is awesome and yes, i am a closeted reader who favorited your story lol! :p



Author's Response:

I didn't know you could get that kind of info either until I stumbled upon it, and then I wanted to compare it to other stories, but apparently you can only look at your own. :(

Another out-of-the-closeter! Yay!  It's so great to meet you and know that you've been following this story.  I'm glad you think the story is awesome.  Thank you much!

Reviewer: twilightfanatic (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Agreement

i am sitting here in agony waiting for bella's dreams to..well i dont know what is going to happen but you are killing me softly with the waiting! gah!

otherwise..great story!



Author's Response:

Don't die before next chapter!!! Otherwise all that agonizing will be for nothing. :D

Thank you!

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Agreement

FIRST LET ME SAY, YOU MY DEAR ARE VERY SILLY. lol I love your story. Can't for Bella's change though. I really look forward to that.



Author's Response:

I AM very silly.  Guilty as charged. :)

Then you should really look forward to next chapter. *wink wink*

Thank you so much for commenting!

Reviewer: SJR888 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Agreement

Excellent chapter! How you progressed the dream for Bella and where you let it end almost had me miss the dates on Feliciticy's tombstone, ALMOST. The content of the dream was very successful in making me disreguard the details. It had such a cryptic and errie vibe to it. Noticing the dates on the tombstone has now opened up a whole new door full possibilities as to where this is heading. I could say witch/vampire but I don't want to go further into that in my review.

I am loving this story I really don't care about the pairings right now and that says something because for me it's always about the pairings. I love all the twists in the story. Bella's line to Jake about her dream left me with a sense of forboding. I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Good job!  You're one of very few people who noticed the dates.  That '5' was awfully small and easy to overlook. ;)  Ooh, I love theories!  You'll have to tell me if how things pan out match up to what you expected.

It's great to hear that you can enjoy this story without getting caught up in the pairings.  I know a lot of people stopped reading when they realized there would be a lot J/B.  Some of the foreboding will come to a head next chapters, so be excited, cuz I am!!!

Thank you.

Reviewer: Jessisreang (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Agreement

Maybe I was just missing that, because now that you explain your angle it seemed more right for him to respond that way. Not your fualt, I misunderstand easily. I think he totally needs to call Jake out at some point tho :) that would be some dram ehh ~_^ Oh man, there was another reason I wanted to post another review. Forgot! oops :( Now I'm kind of mad at Jake for telling her him and Eddie had that talk. Why does he have to be so compassionate, I just would have kept my mouth shut darn it! lol.I guess Jake doesn't know Edward's trying to stay out it?? I really hope this doesn't end in trajedy XD don't get too creative ~_^

I'll go back into hibernation until the next chapter now. K.thnx.bi



Author's Response:

Trust me when I say it can't completely be you misunderstanding.  If Edward's behavior isn't being interpreted the way I want it to, it means I'm not conveying it correctly.  So, I will for sure look into that.

 I wouldn't worry too much about Jacob being THAT compassionate.  He isn't doing this stuff for Edward's benefit.  He wants Bella to be happy, and he wants Bella to choose him without thinking that Edward isn't an option.  Jacob wants her decision to be an informed one so she doesn't regret it down the line and so that he doesn't feel like second best.  So not entirely selfless of him. :)

Oh, Jacob know the real reason behind Edward leaving, but he isn't certain about what Edward's current agenda is.

I love our discussions so much. :D

Reviewer: Jacobblackishot (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Agreement

Hey

I just have to say that I love this story! (There I'm coming out of the fan closet! :o))  The tension is this story is totally awesome.  I can feel it when I'm reading.  I'm always hanging on the edge of my couch (or recliner if you want to get technical).  Keep up the great work.  You are an awesome writer.



Author's Response:

Oh, it's great to meet you!  I don't consider suspense one of my strong suits, so I'm glad that you think it's passable. :)

Thank you for stepping out the closet!  That's awesome.

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