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Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Scab
AWWW! that was soooo adorable! and the best part was it was entirely Jake/Bella in character. Even though we hardly ever get to see the soft, sensitive jake, deep down i think everyone always knew it was there. I think you portrayed that moment PERFECTLY. with just the right amount of bella's inevitable unessecary angst. Love the ending too. Jake is sooooooooooooo capable of dazzeling bella! love the chapter. please, update more sooooon!!! like, now?? XD!
Reviewer: Jacoblacklover (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 05:25 PM · On: Scab
upadte quickly its going to get good
Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 05:12 PM · On: Scab
Oh, wow, keep this up and you'll be my favorite writer soon. That was really, really good. Super good, in fact. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2008 08:02 PM · On: Crutch
How interesting. I don't know if you are still working on this or not, but it really makes me want to read more. Thanks!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 03:24 PM · On: Crutch
ooh! can't wait to see what happens next! I Love the original twist! update soon. it's going in my faves.
Reviewer: Edward-vs-Jacob (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Crutch
wow i want to know whats so wierd about leah! please update soon!
Reviewer: Edward-vs-Jacob (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Crutch
wow i want to know whats so wierd about leah! please update soon!
Reviewer: KrispyLove (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 08:28 PM · On: Crutch
That was awesome! More?
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 07:50 PM · On: Crutch
Oh, I love that little Bella/Jake "action" back there... =D Gold! Duh duh duh dun! Ooh! What could it be!?! *gasp* Leah's a zombie! (In the literal sense) No... She's a vampire! Gah! I don't know! *sob* I'm usually pretty good at this... Or... At least with with coming up with completely random/impossible/crazy predictions that fit all the clues... But I'm totally stumped here! Hmm... We haven't really "seen" her face yet... She looked vacant... Her skin is icy... Her hand fell limp and she was giving involuntary shrugs... Bella "didn't see" something when Leah looked up... Bella bolted down the stairs... Eventually, she's going to go through a "supernatural change of her own"... Hmm... Still lost here... But... I think I'm sticking to my first theory... Yup. Leah's a zombie... Uh huh. lol Hey... Wanna enlighten me... An update would do wonders... *wink, wink; nudge, nudge* =D
Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 01:40 PM · On: Crutch
Wow! This is very well written. I felt like I was reading canon, not fanfiction. I can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: sahara512 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Crutch
hmm...i like your idea of what could have happened here. also, i thought you did a great job charaterizing what alice would have said had she just called instead of actually hopping on that plain. i'm really excited to see where you're going to take this story--please update soon!
Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 09:32 AM · On: Crutch
Is Leah a vampire? How? Isn't she supposed to become a werewolf? This is really, really good by the way. I never thought of something ahppening like that. Very creative!
Reviewer: Kas_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 08:54 AM · On: Crutch
Interesting start. Good writing and I think you've got the essense of the characters. Can't wait to see where this goes...
Reviewer: eringobraugh (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 04:49 AM · On: Crutch
Thank you for sharing...I'm definately interested in reading more...It sounds like it's going to be a good read!
Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 03:01 AM · On: Crutch
Very interesting; you've managed to take what could be an overdone storyline and make it fresh again. I love your writing; it drew me in immediately and I'm very intrigued. Looking forward to what's coming next!
Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 12:25 AM · On: Crutch
oh my...that's a little freaky. What's up with Leah? Not very nice to start out with a cliffhanger...sets a bad precedent ;o) I hope you continue, I'd like to see what happens.
Reviewer: KrzyRiver (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 12:11 AM · On: Crutch
You have me very, very intrigued. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Reviewer: screamingSOUL (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 11:53 PM · On: Crutch
You left me very intrigued! Hope you continue this story it is very interesting and I would love to see how it developes.
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