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Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Job Hazard
loving this story!
Author's Response: loving this review!
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Together
AWESOME!!! please update! i love this stoy! i cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you oh, so much! Glad you enjoy.
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Together
oh wow!! cnt ait to read the next part(s)!!
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Together
ooohh loving it so far! cant wait till next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback; it keeps me truckin'. :)
Reviewer: twofortwilight (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Together
I love the way you write. The story is moving along very nicely, however I can't help but hope (the Team Edward side of me) that Edward shows up soon. I'm anxious at the idea that she falls harder for Jacob and makes her decision even more difficult. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yes, where the HECK is Edward? An excelent question that I'm sure he'll be happy to answer when he shows up a little later in the story. His delayed arrival is for a few reasons including that there are some plot elements that have to get put in full gear before his return, and that from what I've read from SM's website and what the actaul series tell us, Edward wasn't going to give in and return to Forks for a little while longer until he received Rosalie's phone call.
But don't worry, he'll return with a splash!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Together
Umm ok that was wierd...First he turns her down and then he kisses her in public. His emotions are giving me whiplash hehehe! I can't wait to see where this goes! this is a Bella and Edward story isn't it?
Author's Response: Hmmm...I'm gonna say that this is a Bella story, and that Jacob and Edward are just along for the ride. As far as who she ends up with...yeah, I'm not gonna give it away. I'll just say that we've got a long way to go before the end. ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Together
Great update. So, I am Team Edward all of the way (and I , of course, hope we end up there) but I am enjoyed Bella being with Jacob right now. She really needs him. THat being said, I will vomit if she sleeps with him. LOL.
I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I just got this cazy mental picture of you chucking all over Jacob and Bella while they're about to get it on! *Snort*
That aside, I'm glad you're sticking with the story (even if you're just waiting for Edward to show up like most people...lol). And thank you so much for reviewing! I hope I don't dissapoint.
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Together
Ahhhh... its refreshing to read some good jacob/bella for once.
Author's Response: Well I'm happy to do the refreshing. Thanks!
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Choking
Very good....more please! And soon!
Reviewer: lizzybtmn (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Choking
Yea!!! Another really good chapter! hee hee I cant wait to see what happens to Bella!!! This has definitely been my favorite story that I've read on this site. Okay, you have to update your story NOW!!! P.S.- I really like what you added to the end of the last chapter! Now, go update like NOW!!!!!!
please :D
Author's Response: *blushes*
Thank you for your generous compliments. I'll update as soon as I'm able, but there's still more work to be done! :)
Reviewer: Littlelady1607 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Choking
wow more please!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Choking
Yep FINALLY! I'm gettin' a little anxious to find out just how freaky she is. Hehe. I'm really enjoying the relationship with Bella and Jacob though. They really are too cute together, and he's so damn sweet, and I agree that I don't want him hurt either. Boy's got a heart of gold, and that would just make me cry. But I also realize that Bella's taking a chance on him too, even if she doesn't know it( the whole imprinting thing) And that poor girl would just be devasted if she lost him too. Can't wait to find out what is up with that dream!
Author's Response: Jake's just an all around good guy isn't he? Love him to pieces.
And oh, it gets freaky...but not for a little while longer. Thanks for the lovely review!
Reviewer: charmed05 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Choking
Wonderful story, I joined today so I can get emails about when you update! I also love the detail you put into Bella's dreams, so vivid. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you joined; this is such a great site to be a part of. I'll do my best to update in a timely manner, I promise!
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Choking
oohhh i m dying to find out what happens ! write more!! xD. awesum so far!!
Author's Response: I'm dying to find out too!!!
Ooh...I should probably get on that. *minimizes page and pulls up Word*
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Choking
Hm. Its a very well writtin piece. I am enjoying it so far, but a little confused on where it is all going. Im sure the last dream is telling something, but I dont quite see it yet. Update soon!
Author's Response: Hehe...you're not the only one who's confused. That's my problem with reading an incomplete work: you don't get the resolution you're looking for right away. Instead you have to wait for the slow, inconsistant writer (me) to update, and it takes forever. ;)
Yes, the dream is key! And it will make sense...eventually...in the future...several chapters from now...ugh. Unfortunately this isn't one of Bella's dream that we can all read about and say, "Duh, Jacob's a werewolf!" For once, we're as ignorant as Bella. Ha, no wonder she gets moody.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Choking
I am loving this story! cannot wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Choking
Thanks for the update! I want more explanation on this last dream sequence so hurry up with the next chapter :P
Author's Response: Keep reading for awhile, and it will make sense eventually (though not as quickly as you might like)!
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Choking
I love this! No one gets Jacob/Bella like you do... great lines here... "I hope you choke" and the fish tank... Im pro-switzerland so its nice to finally have a E/B/J fic that doesnt undercut the J/B chemistry. Honestly, it sounds like SM wrote it herself.
Im a little nervous about this last dream and the cold skin plot line though... try not to stray too far from the Twi-universe and get too fantasy focused with new mythical creatures, your strength is in exploring the new relationship dynamics of the "if alice had only called" AU. Ive read a lot of bad "What if Bella had her own powers?" fics, but then again Im so impressed by your writing that I think you might be the one person who can pull it off.
This is going on my favorites list. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Well, I certainly hope I don't disappoint you. There will by a new fantasy thread pulled into the story--I was just so intrigued by some of the possibilities opened up in BD and stuff from SM's site--but I hope to pull it off in Twilight fashion. And I have to admit that relationships are my favorite dynamic of a story to write about, so I'm glad you enjoy it. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: asimpledesign (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Choking
Its good soo far update soon tho cause u sorta 4get the whole storyline after a while!:)
Author's Response: I'll do my best! Sorry for any confusion. :)
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Choking
I think you are driving me nuts!!
I can't tell what is going on yet, and I hate that!UGH!! Normally I am so good at predicting things!!!
I love the story so far. Now get Jacob away from Bella, I getting sick to my stomach. LOL
Author's Response: Uh oh! You may not want to read the next several chapters, or you may just hurl...lol! I'm afraid Jake's not going anywhere anytime soon. Sorry!
Thanks for reading despite the fact my story makes you queasy. :)
Reviewer: ChulaB (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Choking
hmm its getting intresting....
Author's Response: Finally, right? ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Choking
Wow. Things are intensifying.... I can't wait to read more. This is great! I am loving it.
Author's Response: And the plot thickens...DUN! DUN! DUN! Ha! Glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: nomdeplume (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Close Call
just read all four chapters... i'm really enjoying this story so far. you write very similarly to ms. meyer, even a little more succinctly, which i appreciate.
what i really like, what kept me reading your story and makes me anxious for the next chapters is your jacob. a short background: i just finished twilight and new moon and i thought i would loathe new moon, because after twilight, i was all about edward (who wasn't, really?). but i really like new moon, and i think it was all because of jake. i'm still team edward but i'm definitely straddling the border-- i love jacob black and his devotion to bella.
your jacob is spot on (as is your bella, for that matter). had that one moment veered away from alice and toward jacob, this is exactly how i think it would read. edward is dreamy and perfect, hence everyone's infatuation with him. but jacob is real and flesh and you write him brilliantly-- playful, caring with burgeoning sex appeal that bella is just noticing that all of us saw underneath the hints in new moon.
also that first kiss-- phwoar. (that's a good noise). thanks for giving a great jake-centric alternative to the end of new moon. keep up the great work... update as soon as possible, i WILL be waiting.
Author's Response: *adding 'phwaor' to my list of approving noises*
You're alot like me in the Jacob or Edward debate. I could go for either and I love them both for different reasons. I'm just giving Jacob his time to shine (because SM takes good care of Edward)!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: luckii00 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Crutch
I am absolutely not Team Jacob, but I'm enjoying the build up of their relationship. Well written and I can't wait for the rest of the story!
Reviewer: barefootduchess (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Close Call
Ohhh this is good! Please continue!
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