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Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Fever

I am completely enthralled by your story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter (and more Jacob love)! ::sighing impatiently:: :-)

Author's Response:

*beams happily*

Aw, shucks....

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Job Hazard

Nope. Edward can take a 75-year vacation...Tee, hee!

Reviewer: cavilah (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 09:32 PM · On: 12 Step Program

Please, don't stop! Believe me, there are a lot of us out there desperately searching for some Jacob love, which he's not given much of... :-( Your story is so sweet and endearing and so right on to what I was imagining would happen in the original story...I feel for Edward, but Jacob seems the more deserving of Bella's love for his great love, loyalty, patience, consistency, and for unselfishly giving Bella what she wants, not what he thinks is better for her, as Edward seems to do. All of this while putting himself out there for continued rejection...

Anyway, I hope you don't abandon your Jacob/Bella muse...She has lots of love from many of us.. ;-)

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Job Hazard

Ahhh it's so hard... I love Bella being happy, (or at least as happy as she can be without Edward,) and you do make Jacob seem like a loving, devoted - and somehow sexy - boyfriend, but it's sooo hard trying to put them together in my mind this way. Bella will always belong to Edward to me, and as much as I love this story and your writing, I am having the hardest time wrapping my brain around her being with Jacob. I just can't wait to see what happens once Edward comes back... the longer he takes, the more difficult Bella's decision will become. *sigh*... guess I'll just have to wait and see!! ;o)

Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Crutch

I am also waiting for shit to hit the fan. What will Bella become?? I can't wait to find out.

Please update soon! I'm really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

I'd tell you, but then I'd have to hunt you down, duck tape you to death, and then stick your body in a linen closet.  And death by duck tape is not a pleasant way to go. LOL!

You'll just have to STICK around and find out. (Man, I'm on a roll.)

roll (ha!)...I didn't even do that one on purpose.

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Fever

this seems a little too good to be true...i can tell shit is gonna hit the fan for sure!



Author's Response:

Shit, blood, and fur.  Should be messy.

Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Fever

Thank goodness for updates!  It has been a very dragging day at work, and I figured I would come over to the site to read, and voila! Update!

Great job again, I love the story, and the blossoming relationship between them.  I really enjoyed Jacob's interaction with Mike (it seemed very plausible).

Looking forward to the next installment!



Author's Response:

Well, wait no longer! I just submitted the next chapter, so it should be up in the near future.

Imagine if I got Jacob, Mike, AND Edward all in a room together...hmm, I might have to try that.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Fever

Wow.  So intense.  I feel on edge, waiting for the something big that is just around the corner....  great update!



Author's Response:

Yes, well chapters nine and ten both offer quite a bit in terms of relationship development and plot, so the wait shouldn't be that much longer.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.  It means the world!

Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Crutch

De nada! No se porque, pero me gusta la idea de Embry/Bella... O_o. Haha!

Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Job Hazard

I really love the Bella/Jacob pairing!  The story is really well written, and I can't wait for the next part!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  You made me smile. :)

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Job Hazard

I'm not a huge Bella/Jacob fan, but I thought I'd give this a shot & I'm really glad I did. :)

This is a slightly different twist on the whole Edward didn't come back that I haven't read before and I like it.  I can understand Sam's concern about the whole J/B situation because of the possible imprinting that he may have happen.  Since he's already hurt Leah that way.

Please keep up the wonderful work.



Author's Response:

One of the things I wish SM would have done in the series was expand just a smidge more on Bella's relationships with other characters aside from Edward.  I love Bella/minor or secondary character action!  And Sam and Leah both have great perspectives to offer.

Thank you.

Reviewer: abs (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Crutch

nicely written, sweet and flowing. Can;t wit to contine reading!

Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Job Hazard

aaaaawww i do like this, but still like edwards and bella before people throw things at mE!! but always wondered wot would've happened if Bella had taken jake up on his offer! lol :P



Author's Response:

LOL!  If people start throwing things, you just let me know, and I'll have a word with 'em.  I can be dpretty angerous with the written word! (Gah, I'm such a nerd.)

Reviewer: wren (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Crutch

I am for sure a Team Edward kind of person but I love this story! That's how good you've made this! :)

Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Job Hazard

ooh plz write more its great so far! i am team switzerland so i dont mind bella and jacob together! i cant wait till edward comes back though? and is bella going to transform into anything superntural? i cant wait!



Author's Response:

Yes, both Edward and the transformation are coming.  Sigh...I just don't know in what order yet (I keep changing my mind and rewriting).  Well, stick around, and we'll find out together.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Sincrona (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Job Hazard

More please...I love this story!  I am a switch hitter when it comes to Team Edward and Team Jacob, and it is hard to find stories that write Jacob in three dimensions and give creedence to Bella's feelings for him. I love how you write Jacob and Bella's relationship- the part about "I hope you choke" had me grinning like an idiot! I'm curious to see how Edward fits into this.... 



Author's Response:

I'm that way too.  Sure I tend to lean one way over the other, but I'll read B/E or B/J as long as it's written well and holds my interest.  And Eddie?  He's being his adorable masochistic self down in South America.  ;)

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Job Hazard

Why is Jacob avoiding the imprint question? That's not very nice of him, he should atleast attempt to prepare her. He's gonna break her heart isn't he? Not cool. K, so I'm getting really anxious to see what happens to Bella. Whatever she becomes, I hope that she's kickass powerful, cause that would just ROCK! SO EXCITED!



Author's Response:

Okay, my theory is that Jake's not telling Bella about the imprinting because he has a lot more to lose at this point than he did in Eclipse if she reacts badly.  But really, you'd have to ask him...or stick around until you find out! ;)

Yeah, Bella definately needs a little kickass in her, doesn't she?  LOL!

Reviewer: genie (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Job Hazard

I want Edward to show up already! You're making me anxious. lol!



Author's Response:

Well, fly down to South America and tell him to freakin' wake up and smell the roses already!  He better hurry up or he's gonna miss all the action.  :P

LOL!  I'm sure he'll get his act together soon.

Reviewer: water_girl87 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Job Hazard

I really like this chapter, and I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Well, I'm can't wait for you to read more either.  That's why I just submitted chapter eight. ;)

Thank you bunches.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Job Hazard

Ok I can hold off on Edward if you promise to update more frequently!  LOL  I liked the chapter but it lefty us all a little empty she didn't get any questions answered all we discoverewd is her feelings for Jacob are maturing...

Look forward to see where this goes post again soon!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry it didn't do much for you.  :(

I feel like I'm gonna have to give Edward quite the entrance because everyone's so anxious to see him.  Do I have volunteers to make "Welcome Back, Edward" signs?  Ya can't go wrong with sharpies and glitter.  LOL!

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Job Hazard

Great update. Its been a while.. I am glad you didn't abandon the story.  I am eager for more, as always!



Author's Response:

I don't think my conscience would let me give up on this story.  There's too many people out there like yourself encouraging me, and I couldn't let you guys down.

Thank YOU for sticking with it.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Job Hazard

More!!!!



Author's Response:

You want MORE???  Well you CAN'T HANDLE more!!!

Or if you can, you can read chapter eight once it's been checked and posted.  :)

Love ya.

Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Job Hazard

Aw, man. I love Embry.



Author's Response:

Yo tambien.

Embry es mi perro favorito.  (Lo siento, Jake.)

Gracias.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Choking

huh??



Author's Response:

wha??

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Job Hazard

I didn't want Bella to be with jacob.  Not because I have anything against him, I actually love his character.  I just wish that Bella did not need a boyfriend in her life and could stand on her own and just have Jacob as a good friend.  I am curious as to where this is going.  I am enjoying your writing style. 



Author's Response:

Gah!  I wish I could have a secret conversation with you.  Instead I'll just send you the ending of my story via telepathy.  *concentrating very hard*  Did it work?

No?  Well, I'll work on that.

Thank you for reviewing!

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