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Reviewer: JaneJoke (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 08:16 PM · On: What if?
I love this story, and frankly, I haven't noticed Edward's absence with all the lovely Jacob-ness, but I don't mind if Edward returns.
:)
I'm really eager for the "SUPERNATURAL" that's coming next chapter, so, bring on the confusion! Great story! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: The "supernatura"l starts to poke its head in a bit more in the next chapter. I have a feeling that most people will figure it out pretty quickly by the end of chapter ten. Maybe not...
Thank you so much for commenting!
Reviewer: JaneJoke (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 10:27 AM · On: 12 Step Program
“Four walls of scum-covered glass" LOL! Awesome analogy! Sooo Jacob!
:)
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:01 AM · On: What if?
i can't wait for the rest of this, and can't wait to see what she turns into. go SUPERNATURAL.
Author's Response: You'll probably have a pretty good inkling by the end of the next chapter, no worries!
Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:41 PM · On: What if?
Again, another great chapter! My heart fell for Bella when she got the story behind the imprinting.
Keep it up, and I will be reading :)
Author's Response: It was so hard to write that because I hated having Bella come so close to breaking AGAIN.
Reviewer: palsyjohn (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:01 PM · On: What if?
Ok, where's Eddie? Also, is Bella metamorphizing into a werewolf? 'Coz that's really mean if she is. Keep writing, curious where you're taking us.
Author's Response: LOL! No, Bella won't be going werewolf. And I think Eddie's in an attic somewhere, slowly losing the will to stay away from Bella.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:24 AM · On: What if?
Bella just keeps hiding from everything and Jake loves Bella so much he can't imagine being with anyone else. I have a feeling they are going to get a wake up call soon - I hope.
Author's Response: Yes, and the wake up call will likely come in the form of bronze hair and golden eyes...
Reviewer: chellik (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 05:17 PM · On: What if?
What's going to happen when Edward turns up??!!
Author's Response: Silly, I can't tell you that...well okay, but only in my secret code:
Aslkjgo slkuluen slu. Alwu, Bella. Siwone. Supooeou pounwlmew geart bo Edward veyei be cxs safouew. BOOM! Hoye nbvey opuhlmn werx. Ek Jacob.
Now you know! :)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:46 PM · On: What if?
I'm glad they had their little chat and their little spat that was more funny than anything.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this though... the description is what pulled me in and I'm wondering what is going to happen.
Author's Response: Yes, the transformation is comming around the mountain...and so is Edward.
Thanks for sticking with it!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:21 PM · On: What if?
OMG Come on this longer seperation has me all types of freaked out!
SHES! NOT! SUPPOSE! TO! END! UP! WITH! JACOB! BLACK!
Squeal in utter madness! I can't belive how comfy cozy shes getting with him.
Post again soon I could use some supernatural and I hope it has venom!
Author's Response: Well, there IS venom in the next chapter (but most of that's coming from Leah lol).
You're not going to be very thrilled with this chapter I just submitted either, I'm afraid. But as far as who she ends up with...well...
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 11:47 AM · On: What if?
awwww sweet fluffiness at the end there - i like this :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Fluff makes good dessert. ;)
Reviewer: whyzul (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:47 AM · On: What if?
Love the development of Bella and Jacob's relationship. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks!
Just submitted the next chapter, so it shouldn't be much longer (not that it hasn't been rediculously long since I posted chapter nine).
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:32 AM · On: What if?
hmm I've just read through from the start and it's an interesting story thus far. I find I'm rather annoyed with Alice's phonecall all those chapters ago because really, who does that? Who calls you up after worrying over you doing something and then simply hangs up after they hear your voice confirming you're "still alive"?
Oh wait... one of my ex's did that... bad example :S
Anyways - I'm actually looking forward to how Bella goes forwards with Jake now, especially with how she's likely to rationalise/deal with the possibility of an Imprint in his future.
Bella & Jacob being misfits seems to fit them so well :)
Author's Response: LOL!
Just figured it was more reasonable than appearing in the flesh...er...stone to see if she's alive.
Oh, the irony...
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:07 AM · On: What if?
omg omg omg! the suspense is killing me! When is she going to under go her "transformation"? i cant wait for her next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay for excitement! You'll probably have a good guess about her transformation by the end of the next chapter.
Reviewer: Braydie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:37 PM · On: What if?
Wow. I cannot tell you how much I love the idea of 'exotic cullinary torture devices'... Lol. :) I also enjoy this storey immensely. I've been keeping up with it for the past few months, but didn't become a member until recently, otherwise I would have reviewed a good bit sooner.
Generally, I prefer Bella with Edward (as long as he can pull his head out of his bum long enough to understand that relationships require equal amounts of trust and respect from all persons involved). But I have a great fondness for Jacob's character in New Moon, and I am intrigued to read whichever direction you choose to go with this storey.*
Author's Response: I love Edward too, and while I'm excited about the splash that his return will cause, I'm also nervous about writing his character (he's so freakin' complex!), so my fingers are crossed that I'll do him justice.
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:33 PM · On: What if?
I am bemoaning Edward's absence! Great update!
Author's Response: LOL! I think there's enough people doing that that we could get a choir started. ;)
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:32 PM · On: What if?
Lol....while I do miss Eddie, I love the chemistry between Bella and Jake...but watch, he'll walk out side the next day and BAM! there's his imprint....hahaha would be funny if it could be Lauren....mmm scratch that...don't want her to be part of the show....
B. Quinn
Author's Response: OMG!
Jacob + Lauren = eww!
It would be funny though for a crack fic...
Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:48 PM · On: What if?
I too am bemoaning Edward's absence.
But the whole last part of the chapter between Jake and Bella was SO sweet. I really like the way you write Jacob.
Author's Response: *blushes*
Thank you.
And there's a good chance you and a couple other reviewers could get a choir/band going. I'm thinking "Woe is Edward" for the name but maybe you're more creative. Lol! The bemoaning will end eventually.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:24 PM · On: What if?
Wow, she took it better than I thought. I was thinking that the imprinting thing would be the straw that broke the camels back in her sanity or would be what brought forth her supernatural mojo. Cause let's face it, that is heartbreaking and devastating to find out about your "sun" especially after what she's already been through. Poor Bella! Anxious to find out what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think she's starting to toughen up a bit. And while the supernatural mojo is slowly starting to come through, there will definately be an event that gets things really underway.
Thank you so much for letting me know what you think!
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:14 PM · On: What if?
when is he coming! (haha coming) I need edward no more of this jacob bella bullshit!
Author's Response: He he.
You're not gonna be too please with the next chapter (just a warning). And all I can say is that Edward is coming (snort) but not yet.
Thanks for reading through all the stuff you don't like. :)
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Crutch
sorry that sounded so rude! i didn;t mean it that way lo, i was trying to make a joke but it was a bad one
Author's Response: Oh, I didn't find it rude at all. It DOES take me an obscenely long time to update. But I just submitted the next chapter so...the apocylapse is near!
Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Choking
Wow, what a messed up dream..
Author's Response: I know. Poor Bella. :(
Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Crutch
Wow, what the hecks going on with Leah??
Author's Response: I think that her boyfriend left her for her best friend, her dad died, and she's going to eventually turn into a werewolf. lol! Just a guess. ;)
Reviewer: Liz-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Fever
I only came across this the other day and I'm extremely curious due to your summary about 'Bella's own supernatural transformation'.
I find you story really intriguing and i cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I love that SM left room in her universe for other supernatural creatures, so I'm totally going to take advantage and explore that possibility.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Fever
WOW! why do u have to take ages to update!! lol can't wait fro more, this is wonderful!
Author's Response: YOU'RE wonderful!
Why does day have to turn into night? Because God said so! lol.
Thanks for the love!
Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Fever
How intriguing... im sure ill be back : >
Author's Response: Please do.
Thanks for commenting.
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