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Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Into the Woods
whoo hoo awesome story
Author's Response: Thank you much for reading!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Forgiveness
hey its been afew weeks and I've been hanging on this cliff you left me on please get on with th story it was going good now it's stalled write i check ever so often to see if its been continued please give us a hand we're hanging here.
Author's Response: Okay, um, I submitted the next chapter about a week and a half ago, but I sorta didn't put my validator's name in the chapter title (yikes! Because I just found out this is a pretty big no no). I just fixed that, so hopefully It has a better chance of getting validated now.
Please don't slip and plummet to your death! I need all of my readers I can get alive. ;)
Reviewer: Miaka1977j (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Forgiveness
Well, I must say this is a very interesting take. You're right, most of the stories are Jake attacking, and like you, I cannot picture it happening.
Good twist, and I look forward to how this plays out.
Reviewer: IndieTokhie (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Forgiveness
This is great! can't wait for more.
Author's Response: So glad that you're enjoying this! I submitted the chapter a few days ago, so it shouldn't be too long before it's posted.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Forgiveness
It's a different twist. I don't think I've read a story where Leah ever attacks Bella. i like it. I just hope the damage isn't too severe; then the story becomes Bella recovering. Anyway...glad to see you posting again.
Author's Response: No worries, I would never let something like that consume the storyline.
Thankyousomuch for taking the time to let me know you're reading!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Forgiveness
I'd decided to give this story another chance when I saw that it had been update and I am now effectively intrigued with its unique story line. Please update soon; I'm definitely hooked.
Author's Response: Yay for second chances!
I've already submitted the next chapter.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Forgiveness
I can't believe you feel compelled to defend your plot - it fits perfectly and has been built up to be possible. It felt absolutely natural and I loved it.
Author's Response: I love my readers, and I just like to make sure we're all on the same page (aside from the obvious fact that I already KNOW what's going to happen). It makes my heart soar to hear that you think the plot is believable!
Thank you.
Reviewer: JasperBella0015 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Forgiveness
OH MY GOD, THIS STORY IS SO GOOD. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE SOME MORE. I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!
IF THE RATING WAS HIGHER THEN 10 THEN I WOULD GIVE YOU LIKE A 50; IT WAS THAT GREAT!!!!!!!
Author's Response: *staggers back under the weight of such a magnificent complement*
Wow. I...gee...wow. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Look at you making me feel all good about myself. :)
As far as more stories...there is multi-chaptered one in the works for when I finish Zenith. Also, you can check me out on LJ, the username is: majestamoniet. There are a couple of my Twilight one-shots there.
Thanks!
Reviewer: NicNic (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Forgiveness
*gasp*
A new chapter?! No way!
Yayyy!
Poor Leah :(
Ohhh what's gonna happen with Bella??? Post again soon!
Author's Response: Just submited the next chappie, so you'll find out (hopefully) soon! And I agree: Poor Leah :(
Reviewer: Leslie Mc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Forgiveness
LOVED IT! ! !
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for letting me know! It keeps me going.
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Forgiveness
This is a great story that I am absolutely loving. The humor is refreshing, because it matches perfectly to the humor between Bella and Jacob in the actual books.
Great job on the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You think I'm funny??? That's fantastic! I try so hard...and sometimes I fail splendiferously.
Reviewer: beatingheartbaby (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Forgiveness
Love it! Love Leah! Awesome update. Can't wiat for more!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Leah's kinda wormed her way into my heart through this story. :)
Reviewer: MidnightMoon92 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Forgiveness
That was totally unexpected! Bella being attacked by one of the wolves was something I definitely didn't expect to happen.
Author's Response: Oh, yay!, then I'm keeping you on your toes! What will I pull out of my bag of tricks next? Hmmm...
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Forgiveness
So not rolling my eyes. I think you are making a very cool parallel that I have not seen as of yet. I like it. Update very soon. (Good story!)
Author's Response: No eye rolling. That's a good thing. ;)
The parallel becomes really obvious in a couple of chapters from now (chapter 13). So when that eventually gets posted, let me know how I did.
Reviewer: brit77 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Forgiveness
I like that it went down this way. Pretty cool chapter I just hope it is not so long before the next one!!!
Author's Response: Just submitted chapter 12!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Forgiveness
awesome awesome story...please continue....am anxiously waiting for edward to make his appearance and see what happens with jake, bella and edward. good job
Author's Response: Have no fear! I will finish this story even if it means typing with bloody nubs for fingers! (Eww...let's hope it doesn't get to that.)
Edward = Chapter 14
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Forgiveness
Wow.....That's all I can say....Wow....should Jake and the Boys hear Leah?? Since she is now a wolf???
Poor Bella....
Heather
Author's Response: Yeah, the boys must have been busy someplace else...*cough*Seth*cough*
We'll see how it all goes down in the next chapter.
Thanks!
Reviewer: IndieTokhie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Choking
Haha, I loved that "I hope you choke" part. Hilarious! You're a great writer.
Reviewer: Iamnotobssessed (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Forgiveness
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Cliff hanger
Author's Response: *evil cackle*
Yes, because I haven't done a proper one all story long! Oh, and the next chapter will be out quicker than unsual because I don't want to leave ya hangin' too long. (You might fall and not come back)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Forgiveness
I was thrilled, THRILLED to find an update!!!! And a great one at that. I have missed this story. I don't mind Leah freaking out and attacking Bella. SHe always was a little, well, off. I can't wait to read more! And you mentioned Edward??? That's a good sign!!!
Author's Response: Aww, well the story has missed YOU. It blames me for your seperation. (rightfully so)
Yes, I believe I saw Edward's tragic good looks somewhere in Chapter 14...
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Forgiveness
ook... so is Bella being "gone" actually meaning she is GONE? Her own supernatural gift has kicked in?
I'm more or less ok with the outofcontrol wolf thing, although I believe both Jacob and Edward are capable of harming Bella - Edward's already proven it in his actions that lead to his departure: throwing her into a shelf, anyone?
Jacob's only real mistakes up to this point are on the same par with Mike Newton - in not figuring out that Bella's just not that "in" to them :S
But anyways, that's all moot since we're looking at a variation here where Bella's got her own gifts hopefully manifesting about now to give her something other than worrying over Edward's running away.
Author's Response: Without giving to much away, I'll say that what happened at the end of the chapter definately wasn't NATURAL. You get my drift?
Something's definately starting to kick! ;)
Reviewer: JaneJoke (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Forgiveness
*doesn't roll eyes*
Leah's never been fond of Bella. Plus, she just phased for the first time and so she hasn't had time to learn to control her anger...so I think the attack is understandable.
But, holy crap! It felt as if someone had stuck me with a hot iron and was scrambling around my insides. Ouch!! Well, at least Leah didn't maim her face! Sheesh! And...
And then I was gone.
Huh? Gone WHERE, HOW? Grrr...Cliffhangers are my kryptonite! But, this is awesome! Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured if Sam could do it to Emily, Leah could do it to Bella.
*sings: Dead and gone, dead and gone...*
JK! LOL! She's not dead! I promise. (or this would be a pretty crappy story. Well, at least it'd be surprising!)
Find out next chappie! (Just submitted it)
Reviewer: r2d2grrl (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Forgiveness
Woah! Talk about a cliffhanger... Excellent chapter as usual, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: *does a song and dance*
Thank you! I adore you!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Crutch
[from a responde earlier] yeah kina thought that might be linked but wondered how the dream is a transformation - I think i can guess what she's gonna change into though =]
Author's Response: The dream isn't the transformation, it's a part of it. (It'll make sense eventually, promise!)
: )
Reviewer: WeaksE (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Nightmares
This is a really good story. I was never much of a J/B fan, but you make it work. You make me want to read more to see how everything is gonna turn out. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you took the chance on it even if you aren't big on the dominant pairing. Things will certainly keep turning, so stay tuned...
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