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Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Human
I really love your story! :)
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much! :D
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Act II
I would love to see Edward so some groveling. I would also like to see Bella and Jacob grow closer. It sure sounded like Jacob was describing his feelings for Bella like an imprinting. I just love the Embry that you have written. Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Act II
Jacob is nice and all but I hope this plays out with Edward being the winner.....Majesta Moniet writes a great story
Author's Response: Edward is a very determined young man who loves Bella very much, so I can assure you he isn't going to step aside quietly.
Thank you for the lovely compliment!
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Act II
I love a super-powered Bella and can't wait to hear more about felicity.
as for the relationship...will it pan out??
Author's Response: That is the question everyone keeps asking me. I'll say what I've been saying since the start: stick around to find out!
:)
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Nightmares
Loved it! Will she become a witch or something!? lol ;) Just hope it will stay a Bella/Jacob story! Great job!!
Author's Response: Well, it's not really a secret anymore so...yeah, she'll be a witch. It's been a fun mythological creature to reconstruct in the SM verse.
Thank you for taking the time to review! :)
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Act II
Can't wait to see what she's gonna be able to do. Should be interesting.
Author's Response: I certainly hope so! Next chapter is being a blast to write.
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Act II
Great update. I wish Bella would accept that Edward truly does love her. Why doesn't he try to really talk to her? I mean, I know he wants her to be happy and maybe he thinks that she is, but, he has to have some idea that she loves him still. Argh... More, please. I love it.
Author's Response: So, Edward's been back in town for less than 24 hours at this point. And since then he's found out that Victoria is there and still very much on the hunt. Right now, I think his primary concern is Bella's safety and what better way to insure that than to get his super vampire family back to Forks to help her? *wink wink*
Edward's being a busy boy, and don't worry, he's not gonna give her up without a fight. :)
Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Act II
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Muchas gracias!
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Human
I think it's just a tad hypocritical fro Emily to Bella saying she's not Jacob's imprint by saying Jacob loves her when she knows that it doesn't matter if Jake imprints. Sam loved Leah but that didn't stop him from dumping her when he met Emily. Emily usually gets the really nice treatment from everyone but the fact is imprint or no imprint she screwed her cousin over. She doesn't get a pass from me. Unlike Sam she had a choice.
Author's Response: In this case, I don't think Emily is saying that Jacob loves her so he won't imprint, I think she's saying Jacob loves her and that's enough for him. Which in Jacob's case it is.
Emily, maybe more than anybody, understands the importance of a chosen love. When Sam imprinted on her, it didn't erase his feelings for Leah. There are hints throughout the books that Sam still loves Leah a great deal, and Emily has to live knowing that if he had been able to choose, the man she loves would've been with someone else. So I think she's very conscious of Jacob's 'natural' feelings, and maybe even a little bit envious of Bella for being on the receiving end of such strong emotions (that aren't a supernatural side effect).
But yeah, it was her choice to be with Sam. And I guess that just makes her human for wanting to be with someone who loves her so completely. I can't bring myself to hold it against her. But I'm not Leah, and SHE certainly does have a reason to hate her.
Just a thought. :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Act II
I just thought of something. Can you do an outtake of Jake and Edwards conversation?
Author's Response: Actually, I've considered this. And MAYBE once I've finished writing Zenith, I'll consider doing a few outtakes. We'll see.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Act II
This was a great chapter, answered a few questions, created a ton of other questions...like....
Is Bella going to break Jacobs heart, again, before she realizes he is the one for her?
WHAT THE HELL EDWARD? Who are you to get mad at Jacob for taking Bella to his house and not back to her house? To the point of going ballistic? So Edward:(
WAY TO GO JAKE for keeping his cool when he spoke with Edward, looking out for what was best for his friends and much to his own pain, explaining to Bella that Edward still loves her and if he has to, he will give up his own happiness, if Bella chooses Edward. God I love Jake in this story.
Please up-date soon!!!!!
Author's Response: *cheers* That means I've kept Edward in character!
I wish I could answer your first question...but then I'd ruin the excitement and suspense. ;)
Yes, mad props to Jake for being a good guy. He was very full of win this chapter.
Thank you!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Act II
hmm it was an interesting chapter to see after the long break...
I'm curious to see how the hospital trip goes... and more meetings with other members of the Cullens perhaps too? :)
Author's Response: Hostpital Trip = Dirty Dr. Cullen.
Yes, more Cullens to come next chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Act II
If is a Bella and Jake story, then I don't think I'm interested. I thought we'd get Edward back and Bella would come to her senses. Sorry.
Author's Response: It's cool. I understand not wanting to read about a pairing that you don't like seeing together, and there is A LOT of J/B going on. Thanks for reading as long as you did!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Act II
love it.
Author's Response: love you.
:)
Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Act II
love it...fabulous...update soon!!! i don't want to go into withdrawl again!!
Author's Response: No worries, the next update will be much sooner because I'm on winter break and have plenty of down time. I've started plugging away at it already.
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: sugarmuffins69 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Act II
Awesome writing skills I am hanging to read what happens next! Very impressive with the chemistry between J & B. I also love the way you have portrayed Emily she seems like the wolfs version of Esme.
Author's Response: That's always how I imagined Emily to be. In fact, I REALLY didn't like the way she was portrayed in the movie for the few moments she was on screen. She had too much attitude when she was all, "So you're the vampire girl." Emily would have more tact than that.
More chemistry to come!
Thank you. :D
Reviewer: klarsen117 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Act II
that whole scene with charlie and then embry and the trees was hilarious! glad she didn't automatically run to edward when jake told her he still loved her. i hope it stays that way too!
Author's Response: Oh, the things that come out of Embry Call's mouth. He's a blast to write.
Your hope is shared by lots of people. :)
Thank you for leaving me some kind words!
Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Act II
I am so proud of Jacob for being honest with Bella. He could have easily lied to her but he didn't.
My biggest fear is Bella running back to Edward. I really hope she doesn't.
I wonder what Edward's reaction is going to be when he finds out what Leah did to her. He always over reacts.
I am glad that you are back, love the new banner :)
Looking forward to the next update.
Happy Holidays!
Author's Response: Oh, the rage! Edward will certainly not be a happy camper when he finds out the specifics behind Bella's injury.
Your fear seems to be shared by a majority of my readers. All I can do is...*smiles diabolically*
Yeah, the new banner is great. placeofthunder did a kick-ass job!
Thanks for the well wishes!
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Act II
WOW! A freaking update! Are you kidding me? I LOVED it!!! Thanks so much, MM. And it was such a good chapter, too. Charlie was hysterical. Still don't quite get all the Jacob going to bat for Edward stuff. I sure hope you're not doing that to clear the way for Edward and destroy our poor little Jacob's heart, ARE YOU??? Team Jake members with sharpened pitchforks and torches will be coming to get you if that is the case. I'm not kidding here.
Thanks so much for the plug! I really appreciate it. I adore your sense of humor and always try not to drink a beverage that may shoot from my nostrils when I get to certain sections of your story. Not always successful at that. Love you!
Author's Response: Hey, bb!
Man, Team Jacob members are frightening! Almost as frightening as Team Edward fans. (Sorry, but they DO have numbers.) ;)
Before you skewer me with sharpened pitch-forks, let me share my thoughts on the issue at hand:
I'd like to think of it more as Jacob going to bat for Bella rather than for Edward. Jacob has been dead-set since the beginning to get Bella healed up. And for him to see how much Edward still hurts her...well, this is where character development comes in. In Eclipse we saw Jacob trying to free Bella by lashing out Edward, by trying to bring him down. Jacob was desperate and had nothing to lose by pushing. But in Zenith, Jacob has the advantage of Bella choosing and being with him, which has lead to some growth on both their parts. Something I've noticed about people, is when you've got the thin--or person--that you want, you're much more likely to take the moral high-ground (something Edward did constantly in Eclipse and BD). You feel like you can be more generous.
So I guess what I'm trying to say is that while Jacob isn't planning on giving up Bella without a fight, he's not desperate enough at this point to stoop to the levels he did in Eclipse. He WANTS Bella to choose him, and so far she has. Now he just wants her happiness, and he's willing to risk alot to achieve it.
Anyway, that's my take on it, but everyone looks at things differently, so I'd love to hear your thoughts, like always.
Thanks for the feedback! Now get crackin' on the next chapter of HTSW. :)
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Act II
I was so excited when I logged on and this story was updated!
Everything about Jacob was truly heart-felt, and how much he loves Bella and everything he's willing to do for her really shines in this chaoter. :)
I've read a lot of Jacob/Bella fics, but this story has its own sort of chemistry between them. The chemistry in this story is definitely one of my absolute favorites!
Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: If you enjoy chemistry just you wait for a few chapters down the road, when things get...heated. ;)
I'm glad that you're liking Jacob's character development. This is how I imagined him growing if he hadn't been so negatively effected by Bella leaving him. Hopefully it's realistic.
Thank you!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Crutch
New banner!!! Looks awesome!
Author's Response: IKR! All mad props need to go to placeofthunder. She's the banner guru.
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 04:30 PM · On: The Morning After
LOVE the new banner, bb!
Author's Response: Isn't it snazzy?! Placeofthunder kicks butt at banner making.
Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 02:50 PM · On: The Morning After
please come back!!! i miss this story so much, and i'm sure so do the other 300 people reviewing this story do to!!
Author's Response: I PROMISE THAT I NEVER LEFT! RL has just been full of holiday 'cheer' and college finals.
Next chapter has been submitted for validation. Thanks for the support!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Scab
So - Bella finally starts to get out of her own way! Couldn't have a better helper, either... <><3
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Crutch
This has been on my 'must read' list forever! Glad I'm finally getting caught up - very intriguing beginning... <><3
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