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Reviewer: KristenM82 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
cute!
Reviewer: rosy1015 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
wow loved the story... i do have one question tho.... what death did Anthony refer to when he was in vegas with Bella??? i was thinking there were gonna be twins but when he mentioned that i was like.. uh oh he is cheating....did i miss something there?? but great plot!!!! i was so scared that edward/anthony was a cheating bastard!!!
Reviewer: twilight legacy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
I am glad that Edward/Anthony are not the jerks that I thought they were in most of the story. I was so angry at Edward/Anthony...I hate cheaters. I am glad it turned out the way it did. I wasn't expecting that. Thanks for sharing a great story! :)
Reviewer: twilight legacy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Scare
OMG! I can't believe he would suggest naming their daughter Isabella. What a jerk!!!! However I am intrigued by the story.
Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
CRAZY!, but I totally loved it
Reviewer: doggie (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
WOW, so may twists and turns, for a moment I had no idea where this story would end up. Usually some fics are predictable to me and I can see when the next "obstacle" will come up. But this... I never saw this one coming. Great fic girls!
Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Scare
Very realistic pregnancy details. So he couldn't be reached, hmmm. Will the real Edward Masen please stand up?
Isn't that like the seventh circle of hell-having Edward for a husband and having to avoid all stimulation! ;-)
Good job, I'm feeling for Angela
Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Birthday Girl
Holy cow-Angela gets laid! Bet SM never pictured this. I love that she's pregnant-I found pregnancy to be a real high in so many ways.
I'm just wondering why they are all called Edward-will there be three different story lines and will they ever merge?
I guess I'll just have to keep reading!
Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Stood Up
Tanya as a bitch-I haven't run across that often. Hot empty sex, oh well, a girls gotta get hy somehow!
Reviewer: duskwatcher (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Hallmark Holiday
I love the start of this story. Fav Line: Good hell, why didn’t you just drop to your knees and blow him right there on the dance floor?” (Here's where i timidly raise my hand and say I will! I will!)
Two gorgeous studs to be ravished-some girls have all the luck!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
I enjoyed this story. It had unexpected twists and the plot is amazing.
How come Angela gets Edward? and Bella gets Tony? hehe.. anyway, y'all did an amazing job.
Reviewer: crazyforedwardrn (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
OH MY GOD!!!!! IWANT TO SCREAM, I WAS ONLY ONE FREAKIN CHAPTER AWAY FROM THE END OF THIS AND I DIDN'T KNOW IT?????????? I WAS OFF THE FORUM FOR LIKE A WEEK AND A HALF AND HAVE BEEN CATCHING UP SLOWLY AND I COULDK KICK MYSELF!!
AUUGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IS IT REALLY OVER, IS THIS THE END?
Reviewer: pwtf (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
I'm laughing like Angela right now...and oh so excited to know we were right...they ARE twins!!!! All our hoping beyond hope that they WERE twins despite all the evidence otherwise...actually paid off! Oh my goodness....
Sorry for being so late to this update...epsecially knowing that this was the big reveal...it nearly killed me every day I found myself too busy to read.
Wow...I've definitely loved the ride. It's so crazy...knowing now...it's like a huge weight has been lifted off my mind. No more worrying about Secrets. Gosh, what'll I do with myself now?
I do have one question, but I'll head over to the forum to see if it's been asked yet, or else ask it there.
Just gotta say though, I've loved every minute of this story, even when you guys tortured us so!!!
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
great story. glad to know he had a twin lol so is the story done or you still writing more??
Author's Response: It's done!
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Hollie_x3 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
I'm speechless.
Ever since the start, I've been so sure that E/A/M were all one person, and I scoffed at everyone who suggested they were twins/triplets. Guess I was wrong. Huh.
I....don't know what to say. I'm in shock.
The ending was so sweet (is sweet the right word? i can't think of another, my brain isnt functioning right now).
I loved it ladies, thankyou for taking us on this journey :D
Reviewer: wwp (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
Wow, what a twister! I did wonder about Edward commenting on how Dante was taunting him & calling him Masen- it didn't make sense that if he truly was the same man that he'd even mention it for fear of getting caught. Although, I still thought he was a 3-timing bastard lol!! Great, great story & ending!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
I knew it! I knew they were twins. I'm glad there were two different people. It was easy to deal with the whole Masen/Tanya deal without dragging Angela into it. You ladies love us by not making our Edward too much of a bastard. I never would have dreamed the two of them would share girlfriends.
That was an awesome story. You ladies are such talented writers. Thanks so much for working together and making this story so good.
Reviewer: wwp (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 15- Out of the Haze
Wow, Edward falls on harsh times lol. Serves him right! I just have to mention, being a {former} NICU RN myself, you have either experienced it yourself- 1st hand- of are a NICU RN yourself, no? It's seldom that medical jargon & lingo are so spot-on accurate in these fics. Thanks for that!!
Reviewer: Twilightened (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
Great job ladies. It was a pleasure to read. I'll miss this story.
Reviewer: devadasi7 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
YES!!! i knew they were twins, i knew it!!!! ::jumps up and down:: i love the way you tied it all up......i'm just sad that it's over......
but at least now we all know the secret! : )
Reviewer: barbiedoll123 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Hallmark Holiday
i loved it ,im glad everyone had a hea , and they are going to be a family
Reviewer: xoxomistyxoxo (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
wheres alice, jasper , and rosalie ? r they not in the story?
Author's Response: Alice is Angela's friend and daughter of Dr. Brandon, Angela's OB.... Rosalie is Emmett's girlfirend. You met her on the plane when Bella and Anthony went to Vegas.
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
Wow. I cannot believe it is over! Twins! I know someone guessed this on the thread. I am so glad that Edward was innocent. I was seriously worried about Angela. In fact, I was having a very hard time reading your updates because I was so ticked off with Edward/Tony/Masen! haha! Anthony really screwed up in college. What he did was so crappy! I understand why they were estranged for so long. You all did a fabulous job with this story. Thanks for sharing with us!
xxoo
Annie
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
wow - that was a crazy ride :) enjoyed it!
thanks!!
Reviewer: dazzledinaz (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The End
LOVED it.
Such a perfect ending! This story was awesome from start to finish. I was convinced for a while that Edward had multiple personalities lol! And then I was just LIVID that he was such a POS scumbag asshole! I was reading other fan fic and was thinking about "cheating asshole idiot secrets Edward" and it was totally messing with my head lol.
Twins?! Awesome. What a perfect ending. I love that everyone got their "happily every after" .
Nicely done!
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