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Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 06:28 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
I'm loving your story so far, I really am and I've cried alot. But is this JasperXEdward too, because Jasper calls Edward "Baby" in this last scene here and Jasper kissed Edward's hair. Maybe it was supposed to be brotherly, but it didn't seem that way, LOL.
Can you please reply at my email address, Kouklaki312@aol.com
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 05:10 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
great work!
please update soon!
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 03:34 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
I had given up on you! So glad you're back! I want Bella better, too. :)
Reviewer: solecito (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 10:32 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
yes really good but..... to short. keep the updates.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:59 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
THey are all suffering so much!!!! I love this story. I am eager for more!
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:32 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
Aww, poor little Nessie, and poor Bella as well. Loved the Carlisle POV>
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:02 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
y havent u updated in awhile
Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 05:53 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
I was hoping that CPOV's would provide a little more insight as to how he felt about it all. It seemed like he was, for the most part, recounting his visit and going home. I would've liked to have known his reasons for giving Edward the "hard look." We know generally why, but more insight would've been nice.
APOV says 6 mos that her and Jasper were separated, but in the previous chapter Edward said 6 years...
I'm looking forward to a BPOV and of course EPOV again. You always include so much in theirs.
Author's Response: My bad. I'll go change that now. It's hard to keep track sometimes. Hopefully the next chapter will offer you more insight :)
Reviewer: kidmomx4 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:03 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
An update is always worth the wait! I like, I like.
I'm hoping for something that will make Bella and Alice both happier in the near future! Oh, and Edward, too, of course!
Always waiting and hoping for more.......
Lynn
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Snow
With you so far.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:57 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
Great job.
My only question is about her working in a foster home. I work with abused kids and foster homes just homes (not like an orphange would be). So, I am just kind of confused.
Author's Response: I understand that. I get that's confusing. It's kind of like an orphanage, only not. It is a foster home, but a more generalized one as there are numerous children and adults. It's a mansion. Lots of people. And kids. And a new Bella.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 08:10 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
Everybody is suffering! Nice to hear Carlisle's POV!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Falling on my Knees
Awww...poor Edward! But I totally understand Bella's feelings too. loving the story!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Are We Different
Bella is going to be torn between Edward & Riley, I think!
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:57 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
i really thought nessie was going to be edward's child with the hair color and all but i guess not. i wonder what the meaning of them having the same hair color is then. great chapter. please update soon
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:42 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
I am intrigued by your story. I hope Bella slowly lets the family back in but Edward desearves to suffer more.
Reviewer: foxster70 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:30 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
Really good story so far, look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Rhiannon5 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:11 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
You have me hooked wanting to know more.
Reviewer: froggydee (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:01 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
So glad you're back - chap. was great.
Reviewer: verucasin (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:51 AM · On: Snow
Good chapter hon! Really liking this! =)
Reviewer: crookshanksfriend (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:09 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
Great storyline. You're good at creating a dark atmosphere. Your hints in the chapters (about Bella's past...) keep me interested. On with the next chapter!
Reviewer: SiobhanDeRoiste (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:50 AM · On: We Never Grow Up
have missed this story it's one of my fave's, can't wait to see what happens next.is this story on ff?
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:18 PM · On: We Never Grow Up
update soon!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Bitter
Noooooo.... Although Riley is so good looking; he is the only one I could see bella with. (Never was a Jacob fan).
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
I knew he wasn't mad at her!
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