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Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 03:27 AM · On: Bitter
I can't really feel sorry for Edward he did bring that upon himself after all. Can't wait for more.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: AbIeMzXxX (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Bitter
:D pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue.............
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Bitter
I was wondering what happened to this story! Glad you decided to continue it...really wondering what will happen next!
Reviewer: Chickey (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Bitter
Love love love love love love....
I'm beggin here, please please pppllleeeaaassseee keep going with this fic. It's been so awesome and I'd love to see more of it!!!
The passion in this fic is only beginning and I hope you have the passion to keep going....
Reviewer: McDoogle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Bitter
what did he expect?
I wanna read more,
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Bitter
little love
Reviewer: Bella Frenzy (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Bitter
Ok, I hate u very much bcause after very long waiting this update story, u give this...... I just dont get it......
Ok I am so angry right now, I hope u can explain what u have in ur mind
Author's Response: I know know know know that this is not what people want to see.
But I have a long chapter coming full of stories and I promise you the whole Riley and Bella thing is not what you think.
I don't want to give it all away, and I know I kinda left on a hiatus for a few months, but I am back now!
I will try to post a new one at least once a week.
And I can make you happy.
But you'll have to keep reading!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Bitter
Ouch! That stings! hehehe Poor Edward, but he deserves it, at least for a little while. :)
Reviewer: Liana Kay (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Bitter
I'm glad you're back. Your first couple of chapters really got me hooked....so hurry up and update soon. lol. I'm not sure how I feel about Riley. I know that u can't have E and B meet up and have their HEA after only a couple chapters. Anyway thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Bitter
Fab job!
Please update soon@
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Snow
wow. Love the second hand store bit in the beginning. It's a really nice touch and makes Bella's character seem more real.
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Bitter
OK, so Edward learns his little plan failed on all levels. Good. I'll be anxious to read about more about Riley and Bella. Think Edward will be pretty anxious to find out more about them too.
Reviewer: khawj (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Bitter
What the hell??!!!!!
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:27 PM · On: Bitter
Damn it!! I'm so friggin Happy you were finally able to Post!!
Thanks for Writing!!
Reviewer: CullenHistorian (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Bitter
Sage is back!!!! Woo-hoo. I'm super excited to see an update; I was sort of thinking you had abandoned the story for the remainder of the school year.
I really love that you created some tension in this chapter. It's like a fresher version of New Moon: he came back but she's already got a man, and now he has to win her back. Go Edward! I know this is going to end up a long and kickass story. I can't wait.
Dude, did she actually say "dick shit"? lol
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Bitter
Wow, go Bella! Lol! Edward needs a good yelling. I'm glad she's not letting him back in right away, that she's able to control herself and fight. She needs answers and he needs to listen to her.
I'm glad they're getting to talk though, and I'm as curious as Edward as to how and when and by who she was changed. Obviously it may have something to do with Riley? I'm not sure about her and Riley being together, but oh well, at least she found a friend she can confide in.
I can't wait for the next chapters, and more answers, and I hope they come really fast! Thank you for updating now, too, I'm really happy to read more!
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Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Bitter
*sad face* I honestly thought that Bella was going to just break and want to be with Edward...I know, it's unrealistic considering what happened but still I'm muchly sad :( And trying so very hard not to hate on Riley.
Reviewer: jtaylor1972 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Bitter
WOW! Just simply WOW! That was definitely unexpected but just might make for an interesting love triangle of sorts?
Please tell me however, that Edward and Bella... they will get back together yes? This is a Edward-Bella story right?
I mean, don't get me wrong... Edward was a shit and obviously he deserves to have some big doggy doo dumped all over him a few times... and I definitely hope that it happens...
Hope to read more from you soon!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Bitter
How heartbreaking. Poor Edward. I am happy that Bella hasn't been alone for the past 100 years. But can they really stay away from eachother? THey are two halves of the same whole. Hopefully after they talk, REALLY talk, Bella will follow her heart.
I love this story. Excellent update!
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
Who turned Bella? What she's been doing all this time. And who called her on the phone before Edward kissed her.
Reviewer: Karsha (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
Is there more?? Soon??
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
Oh this is so fun! And what's with Bella's tears? She is truly one of a kind! I love it! And I think it's so sweet that after a hundred years she fownd Charlie's old Sheriff jacket, and she constantly listens to her lullaby.
I find it funny too that seeing her for teh first time since they left, Edward automatically thinks she's going home to her family, not remembering what his previous thoughts were and that she would be over a hundred years old now and probably not alive anymore, not standing on the other side of the street still looking like she's 18. Lol!
So when are you goign to update again? I think they all have some explaining to do. Edward explaining why he left and that eh still loves her, since she still believes he doesn't and his last statement would be extremely confusing to that fact. And Bella explaining what happened, and who changed her. All of them, Bella included, explaining where they've been for the last hundred years.
I also don't think Bella should take Edward back that easliy and accept that he does still love her - as much as their kissing right now would not make that matter anymore, since it's obvious she's giving herself over and she does still love him. (Does that make sence?)
Please, update soon! I want to know what you come up with! Lol!
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Reviewer: ucsdgirl_cali (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
The family!! Then she has to fill them in on how she's a vampire and what she's been up to. Hopefully she has some really cool impressive power and maybe some type of...intimidating history. :D
Reviewer: Hecta (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Snow
I love the image of the Cullens having a snowball fight, so sweet
Reviewer: twihearter (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Ice (EPOV)
Keeep writing....Keep on writing....PLEASE!!!
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